Ultimate Paradise

Title is a work in progress.


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Prologue
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Chapter 1: Getting transported
Judg: *riding his motorcycle through a busy city*
WHOOOOO! haha! *hes going way past the speed limit, swerving thru traffic* Huh? *a police car turns his siren on and follows* many more cops have tried, buddy! *he floors it, and begins doing wheelies* Haha... he thinks he can keep up with me! like i'l- *judg, not paying attention, runs into a nearby car door, flipping him over* oh CRAP! *just before he hits the pavement, though, a blue light envolopes him, and after it fades, hes no longer there*


Cads: *he walks into a clluttered shop with a lot of high tech machinery, carrying an enourmos bag* Hey willie!
*a big man comes up from behind the counter, covered in oil*
Willie: Hey, Cads! come to make another purchase, eh?
Cads: *he places the bag on the counter* actually, no... im getting out of the business. i want to trade this in...
Willie: Ah, your kidding! alright, fine. but you were my best customer! *willie takes the bag* alright then, just what do you want to trade this in for?

Cads:... *points to a lawnmower* how bout that beauty?  ;D

Willie: haha, you never cease to suprise! *he goes over to the lawn mower and drags it back* now, cash or-
*cads was gone when he turned back around*



DO NOT POST!
im on the wii, and when theres to much text on screen, it gets this weird lag. so chapters will come in multiple posts.

Kakadi: *hes sitting in his apartment, chilling out, when theres a knock at the door* COMING, COMING! *as he gets up, it reveals another black bag on his couch similar to cads* *he opens the door* yea- *another blue light, and then hes gone*

yeah, im not gonna do all of them, for the mystery of backstories, just so you know!


Masterman: *Wearing a chicken suit, he walks into his apartment, a one bedroom one bathroom mess of a hellhole* I HATE my job as mascot at GFC (georgia fried chicken) *he squashes a roach as it scurries by and takes a seat in a dirty armchair next to a small TV.* i need realaxsation! whoo! *just as he turns on the TV, he also gets surrounded in the blue light, and dissapears*


Zeldafan: *in a beautiful mansion, a decendent of a rich family* *She can be seen in the armory, training with a sword*

Her father walks in with a disgusted look on his face*
father: Why must you insist on training with those things like some sort of barbarian?
ZF: so that the next time a punk with a gun tries to steal everything in our mansion we wont sit around like retards watching it happen! *she slices at the cinderblock in front of her, slicing it in half*
Father: How many times must you be told? A sword cannot be fast enough to block a bullet!
ZF: yeah, thats wha- *a blue light envolopes her too, and she dissapears*
Father: What in gods name?!

Just 2 more. its gets alot more interesting once their in the actual place. i just have to build up to it  ;) i'll have 2 chapters today. im gonna work on it more, but feel free to comment now.

Not bad so far...

Gargravarr and david rushed into enemy lines, checking both sides before continuing*
Gar: you ok ammo-wise?
david: no, you?
gar: psh. no.
David: *looks confused* then what the hell are we doing?
Gar: *amised look on his face* getting ready to die.
David: wow, how positive and upbuilding!
*suddenly the enemy emerges in an ambush from a nearby bush*
Gar and david: CRAP! *a bullet was fired and less then an inch from gars head when they both dissapeared*

New chapter in a few hours!

Hooray! I'm involved!

And your a war veteran!

.............. :'(

Masterman, you become more awesome then most, truats me! ;D

Heh, that's gonna be a bit of a letdown for my character... He's a war veteran that gets left with possibly the weakest elemental power... ;)

But you get every weapon available with unlimited ammo. and wind isnt week. hurricanes, tornados, they all cause MASSIVE destruction.

Well, we'll see how it turns out...

Have you already determined everyone's powers?

..........*sniff*

Yeah.

You'll be happy! you get your ass kicked in the first few chapters but then you become the ass kicker! trust me!
oh, and *points to forum topic*

well, that's my job. Getting my ass whipped.....

Dammit! I want to know what powers people get!

I know what elements Zeldafan & ILS are getting, but that's it...

Wait and seeee...

Chapter 2: unfamiliar surroundings

all of the users wake up in a different region of the strange planet their on, confused and scared*

Cads: *rainforest region*ugh... my head...
Kakadi: *snowy mountaintops* Ak! Where am i?!
Sa2: *raigen ruins* what the hell?
Frosted: *desert plains* *wakes up* huh? weird dream... *falls back asleep*
Masterman: *snowy mountaintops* *shivvering* Ugh... hor-r-ribl-le d-a-a-ay... im f-f-reeeee-eez-zing!
Doc: *Raigen Ruins* *calmlu sitting atop a statue, hes assesed 50% of whats going on* hmmm...
judg: *desert plains*WHAT THE HELL?!
Gaffit: *rainforest* *a snake comes up behind him sand bites his ankle* AAAGH! CHRIST! *he falls to the floor, writhing in pain, and he doesnt notice the snake is glowing green* AAAAEAGH!
ermine: *savanna* *is here by accident, but the teleport has made him 5 feet tall, given him earth powers and fangs* *tilts head to side*
Raizor: *argon ruins* hmph... what now?
Bass: *snowy mountaintops* *shivvering* w-w-ha-t the fr-eak?
Zeldafan: *mech fortress* What on earth? where am i? this place is high tech...
Devicho: *savanna* *sleeping* (was in bed when she was teleported)
ILS: *beach*
duprav: *rainforest*
Death_ballad: *mech fortress*
Flamesnake: *in an active volcano* *is a snake with flame powers*
Penguin: *snowy mountains* *penguin with ice powers*
Spacehopper: an alien grasshopper with odd powers*
Arihman: *raigen ruins*
Spatula: *desert*
true: *rainforest*
David and gar: *desert*
pefuskat: *desert*
dmax: *mech fortress*
adol: *savanna*

More to this chapter LATOR!

