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Creative Work => User Based Stories => Topic started by: Marie Rose on 01 July, 2007, 05:53:30 pm



Title: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Marie Rose on 01 July, 2007, 05:53:30 pm
I finally decided to get off my lazy ass and do it, I'll randomly post a few parts sometime soon


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: I_like_Nonon on 01 July, 2007, 05:57:54 pm
 :D

Is it the one you said I gave you ideas for? Or the other one?


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: i_like_shadow on 01 July, 2007, 06:00:15 pm
The one you gave me ideas for, although I still haven't got a plot yet. It might just be senseless fighting here and there


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: I_like_Nonon on 01 July, 2007, 06:04:52 pm
Meh, it's okay.


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: TBizzle on 01 July, 2007, 06:05:33 pm
Am I gonna be in it?  ???


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Aku on 01 July, 2007, 06:06:47 pm
You were already in it, remember?


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: TBizzle on 01 July, 2007, 06:07:49 pm
...

 ???


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Aku on 01 July, 2007, 06:09:06 pm
The one I posted a very long time ago on the social board?


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: TBizzle on 01 July, 2007, 06:11:26 pm
I don't remember that...


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Aku on 01 July, 2007, 06:12:08 pm
Didn't think you would


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: TBizzle on 01 July, 2007, 06:17:46 pm
I never read any stories during the time period when everyone was posting stories.  :-\


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Aku on 01 July, 2007, 06:19:54 pm
Yeah, it was like a fad at one point  :D


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Marie Rose on 02 July, 2007, 09:14:13 am
Jawo', if you're listening, can you PM me the crowd interview things I did for my last story? I'll be using those first before I start randomly making more


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Masterman on 02 July, 2007, 09:55:51 am
cooll..


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Marie Rose on 03 July, 2007, 08:32:39 am
I know it sucks at the moment because I haven't got much to work with
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Prologue

It shows a small blue room, I am sitting on a chair reading to children. I am wearing a black Ninja outfit

SA2: Now, this will be about a user story-
Random boy: OMG! Another one?
SA2: Yes, another one. This will be set in a random place, from a random city, with random people, and random things going on
Random girl: This sounds awfully random...
SA2: Hey! I'll shoot you in the foot if you donít shut up! Now letís get started
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SA2: Now, one day SA2 entered a contest and won a mansion 
Random boy: Thatís one amazing contest 
SA2: Yeah...soon, SA2 invited many different people to live in the mansion...since he was lonely. Occasionally, in this crazy town, crazy stuff happens...yeah. SA2 brought many people to the mansion the next day

SA2, BlueAnnihilator, Jawoí, Raizor_Blaid, _Koover_, randomguy44, Missing_My_Head, Duprav, TheRealTBizzle and Magic4224 walk into the mansion. It is light orange while the roof is brown

Raizor: Gah! I hate orange
Magic: At least itís not pink
SA2: We gotta get this place fixed up!
Jawoí: Iíll be busy making a lounge here
M_M_H: Iíll be busy...finding my head
TheRealTBizzle: Letís just find one of the rooms to meet later
Raizor: In the meantime, Iíll be looking around 
SA2: Blue, what will you do?
Blue: The great Blue shouldnít need to do anything...Iím gonna make a shelf
SA2: Yeah...you do that...

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Meanwhile in a randomly unknown location ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Many different noobs are sitting round a table. JudgmentAngel0 is in the middle, standing up

JA: Now, letís get down to business. You there noob, remember to bring those tacos tomorrow
Noob: Yes sir

Suddenly, Re4Master543 and Heavens_Reaper burst into the room

HR: MUHAHAHAHAHA!!!
JA: Who are you two? 
Re: Weíre the villains of this story
JA: What? Everyone knows, Iím always the villain in these user stories
HR: Not in this one, now get lost!

RE4 and HR kick JA and the noobs out of the area and take over it. They then walk into a different room in the base


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Marie Rose on 03 July, 2007, 08:33:12 am
Chapter 1 

Eventually the users in the mansion get bored and decide to invite more. SA2, Raizor_Blaid, Duprav are in one room, on a computer. Jawo' is walking through the hallway's, walking past a room where Blue is making a shelf, Jawo' then takes out a Sprite

Jawo': Still busy with that shelf?
Blue: Should be done later
Jawo': Sprite?
Blue: No than-

Jawo' throws Blue the sprite

Jawo': Drink it
Blue: I-
Jawo': NAO!!!

SA2, Raizor_Blaid and Duprav are in one room, _Koover_ walks into the room while they are using a computer

_Koover_: What you guys doing?
Duprav: We're on Gamefaqs
_Koover_: Doing what?
SA2: Inviting more people, let's get six
Duprav: What about the bio's?
SA2: Bio's? Screw the bio's, I got money
Raizor: Why six?
SA2: Why not?
Duprav: Get Yamata
SA2: K, then Killer_Spatula, we need a chef
_Koover_: You should then get sasori1122
SA2: Three more then...flyguy101
Raizor: Who's this Devicho guy?
Duprav: Devicho is a girl
SA2: Girls on the internets? Nonsense
Raizor: Who cares, she's in!
Duprav: What? You c-
Raizor: I said she's in!
Duprav: SA2?
SA2: You heard the man
Duprav: Fine...but I pick the last one. Bloodmage3 then
SA2: We'll do more of his tomorrow...I guess 

Later, Magic and TheRealTBizzle are in a room, throwing a ball to each other while randomguy44 sits down, watching

Magic: So this one time, this guy thought he could KO me, I wasn't having that
TBizzle: What did you do?
Magic: I nuked the son of a-
randomguy44: Whoa! Watch it there

Blue then runs past the room with Jawo' following him, holding a sprite bottle. SA2, Raizor, Duprav and _Koover_ then walk into the room

SA2: K, more are coming
TBizzle: Great, when?
_Koover_: Sometime this afternoon

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Meanwhile, in another random location ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
JudgmentAngel0 and some noobs are walking through a forest and are near the city

JA: Go noobs! We will need supplies! Attack!

