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Creative Work => User Based Stories => Topic started by: TBizzle on 21 June, 2007, 08:18:34 pm



Title: Comment on my story here.
Post by: TBizzle on 21 June, 2007, 08:18:34 pm
And if you want to be in it, tell me your trademark and/or personality.


Title: Re: Comment on my story here.
Post by: ganonsmentor42 on 21 June, 2007, 08:27:57 pm
I enjoyed it. Can't wait to see who was laughing...


Title: Re: Comment on my story here.
Post by: flamesnake on 21 June, 2007, 08:52:54 pm
Its great and can I be in. My trademark is probably saying Generic random insult or something


Title: Re: Comment on my story here.
Post by: Obsidius on 21 June, 2007, 11:47:42 pm
Yea, the story was great.


Title: Re: Comment on my story here.
Post by: Killer_Spatula on 24 June, 2007, 04:41:50 pm
Space out quotes. Hit enter after someone says a quote. It makes it way easier to read.


Title: Re: Comment on my story here.
Post by: TBizzle on 24 June, 2007, 05:07:32 pm
I didn't think of that until after I posted it...


Title: Re: Comment on my story here.
Post by: Jawooooooooooo on 24 June, 2007, 06:38:01 pm
I agree with K_S, but the story is still good. You make Housecall seem unpredictable for some reason, just how Doctors are in real life. >_> <_< *runs*


Title: Re: Comment on my story here.
Post by: Dusty Starr on 25 June, 2007, 09:56:46 pm
I do not have a trademark, but can I be in the story?


Title: Re: Comment on my story here.
Post by: GAY FOR BRIDGET(HousecallDoc) on 03 July, 2007, 09:30:48 pm
I agree with K_S, but the story is still good. You make Housecall seem unpredictable for some reason, just how Doctors are in real life. >_> <_< *runs*

*stabs Jawo' in the arm with a syringe*
Here a lollipop. Want to mortgage your home?


Title: Re: Comment on my story here.
Post by: just eat it on 08 August, 2007, 03:20:20 am
It's kind of plotless.


Title: Re: Comment on my story here.
Post by: TBizzle on 08 August, 2007, 03:53:35 am
The plot is for him to escape...


Title: Re: Comment on my story here.
Post by: just eat it on 08 August, 2007, 10:26:12 pm
Seems like he's just exploring randomly or something.


Title: Re: Comment on my story here.
Post by: TBizzle on 09 August, 2007, 08:18:32 am
He just got out of the room! He has no idea where he is, so he really can't just go straight for the exit, can he?  :P


Title: Re: Comment on my story here.
Post by: Killer_Spatula on 09 August, 2007, 09:56:44 am
I agree with K_S, but the story is still good. You make Housecall seem unpredictable for some reason, just how Doctors are in real life. >_> <_< *runs*

*stabs Jawo' in the arm with a syringe*
Here a lollipop. Want to mortgage your home?

Of course I don't. How many road signs shall I smack you over the head with, upon playing Mary Had a Little Lamb on keyboard?


Title: Re: Comment on my story here.
Post by: Ahriman on 30 July, 2011, 08:08:33 pm
It is perfect in every way.