NO NOT MOUNTAINS!!! I'm afraid of heights!

Hmm... Methinketh David & I are going to come across Judg sometime soon...

*wonders if I should have asked to be included in this story*

Yes you should. its gonna be the bomb!
(if more people would pay attention to it! >_<

Very well...can I be in the story Plz.

NO!!!




_{no, you can.}

I suck so bad......

Shut up, Masterman...

Im going to finish chapter 2 now. chapter 3 will be here later today or tommorow. (i have to move the story into the good parts so you dont lose attention)And you DONT! your so badass! trust Me!!!

what, I do.

Looks good so far.

Keep up the good work!

ooo....I can't wait to kick some ass. Kicking ass in a chicken suit, I think I might be a legend! I be doing all kinds of stuff that has never been done before! And I got a beaver companion. Let's see someone top that with their pretty little "elements"! Ha ha!

All of the users, after getting used to their surroundings, realized  a screen pop up in front of them*
*on the screen, a hooded figure appears*
Heavens_reaper: enjoying your... accomadations? hopefully, yes? well, i can see many are confused, wondering why and where you are here. well, allow me to explain. You have besn transported to raig. a planet quite a few million light years away from your own. raig was a planet far ahead of others. it had great technology, the greatest armies, and the best defenses. but one single astroid knocked it off balance, and, the gravitational pull now lost, sent the other planets spiraling into their sun. the astroid caused raig to lose elemental balance, too. causing horrible natural disasters making each section of raig pretty much uninhabitable. now, 107 years later, its bearable. but by now, all raigens are dead. so, now that we have backstory, let me tell you why YOUR here...

TO BE CONTINUED
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Heh.......Masterman doesn't care. That's me allright!

You have an element.

dangitt........

You guys got lucky today. im gonna post HALF of chap. 3 today. enjoy!

Heavens_reaper: you COULD call this a game... of sorts. in my solar system, there is ONE king. i am that king. but, my life is drawing to its close, and i need a strong person to take my place. i COULD pick from one of my loyal servents, but i figured this would amuse me more. I, using my advanced skills, have endowed you all with elemental powers. some of you also have sub abilities. There are 23 people on Raig. you must kill them off untill there are only 5 left. i will tell you what to do from there. oh, and watch out for my servants. there are 2 of them. theyll be picking off the weaker ones.  heh heh heh...
*the tv goes blank*
Doc: servants?


*the view switches to a VERY bleak, dark looking planet. the aky is red and the clouds are black. there is a sign next to the city. it reads: Hesklla
There is one enourmous, black, deformed castle surrounded by a city, but the city is in ruins. most people living in it are either poor, dying or sick*
*the view switches to the inside of the castle, to the throne room*
*reaper approaches a throne with a figure with another hooded face sitting on it*
Reaper begins to speak......


The rest... TOMMOROW.

Second half...
NOW!

o good im gonna die...im stuck in a room with a main char (ZF) which means i die soon?

Reaper approaches the throne
Reaper: all but a few believed me.
?: Ah, good... good.
Reaper: *grins* as if my life could come to an end.
?: true enough... which few are suspicious?
Reaper: doctorwormx, gargravarr, and raizor...
?: the more powerful ones...
.....send chaos after doc... and demon after the other two.
Reaper: yes my leige...

*5 days have passed, and no one has ventured far from their starting point... theve been familiarizing themselves with their powers, getting the hang of it... all but a few...*
*judg hid behind a cactus and listened to gar and david*
Gar: we'll split up... i'll go east, you go west. we'll meet up in the north...
David: right...
Gar: if anything bad happens, fire your flames into the air like a flare gun, ok?
David: yeah...
Gar: ok, lets go!
*they speed of in two different directions*
*judg follows david stealthily*
-"~in the rainforest~"-
*gaffit is just waking up*
aaah... my head...
*he notices everything around him is dead*
Gaff: ugh.... what happened here?
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next portion in an hour >_>

The mech fortress is HUGE. your in the same REGION, not room.

*joy jumps*

i swear if i die before MM i WILL be mad lol

MM may or may not die >_>

i like this so far...its good, u took mah idea though :,( lol

;)

In the next portion 2 of the weakers die >_>
not you... but theirs deaths are cool.

*coughdoccough*

dose everyone have a element in this?

doc is the strongest out of all of them!
and yeah, EVERYONE has an element.

the strongest is deffinitly mah snorlax puppet!!!

WAIT do i even have mah puppets?

Yar.

good....im useless with out them...so wat mah element?

y thank u!

Ur welcome!

im gonna work on the next section nao...

Meanwhile...


in the desert....
Killer spatula wanders throughout the desert, looking for a way out of the heat*
Ks: ugh... man its hot! im not sure i can take it much longer....
not like my element helps the heat *he makes a fist, punches, and flames flare everywhere*
ks: nothing... at... all... *glances at back* the wings are a cool touch, though... and i gue-
*the ground beneath his feet shifts*
ks: Earthquake?
*a figure bursts from underneath the sand*
Ks: A battler?!
Pefuskat: one intent on winning!
*pefuskat creates a gaping hole beneath spat, causing him to fall in*
ks: *falls in*
pefuskat: too easy. heh.
*turns and starts walking away*
ks: *emerges a second later unexpectedly flapping wings*
*notices bhis feet have talons*
ks: Thats weird... but usefull...
*he charges pefuskat from behind*
Pefuskat: *turns around*
WHAT THE F- *ks perches on his head, and twists his feat, snapping pefuskats neck*
ks: uck? heh heh.

