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Title: Poetry
Post by: Aqua on 12 September, 2010, 11:10:49 pm
((Hope its ok I put these in here x-x))

Emotions:
Sad thoughts fill my head.

Emotions control me.

My heart skips a beat.

 

I cant let this go on anymore.

I need to think for myself.

I need to learn to control them.

 

Fight the sadness.

Fight the anger.

Fight the jealousy.

 

Smile.

Laugh.

Be happy.

 

All sadness causes is depression.

All depression causes is thoughts.

All thoughts causes is suicide.

 

All anger causes is trouble.

All trouble causes is murder.

All murder causes is Jailtime.

 

All jealousy causes is Drama.

All Drama causes is frustration.

All frustration causes is the loss of a friend.

 

When you smile, others smile.

When you laugh, others laugh.

When your happy, others become happy.


Title: Re: Poetry
Post by: Aqua on 12 September, 2010, 11:11:41 pm
You Are You:

Never change who you are.

Always be who you want to be.

No matter what they say.

 

You are your own being.

Never let one control it.

Stay as yourself.

 

You dont need to change to be perfect.

Your perfect as you are.

 

Whether its your appearance.

Whether its your personality.

Whether its your attitude.

 

You are a great person.

You are beautiful.

You are amazing.

 

Thats why people like you.

Thats why people talk to you.

Thats why peopler listen to you.

 

Because you are you.


Title: Re: Poetry
Post by: Aqua on 12 September, 2010, 11:14:01 pm
Apology:

Im sorry for all the drama

all the pain

all the sadness I caused you.

 

Im sorry for all the feelings

all the emotions

all the trouble I caused you.

 

I let myself get overboard.

Let my emotions control.

When, in all truth and honesty, I should have let my mind control for once.

 

Your like a best friend.

Your a secret crush I once had and still do.

Your like a person I never met.

 

All I want is for things to go back.

For things to be fixed.

For things to be like when we first met.

 

I know that can never happen, though.

I messed up too many times.

I said things I never should have.

 

I hope for us to still be friends.

I hope for things to be a bit fixed.

I hope to not lose you.

 

 

I pray that you will forgive me.

I pray that we can still be close.

I pray that things can be fixed.

 

I promise to control my emotions.

I promise not to overthink.

I promise not to assume things.

 

I promise this all for you.


Title: Re: Poetry
Post by: zeldafan42 on 12 September, 2010, 11:19:42 pm
Awwww, I like them. I can feel the emotion you put into them in every word. They're touching.

That said,
inb4emojokes
>_>


Title: Re: Poetry
Post by: Aqua on 12 September, 2010, 11:22:46 pm
Thank you ^^ I really did put my heart into them.
I write them when Im sad.
Im hoping to write happier ones.
x-x Soon.

*stamps 'emo' on my forehead*


Title: Re: Poetry
Post by: zeldafan42 on 12 September, 2010, 11:31:56 pm
Thank you ^^ I really did put my heart into them.
I write them when Im sad.
Im hoping to write happier ones.
x-x Soon.

*stamps 'emo' on my forehead*

Don't worry dear, I'll make you un-emo with my awesome jiggle physics! *jiggles*


Title: Re: Poetry
Post by: Ƨɒlƚy on 12 September, 2010, 11:33:19 pm
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RHTAT_UPm18


Title: Re: Poetry
Post by: Aqua on 12 September, 2010, 11:36:06 pm
Thank you ^^ I really did put my heart into them.
I write them when Im sad.
Im hoping to write happier ones.
x-x Soon.

*stamps 'emo' on my forehead*

Don't worry dear, I'll make you un-emo with my awesome jiggle physics! *jiggles*
*raises finger* Zf's jiggle attack was unaffected against wild Riccifet!!
Wild Riccifet used tackle! *tackle glomps*

BAD TROLL IS BAD D<


Title: Re: Poetry
Post by: zeldafan42 on 12 September, 2010, 11:39:54 pm
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RHTAT_UPm18

expected/10

Really Salty, is that the best you can come up with?

On a related note, that song makes me hungry for tacos.


Title: Re: Poetry
Post by: Ƨɒlƚy on 12 September, 2010, 11:44:04 pm
No, but it was just so obligatory, I couldn't not post it.

Now if you'll excuse me.

*Activates Barry White sound system*

*Sets up cameras*


Title: Re: Poetry
Post by: Ƨɒlƚy on 12 October, 2010, 12:40:11 am
Mmmm...

What to do, what to do

...

Couplets, of course!

Linear:

I see the world in all it's glory
   I see this world, it is a hole
I see a world's unending story
   I see characters, their hearts dead cold
What do you see when you look outwards?
   Why do you ask? You know my soul
I seek the answers deep inside you
   There's nothing there, no coin, no coal
Then why live, nothing to bind true?
   Instinct demands I exist, is all

Planar:

Tell me of the world
   I will tell you of the void
A lived life's the greatest thrill
   Death stalks us all, demands one coin
One day the gears wind down, stops the whirling dance
   And I'll be there, dancing alone, the blackest romance
To what then will you tend?
   To me, my own, may God defend
And when all then stops at last?
   Pick up the pieces,
   scatter them far,
   upset the gameboard,
   whole world ajar at the feet of he who once was not,
   before power he finally sought from the fire of the heart of none,
   burning all those trillion suns,
   and bathed in the light of a first-found way,
      born again,
      born at last, a brand new day