Dozens of noobs run off into the city


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Marie Rose on 03 July, 2007, 08:33:36 am
Chapter 2

Sometime later, everyone is in one room, sitting down on random chairs watching the TV. The phone rings and Blue picks it up

Blue: Hello...noobs attacking? They've taken the tacos? My shelf fell down? We'll be there soon
Magic: What's going on?
Blue: My shelf fell down...oh, and the city is being attacked by noobs
SA2: We must destroy this noob menace, who's with me?

Everyone continues to sit down, watching TV

SA2: Who's with me?...I can still kick you guys out
randomguy44: I'm with you!
Jawo': Ok then
M_M_H: I'll come too, I guess
SA2: Blue?
Blue: Those noobs aren't worthy of fighting me
SA2: Magic! We could use your magic
Magic: Oh the irony...alright
SA2: Great, let's go!

All of them march out the room while the rest continue to watch TV

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ In the city ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Vehicals are being tipped over and destroyed by the noobs as they steal alot of food. As one of them is emptying food into a bag it is hit by a fire blast. In another small area, 4 noobs are surrounding a small boy. SA2 and Jawo' stop behind the noobs 

SA2: Let that child alone!
Jawo': You said i-
SA2: Yeah, I know what I said

The four noobs charge at SA2 and Jawo'. Jawo' steps to the side as one attacks and punches it in the stomach. SA2 jumps over one and kicks it in the back of it's head, making it fall to the ground. The third noob charges at Jawo' as he takes out a empty sprite can

Jawo': Obey your thirst!

Jawo' chucks the sprite can at the noob's head, knocking it out. The fourth creeps up from behind and SA2 hits it in the back with two shurikens. In another area, Magic, M_M_H and randomguy are still fighting noobs. 911 drops in and helps fight the noobs. One noob tries to punch randomguy but he ducks and -911- throws a iron banana, which hits the noob and knocks it out. M_M_H knocks one out with his head, Magic knocks another one out with a fire blast, and randomguy roundhouse kicks one then punches it through a window. One noob tries to punch Jawo' but he ducks uppercuts it into the air. 911 then jumps into the air and hits the noob with t3h kn33, knocking it into a building. JudgmentAngel shows up shortly after to see most of the noobs have been defeated

JA: What? No tacos?
M_M_H: Might aswell give up
JA: Forget it, I'll be back eventually

JudgmentAngel clicks his fingers and he vanishes. M_M_H throws his head at one noob who is trying to get up again

SA2: Thanks for the help back there 
911: I'm -911-
M_M_H: Nice to meet you 911
randomguy: How can you see and talk with your head not attached?
M_M_H: I choose not to answer that
SA2: Another job well done, let's get back to the others, and you're welcome to come
-911-: Alright
Randomguy: We'll see you round then

They all run back to the mansion, later Yamata_Demon, Bloodmage3, Killer_Spatula, Devicho, sasori1122 and flyguy101 arrive at the mansion. TheRealTBizzle is running through the hallways and runs past the room Blue is still in

TBizzle: Blue, you coming to see the others?
Blue: They can come to me
TBizzle: Alright

SA2, Magic and M_M_H show the others around. Blue meets up with them later and they continue to walk around

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Back in that base ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Re4Master543 and Heavens_Reaper are in a computer room

Re4: Time to put our plan into action!
HR: Send, the Run?
Re4: Yeah, the Run will do nicely


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: I_like_Nonon on 03 July, 2007, 09:02:25 am
*applause*

Nice so far.


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Masterman on 03 July, 2007, 09:17:09 am
*slides on belly with thumbs-up*


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Marie Rose on 03 July, 2007, 09:21:23 am
I would have improved but I couldn't be bothered


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Jawooooooooooo on 03 July, 2007, 05:04:52 pm
*cant stop smiling while reading your interpretation of me*


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Marie Rose on 03 July, 2007, 05:07:19 pm
*Would have put more effort into the story but can't be bothered*


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Killer_Spatula on 19 July, 2007, 03:24:55 pm
*Is in*
Woot.


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Judgment Angel Zero on 28 July, 2007, 10:42:27 am
At least I snapped my fingers...

But I got no fingersnap explosions...(misses my fingersnap explosions)


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Nintendude on 17 August, 2007, 07:09:17 pm
I demand more!


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: sasori1122 on 03 September, 2007, 12:12:56 pm
Is there more?


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: Marie Rose on 05 September, 2007, 07:38:58 am
I might stop this eventually >.>


Title: Re: My SSBBSB User Story
Post by: mahoney23 on 03 February, 2008, 03:01:41 am
I want to be in it. I could fight people with my wafle iron (it might be rusty from not being used in so long).
Great story though  :D