Meawhile:
Snowy mountaintops:
Masterman: o-o-kaa-ay... i-i-v-ve g-got t-to get o-out-ta h-here.....
*looks to the south and sees trees in the distance*
o-o-kay... i-it s-s-ho-uld b-b-b-be w-warmer o-ver t-here...

*he begins his hike down the mountain*
Meanwhile in the tech fortress,.....

Dmax: my powers rock!
*he clones himself, then morph his clones into odd looking puppets*
dmax: cant wait for my first battle!
*hears something nearby*
dmax: *smiles* i might get my chance now....
*walks through a nearby door*
dmax: i dont see anyone...
*ZF can be seen on the roof, using static electricity to keep herself up*
ZF: {thinking} easy prey...

TO BE CONTINUED!

very good :) but yea i summon mah puppet using scrools but ur idead is pretty sweet too lol

seeing how most of you WERE normal civilians that wouldnt work, thats all.

good point...lol

Chapter 4: following orders


MEANWHILE
*raigen ruins*
Doc: *venturing through the ruins*
Arhiman: *hiding behind a pillar* [thinking] he doesnt LOOK so tough... yeah... i could take him!
*just as he's about to leap out and ambush doc, a dark javelin impales him through his head*
*his body slumps to the floor, and the javelin is taken out by a hooded figure*
Chaos: (hooded figure) alright... now i just have to take doc out.... *glances at arhimans body* if only it were as easy as him....
Doc: *hears movement* *he lifts his hand in the air, and lightning strikes it* *the lightning forms an electric sword*
Doc: i know your there. you can come out now.
*chaos steps out*
Chaos: your smarter then i thought... *he draws his scythe* but do you have the brawn to match it?
Doc: wanna find out?
Chaos: that'd be lovely! *charges toward doc, leaps in the air and attempts a dive bomb*
*doc easily jumps out of the way*
Doc: hmmm... your not a contestent, are you?
Chaos: *grins* much smarter then i thought.
Doc: what do you want with me?
Chaos: im just following orders bud.
Doc: to kill me?
Chaos: your smartness dropped a little. *smiles sarcasticcaly*
Doc: heh. very funny...
*the two begin to charge eachother, ready for battle*
 

MEANWHILE:
*desert plains*
*David approaches an oasis*
David: ah finally.... water and shade... *stumbles down into the small pond and drinks wildly*
Judg: *hiding behind a small bush* [thinking] heres my chance! *he leaps out from behind the tree and charges light energy in his hand, and shoots it at david*
David: *without even turning around, he leaps out of the way of the blast*
david: your horrible at being stealthy. i knew you were there the whole time.
Judg: ah yes, but did yiu know that blast works as a boomerang?
David: *swirls around* WHAT?!
*the ball collides into his stomach, sending him flying across the sand*
Judg: interesting yes?
David: *collides head first into the sand* ugh.... [thinking] i cant fight him now! hes weakened me...
TBC

......
*puts that in fighting strategies for cos*
*runs*

HAY! u gotz 2 pey 4 tat!

*pays you...with DEATH!*
*killz j00*

hmm...not bad

I likes it alot.

Thank you, thank you. ive got plot twists ahead so it only gets better.
and what i like is character devolopment. they DO change. friends become enemies, enemies become friends, one goes crazy, betrayels happen, relationships are devoloped.
im really proud of the story to come.

cool.....

*points to ur pic*

i hate u

bring it!

.....cads please say i kill MM in the end/middle

What if MM kills YOU?

all heel would need to be paid, at least let me kill MM or judge or doc...or hell ill even join a team with doc ;)

c'mon din' boy!

stop talking.

shut the hell up punk.

so scary...im lying, wat happened to u being all gangster MM? that seemed like a normal sentence. thats strange coming from u.

Update TOMORROW!

I don't get the question. I'm a Yoshi gangstr!

.....wow....

yeah.....

  {|:[ Afro {|:[

*waits for next installment*

Sorry about this,... but i cant update it untill.... maybe tommorow. im VERY busy, (with schoolwork... and metroid prime 3 ;>_>) but another update DEFINETLY by monday. sorry ;_;

another reason i dont liek the new metroid prime games.....angrydot.....

me either.

i poop on this story, there hasnt been anything new since...u added something new

im updating it right this second! jeez.
Another chapter will be up in the next hour. ive had a busy week, is all. goodness.

CHAPTER 5: The First Battles
in mech fortress:
*ZF falls from the roof and lands behind dmax, shocking him with lightning*
*dmax disintegrates*
ZF: wow... i was expecting at least a SMALL challen- *dmax leaps from behind and grabs ZF's neck, holding a dagger to her throat*
Dmax: im not stupid. i sent a clone to recon, fool.
ZF: And you think IM stupid?
*zf dissapears in his arms*
Dmax: what?
*ten zeldafans appear in front of him*
ZF's: cool trick, eh? clones made of electricity? you can do it with all elements. yours may have better endurance, but mine are stronger ;).heh.....
*ZF dashes at dmax with all 10 clones*
Dmax: interesting... but how will you deal with THIS?!
*dmax summons multiple puppets (crow, etc.) that unleash multiple poisined weapons, decimating ZFs armada*
Dmax: >:J what now?
ZF: THIS!
*a hidden clone appears behind dmax and sends lightning at him, sending him across the room*
Dmax: {thinking} right into my trap...
*the clone, mysteriously, cannot stop firing lightning*
ZF: what the hell? *gets struck by own clones lightning*
Dmax: thats right. *holds up vial* special poison. its my element. i can create all kinds of em. poison. this one overrides an element, causing one to uncontrollably attack.
ZF: *panting* well... this just got interesting....
DO NOT POST!!!

ZF vs Dmax part 2:

*dmax throws multiple poison daggers at ZF*
*ZF jumps up and clings to the roof, and sends lightning into the roof, which flows thru the whole room*
Dmax: CRAP!
*flys across room, but daggers hit ZF*
ZF: but i... dodged them!
Dmax: *on floor* ugh.... not the ones he threw...
*points to clone behind ZF*
Dmax: *grunting* check...mate...
ZF: *straining* no... not yet... *gets up slowly* im not letting you win*
Dmax: you shoudnt move...... the poison will paralyze you even worse if you mo-
*notices ZFs hands glowing*
Dmax: what ? you shouldnt be able to channel that energy in your condition!
ZF: well....  i AM!
*ZF sends highly concentrated lightning energy at dmax, and dmax, weakened from last attack, gets hit*
Dmax: AAGH! *Flies through a window nearby*
ZF: *runs and looks out window, to realise the mech fortress is floating thousands of feet in the sky*
ZF: HAVE FUN! it all ends when you hit the ground!
Dmax: *partially unconciuos* im... gonna be back.... woman.... *falls unconscious*

more on wednesday or thursday!

 :P b

Yay!

DMAX GOT BEASTED!!!!!!!!!!!

WWWWWHHHHHHHAAAAAAAA HHHHHaaaaaaHHHHAAA HAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
roflmao mao rofl lol mao rolol roflmaolol

YOU GOT BEASTED!!!!!!!!

;D el oh el.

..........................................wha ha ha!

Needs more Ermine X_X.

you come in later. but once your in, your around ALOT. your part of the animal trio.
you, flamesnake, and penguin.

 :'( i better be back WOMAN!!!! im not suppose to be a bad guy, o and wtf happened to mah clone that threw kunais? did he just sit and watch!?!?! THAT TRAITOR!!!

*hangs my clone on a tin foil rope*

sorry bout that explosion, dude. My bad.

Wait where am I?
Ooh, I wonder what odd powers are like....

no problem

Where do I come in?

All in good time, dear boy.

*Is busy but will catch up later*

Eez good storee!  ;D

i better live.....OR ELSE i will eat a small cuban child!

*sigh*
>_>
*knows what happens to you*
ots quite poetic, really...

when i make my story ill remember wat u do to me...

You DO live...
and like i said...
well....
i cant say what happens to you...
it involves... GAH!
i cant say. spoilers are forbidden...

well hurry up with teh story  >:(

Tommorow im off from school.
i'll update then.

bout time

WTF happened?!

It appears a mod deleted my last chapter for no reason. im still investigating.

To sum it up, doc beat chaos by a landslide and shot him far away into the distance.

owned

So, can I get a rundown of what just happened? As in moderating, that is.

? wat?

Cads claims his story chapter was deleted, and that you saw it. Did you?

no, i came after it was deleted T_T

I thought you read it.
you said "bout time."

if u look at the date, i said it on the 12th.......u posted to day......


i was responding to u....

Damn... now ive got no witnesses...

And there's nothing in the moderation log, either.

THEN WERE THE HELL DID IT GO??? O_o can stuff just dissapear like that?

=(

Wassa mattah?
Uou come in later...
ive got multiple stories to tell. some just have to wait to come in, is all ;)

Cads vs judg
P1

Cads: BASTARD!
Judg: Yeah yeah... thats what A man named Trejik said before i killed him.
Cads: O_O Mmmgh...
Judg: yes, cower in fear like they all do before i kill them...
*judg raises a gallant, powerful blade to kill cads*
*as he swings down, an odd purple looking sheild surrounds cads and deflects the blade*
Judg: IMPOSSIBLE!
Cads: *hand glows purple, and he punches judg in the stomach*
*odd purple energy transfers from cads to judg, sending him flying*
Cads: Um... *purple energy dissapears* CRAP!
*cads begins to run away, but judg appears in front of him*
Judg: Fancy trick, but ive got better.
*judg uppercuts cads, flies above him, then kicks him back to the ground, sending beams of light down at him*
Cads: *hits the ground, but rolls out of way of beams* ****!
Judg: *flies down to cads, grabs the back of his head, and rams it into his knee*
Cads: *highly concussed and half concious*
Judg: Good... now i can finish you in peice...
*he raises his blade to deliver the finishing blow when all of a sudden the ground shakes and a wave of greeb energy flies towards them, killing trees and caysing massive destruction*
Judg: WHAT THE HE- *gets hit by green energy, and in the chaos cads cant see where he goes*
Cads: ugh... *raises hand and manages to create another sheild before hes hit*

MEANWHILE:

*Frosted looks up from his perch on the ice mountain, and sees the far iff rainforest*
Frosted: Hopefully i dont have to go down there... i like it up-
WHATS THAT?!
*from his high angle he sees a wave of green energy spreading in a circle, destroying everything in a 1 mile radius*
Frosted: *looks, amazed* What is that?!


Another update tomorrow  ;D

A dangerous power

As cads an judg are fighting:
*Gaffit wonders thru the forest i  searh of food*
Gaff: Damn, im starving! Where can i get some food?! Ugh...
*he stumbles upon a berry bush*
AW, AWESOME!
*he begins shoving down berries*
Gaffit: These are awesome!
*gaffit notices his hand glowing green*
Gaffit: hmm? *he puts his hands close to his face, and feels heat*
gaffit: what on earth? my element, perhaps? no... no element is green...
*glows brighter and brighter*
Gaffit: Whats all this then?
*heat sets bush on fire*
Gaffit: HOLY HELL! *falls backwards*
Gaffit: OOF! A fire?! i didnt even do anything!
*the glow spreads up his arms to his chest*
Gaffit: Woah! stop stop stop! Crap! i gotta find a way to stop this!
*plants around him begin to shrivelband die*
Gaffit: What is going on?!
*glow spreads all over his body*
Gaffit: Now I feel funny... urg! *vomits*
*Glow becomes brighter*
Gaffit: Ah! that... hurts!
*feet raise avove the ground and he begins to hover up high*
Gaffit: AAAAAAAAAGH!
*gliw becomes blinding bright, making gaffit look like a green light*
Gaffit: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGHHH!!!
*suddenly the green glow shoots off his body in an enourmas wave, creating a huge crater and destroying everything in a 1 mile radius*
*gaffit falls into the center, unconcious*

MEANWHILE:
*spatula reaches the savanna from the desert*
KS: nice change of scenery and WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?!
*KS looks into the sky to see a meteor hurtling to the planet*
KS: What in gods name...?

its prolly just aids gaffit, nothing to worry bout

Update tommorow!

*in the rainforest*
*true wakes up, in an odd mech suit*

True: What the- *a recorded message from reaper appears on the screen*
Reaper: Due to certain circumstances, you were injured badly on the teleport here. i had to put you in a raigen mech suit to keep you alive. It'll probably only help you. *recording ends*
*after a half hoyr of trying to remove the suit, he gives up, and notices the meteor falling to the planet*
True: Damn! its heading straight for me! *begins to run in opposite direction*

*on a beach*
*ILS is walking along the coast, gazing at the meteor, which is luckily very far away*
ILS: Hmmm... It appears the inhabitants of the rainforest are quite the unlucky ones...
*back in the rainforest*
*gaffit is passed out right where the meteor is going to land*
*in the snowy mountaintops*
*Chaos is telekinetly talking to reaper*
Chaos: *wakes up in mountaintops after the fibht ans sees meteor* The gamma radioactive one sucked in a vast amount of enetgy around him, and he created a vacuum, pulling in a nearby meteor...
Reaper: So? things like these are bound to happen...
Chaos: Well... The hopper is on it...

Reaper: *begins to laugh* thats more of an interesting twist then a problem!

Chaos:  :-\ if you say so sir.....

u need to make them longer....

When you type to much the wii internet gets this weird lag  :-\


BUT once iget the chance to post on a normal PC i'll make 5 updates, all INSANELY long.

*gaffit wakes up in a cave somewhere*
Gaffit: ugh... where... where am i?

*the meteor impacts, creating a big crater but not doing much REAL damage*
Evilspacehopper, whose appearence is a grass hopper from space, crawls out of crater*
ESH: Heheheh... Time to die....

SASORI.
*the scene cuts to the beach, where ILS is lying, looking at the ocean*
ILS: it pains me to say, but... i think i'll have to move soon... *sighs* oh well... im positive i could fight it out...

*the scene cuts to K_S, who is standing over the body of another user. (who will remain nameless XD)
KS: Weakling... *he begins to walk foward, when gar appears from behind a nearby tree*
Gar: Weaklings? maybe you should try me on for size.

KS: Heh... They all thoughtthey were special... that didnt stop their deaths, thou- *KS gets blown off his feet by wind, then punched in the stomach*

*the scene cuts to Judg, who has been blown into raigen ruins*
Judg: Ugh... my head... *judg stands up and sees doc*
Judg: Hmmm... *hides behind pillar* easy prey...
*judg rushes doc out of nowhere, and attempts to kick him in the face*
*doc easily grabs his foot and flings him into a nearby tree*
Doc: Hmph. *begins to walk away, and judg fire light ball at him*
*doc swirls around, grabs light, absorbs it, and makes a hand sign*
*odd javelins form around judg, and peirce him in multiple places*
(not enough to kill him)
Judg: ugh... *devastated at his first defeat, he passes out*
More tommorow... im tired x_x

Hey Im in it

Lol yeah. Im going to a friends house next weekend.

NORMAL PC! I'll update ALOT, AND I MEAN ALOT, then.

Ok, im updating tommorow, but im going to focus on people that i havent done. There are TWO storylines, that eventually intertwine.

Storyline 1: Includes me, gaffit, doc, judg, kakadi, K_S, gar, david, and devicho.

Storyline 2: Includes dmax, ZF, ermine, hopper, flamesnake, penguin, ILS, bass, arhiman, pefuskat, (They come back)

and others i cant say due to SPOILER.Z

 :'(

D'OH!
I CANT BELIEVE IT!

SORRY, SORRY! I FORGOT PEOPLE!

MM, your in storyline 2, and frosteds in storyline 1.

I found a way to update...!


New (Much longer) Updates at LEAST 1 time every 2 weeks!

I PROMISE!

Bass, after traviling a long way, came across ahrimabs body.

Bass: Hmmm... I COULD try it. But wouldn't that be like... P.aying god? Plants and aninals are one thing but... a PERSON? And how did he die anyways? Theres just a big hole in his head...
*She sighs*
Bass: Fine. I couls use the manpower after that last incident.
*Her hands begin to glow, and she puts them on arhiman*
*Closing her eyes, the light seeps into arhimans body, his wound closes, and he slowly opens his eyes*
*He jerks up, screams, and punches bass in the face*
Bass: *Stunned, she punches back* FOOL! IM THE ONE THAT BROUGHT YOU BACK!
Arhiman: Brought... Brought me back? *He suddenly remembers, and the scene flashbacks*
*The spear runs into his head, but hes still alive. he falls to the floor, alive. But when the spear was removed he dies*

Arhiman: I was speared...

Bass: I was wondering how you died. *She gets up* Dont die again. That trick only works once.
*She walked away, arhiman following*


DO NOT POST.

*Ermine is dashing towards a volcanoe in the forest*
*He finally reaches the base, and emits a shrill squeeling sound*
*Flamesnake comes creeping out*
*Telapathic conversation*
Flame: What?

Ermine: Didn't you hear? Were free of that zoo!

Flame: Is that all? I was taking a nap -_-

Ermine: No. We can also control stuff!

Flame: I know that to -_-

Ermine: Buy we have to use those powers to fught people, so we can go to earth, our NATURAL planet.

Flame: Really? Cuz i wanna rule hesklla.

Ermine: PERFECT! YOU win this thhng, and penguin and me go back to earth... just not to the zoo >_<

Flame: Where is penguin, anyway?

Ermine: Probably in those mountains...

Flame: I am NOT going in that ice deathtrap O_o

Ermine: Thats fine... wait in thr jungle, and i'll go and get him, ok?

Flame: Sure.

DO NOT POST.

*Cut to mastetman, whos reached the bottom of the mountain*
MM: THANK GOD! *Realizes hes still in the suit* Oh... >_> *Pulls suit of*

Better.

*Begins walking towards the forest entrance*

Cut to ZF

*ZF is standing at the window*
ZF: How am i gonna get out of here? *Sighs*

ZF: maybe theres a teleporter or sonething... *She walks through a nearby doorwzy, to see Blue lying on a bench in a small room*

DO NOT POST.



But i said dont post ;~;

Yes, you've appeared. In the next section, which im going to post RIGHT NOW, you pwn K_S

*K_S, stunned, falls to his knees and coughs*
Gar: Pathetic. *Kicks him in the face, onto his back*
*K_S groans*
Gar: Dont you have ANY skill? I mean, this is a competition. You have to be aggresive. Like this.
*Uses a gust of wind to shove him to his feet, but punches gim back down*
K_S: [thinking]Dont be his punching bag... Show him what your made of...!
*K_S, setting his fist on fire, leaps up, and punches gar*
*Gar grabs his fist, blows the flames out, twists his arm 180, and kicks his stomach, dislocating and breaking his arm*
*Gar smiles*
Gar: So you DO have some spunk...
*K_S, using his other arm, blows a pillar of flame at him*
*A big gust of wind puts it out before it gets close*
Gar: Try harder >:J
*Punches him in the stomach, sending him flying backwards into a tree*
K_S: AGH! [thinking]MY ARM! Its a big hinderance... It just causes me pain and blocks my proccess... *Glances at arm* O_O *Its twisted all the way around, and the bone halfway through is snapped in half, peircing the skin*
K_S: Its useless... that'll never heal... FINE!
Gar: Hmm? -_^ what is he thinking...?

*K_S grabs his broken arm and puts the shoulder in his mouth*
Gar: HE CANT!

*K_S Bites down hard*

Gar: HE WOULDNT!!! O_O

*K_S closes his eyes tight, takes a breath, and...*
SSSSSSSSSSSCHRIT! *A peircing ripping sound rings out*
Gar: NO ****ING WAY!!

*K_S tosses his arm to the floor*
I'll post more of that fight once i get some comments.

Cads... Am I a baddie?

...

At first... Yes. You stop being evil later.

Nice...

*is dead*

hmmm...nice addition

Wednesday is when im going to reveal how you LIVE, dmax >_>

wtf was my clone doing any ways? standing there! wat a douche!

Your clones devolope... They get strongah!

mastetman? Who's that?

*Sigh*

dam straight!

Ive got the whole fight planned.


EXTREMELY EPIC #1: Killer_Spatula VS Garagravar:

PART 1/8

*K_S tossed his arm to the floor and grinned*
K_S: >:J Aggressive?
*Gar, suprised at his violent display of willpower, stood stunned, silent.*
K_S: YOU WANT AGGRESIVE?!
*An enourmas flame sword burst from his remaining hand*
K_S: THIS AGGRESSIVE ENOUGH?!
*K_S dissapeared from where he was standing*
Gar: Such speed...!
*KS appeared in front of him and slashed wildly with his sword, followed by a spin attack*
*Gar burst into flames and was sent flying across the savanna*
Gar: ****!
*He put out the flames with wind, and landed on his feet*
*Gar shot a compressed air shot at spat, but he just jumped high in the air to dodge*
Gar: When did he get so strong?!
*Spat dive bombed from the sky, sword first, straight at gar, and gar shot another air ball at him*
*The spat that flew at him, after being hit by the ball, bursts into flames and dissapates quickly*
Gar: A clone?!
*Spat appears behind him, and grabs gar by his neck*
Gar: !
*Spat shoves gars face into the dirt, and then, sliding his face through the dirt, rams the top of his head into a tree*
Gar: UGH... THATS IT!
*An air ball ritating at high speeds forms around gar, tearing up spats remaining arm*
Spat: AGGH!
*Spat leaps backwards*
Gar: Now its getting interesting....

DO NOT POST

*Spat, beginning to lose alot of blood, faljs to the floor*
Gar: [panting] Good... Now to finish you off...!
*Gar walks close to Spat, forms a rotating air ball around his fist, and begins to send his fist flying at Spats head*
Spat: [thinking]NO!
*An arm of flames shoots from the hole where his normal arm used to be, and he jerks it upward, uppercutting gar high into the air*
*Soat flies into the air after him, grabs him with the flame hand, and gar is immediatley consumed in flames*
*Spat swings him around in a circle, and releases him after gaining enough momemtum.*
*Gar puts out the flames again, but crash lands to the floor*
*Spat looks at the hole with the flame arm, and sees the wounded flesh burning up, and he winces*
Spat: Dont think about it...
*He doesnt see gars spear of air coming, and it shoots straight through his stomach*

You can comnent.
In about 2 hours, i'll be resuming the fight.

=P

Once you get penguin your in MUCH more.
You 3 become a team.

=P

*Looks at story*
Matter if fact, your o e of the few people that live.

Im updating RIGHT NOW, so bear with me. This fight gets intense, so it'll take a little while.

^_^ Yay! I like living!

*KS looks down at the whole in his stomach, stunned.*
Gar: You shouldnt have taken your eyes offa me...

KS: [thinking]That thing peirced my internal organs...
Crap...
*Spat winces, and pushes the spear out*
AGGH!
*His screams tear through the air*
*Gar realizes something dropped out of his pocket, so he goes to pick it up*
Spat: *drops to the ground on his knees, and notices the paper drop*
*Gar picks up the paper, which has a list of names and dates*
Spat, looking closely, sees his brother is on the list, and his eyes widen. He stands up*
Spat: Whats your name?!
Gar: Why do you want to know? Your seconds away from dying, and it doesnt concern you. *He puts the paper back in his pocket*
Spat: [eyes glowing red]Whats... Your name?!
Gar: *Sigh* If you must know, Its Gragravarr. Gar for short.
Spat: *Looks at his army uniform* Whats your job in the army?
Gar: Whats with your questions?
Spat: My brothers name was on that list...
Gar: REALLY? *Begins laughing* OH, JUST PRECIOUS! I was supposed to take you out a month from now! You've madeit easy for me!
*Spat, realizing his assumption was right, fills up with rage*
Spat: A highly trained professional assasin for M.F.H.B.D.
Gar: *Winks* Nice guess.
Spat: You killed him because he was in the way of a rival company... That company hired YOU, you killed him, and put him in your little book like hes some sort of animal!
Gar: *laughing* Yup.

*Before gar knew it, Spat had him by the neck, pile driving him into an enourmas wall of flame*

Im posting more NOW.

*Spats nails dug into gars neck, as he swirled him around like a baton, keeping the flames on him burning hot*
*Gar winces, grabs spats hand, and cut it up even more with wind*
*Ignoring the pain, spat grows out another flame arm, and punches gar hundreds of feet away*
*Gar skids along the floor for a while, and finally stops when he hits a tree*
Gar: *Grimaces* *God almighty... egh....
*Sat is soon above him, and slashes downward with a flamesword*
*Gar rolls to the side, gets up, and begins to run*
Gar: I need to recover!
*Spat flies high into the air, and small circle of flame appears next to him*
*Soon hundreds more form, and flie at hundreds of mph sttaight at gar, one after the other*
*Gar glances back andsees them and begins side stepping, backflipping, leaping, and deflecting the dangerous blade like rings*
*Spat flies down, riding a skateboard shaped flame*
Gar: CRAP!
*He jumps off the "flameboard" and leaps at gar, but the flameboard continues going towards him to.*
*Gar jumps to avoind the flames, but runs straight into spat.*
*Spat perches onto his head with his talons, and tries snappibg his neck, but gar resists*
*Spat, unable to snap it, instead tilts to the side and smashes gar on multiple rocks and trees*
*Gar slashes at spat with INTENSE winds, cutting spat up badly, but he ignores it, and continues ramming gar into things*
*Gar manages to pry his talon loose, and drops to the floor, bruised and battered*

More in an hour. My hand is tired XD

Tommorow im going on an update bananza. expect alot of new informatio. The story explodes over the next few chapoters. Nothing but twists and turns from here on!

*K_S soars high in the air, before dive bombing straight at gar, who is pretty beaten up*
Gar: ****!!!
*gar begins running away from the dive bomb, but spat is took quick, and he manages to grab both of gars shoulders with his talons*
*gar is ready for this kind of attack this time, and with the little energy he has left, he creates and extremely powerful earth spear, and jams it straight up from spats chin up through the top of his skull*


MEANWHILE: Reaper approaches the mysterious figure on the throne*
Reaper: Right then, one has been activated.
???: Bring it up on the main screen...
Reaper: Yes sir.
*A big screen emerges from the floor, iewing the fight between spat and gar*
???: which one has been activated?
Reaper: *points to spat on the screen*
???: A fire element? The wind one is in trouble...

BACK TO THE FIGHT:
*spat drops to the floor, lifeless*
Gar: *panting, he drops to the floor, exhausted* Ugh... I think my legs are broken... *he tries to get up, but fails, and, screaming in pain, he falls back down*
Gar: Its no use... i'll have to wait here for a while...
*He doesnt notice the tip of spats fingers begin to glow*
*One of the glowing spots on the tip of his finger shoots from his finger to the hole in his head, and the wound instantly closes, and hes revived*
*Spat, behind gar, slowly rises up*
*The 2nd glowing spot shoots into the ground, and spat feels an enourmas surge of power*
Gar: *urns around, and his face fills with suprise and fear as he notices spat standing*AH, CMON!!!!
*The ground beneath gar shifts, and he feels heat coming ftom a small crack*
Gar: O_O NO WAY!!!
*Surrounding his broken legs with wind, hes able to move them with wind, despite the pain*
*he flies away from the spot he was standing at, just as a small volcanoe emerges, spewing small fire balls and lava*
*about 7 more appear on  te feild, covering the entire savanna in a sea of flames. if gar drops from his position in the air, he'll die.*
Gar: [thinking] how long can i keep this up? I barely have enough energy to keep in the air!!!
Spat: *Eyes glow red again, as the 3rd glowing ball shoots into the sky*
*Soon, balls of fire can be seen falling from the sky*
Gar: O_O THAT-
*Hes cut of as a ball of fire engulfs him, covering him with horrible burns and, ultimatly, killing him*
Spat: *Laughs as he watcdhes gar struggle his last moments of life*

MEANWHILE: *eaper is watching the whole thing with the mysterious figure*
Reaper: Oh boy...
???: *chuckles* Things just got a whole lot better....

BACK ON THE BATTLEFIELD:
*The last of the balls of fire lands into the sea of fire. the whole battlefield is comepletely destroyed, with the fire covering the whole savanna. spat is in teh middle of all the chaos*

More later >_>

...

...Okay then.

>_> Your not really dead. That wasnt even you >_>
*coughclonecough*

Ah...

I wouldnt normally tell, but you seemed pretty down that your character was "Dead."

I wasn't down. It just seemed pretty sudden.

It was a pretty cool death, anyway.

Thank you 8)
People DO die, and in normally dramatic fashions, but you tie into the main storyline, so i cant be so quick to kill you.

Oh, and if your confused about the glowing tips, or anything else you read thats not explained, they ALLL get explained eventually. nothing remains un explained, so just sit tight and wait for all the answers.

*Spat, satisfied at his victory, turns around, only to see gar facing him*
*before he knew it, gars fist rammed into his face, followed by extremely fast winds, slashing him at multiple points in his body*
Gar: *Pulls a small hand gun out of his pocket he had in the military*
*Gar aims it at spat*
FIRE!
*The bullet is engulfed in flames before it hits spat*
Gar: *fires off more and more bullets, all of which are disintegrated before they hit spat*
Gar: damnit!
*Spat appears in front of him, and spears him through the head with a flame sword, the same way gar had done to him*
*Gar slowly fell into he sea of flames*
Spat: *He begins to calm down, and his power lessens. but just before hes out of his "Crazy" state, he notices the sea of lava and fire beneath him shift.*
Spat: Huh?
*Suddenly, a huge opening appears. gar uses his wind to create a huge circle around him. his eyes are glowing white*

MEANWHILE:
Reaper: I thought you werent going to give them the limit breakers... at least not ALL OF THEM...
???: At first i wasnt... but if were going to do this we might as well make it fun to watch.
Reaper: I suppose... but what if they breach into heskla?
???: Huh? They dont even know were on the same planet as them. Plus, our barrier is near the mountains. theyre all the way by the savanna.
Reaper: That doesnt mean someone by the mountains cant breach our barrier. The only thing keeping that thing up is the illusion it provides... its pretty weak. If someone activates their limit breaker by it, the barrier will go down...
???: Stop your worrying, reaper. Thats not going to happen.

BACK TO THE FIGHT:
*gar, using the advanced powers spat used, creates a reverse whirwild, shooting out in a spiraling motion at near light speeds, but instead of sucking, it blows*
Spat: *The fourth glowing tip shoots into the air again, and an entire asteroid barrels toward raigen. (About the size of a small moon)
*The whirwilnd and the asteroid clash. The asteroid slowly gets worn down, as the whirlwind is engulfed in flames. (like a flame tornado)*
*They both try to hold on to their attack, but both the whirlwind and the asteroid explode at the same time, sending a wave of flame and earth flying in all directions. Spat and gar, both extremely injured and near death, are shot backward a couple hundred feet*
*Gar, half concious, creates an air bubble around him as he hits the flames, protecting him. spat disperses the flames where he lands*
*They both fall unconcious*

*A Hooded figure approaches Raizor*
Demon: Boss isnt happy with your recent actions...
Raizor: I wanted in on this game. I havent had frsh blood in a while.
Demon: You disobeyed direct orders...
Raizor: So he sent his own personal little hit man, eh?
Demon: Sorry...
*Demon raises a small spear, and tosses it*
*Raizor dissapears from where hes standing, and appears right in front of demon*
Raizor: Im the one thats sorry, old friend...
*Raizor places both his hands on seperate sides of his face, and twists his head 180, then twists it back into place*
Raizor: Sasori knows im out of his league... and he wouldnt send him to kill me for such a small disobeyance... whats going on here?
*Raizor turns around, facing the west, towards the raigen ruins*
Raizor: The barrior has been moved...! How will i get back? Unless... DAMNIT!



Just a little information for the story.

*far away from gar and spat, on the far reaches of the savanna, adol was making a mad dash away from the lava and flames that had cuased so much chaos behind him*
Adol: [panting] crap crap crap! That was a close one!
*He continued running and running. soon the grass beneath his feet shifted to sand. and the flames that once almost consumed him were nothing but a red line on the horizon*
Adol: *Looks at his surroundings*
Adol: Oh, after those flames i was hoping to ened up somewhere cool... not the desert!!!
*adol continued walking until he came upon someone sleeping*
Adol: -_^ huh? Hey. hey, you.
Frosted: *shifts a bit, and continues sleeping*
Adol: -_- *kicks*
Frosted: WOAH! *Scrambles to his feet* HEY! What was that for?!
Adol: You wouldnt wake up...
Frosted: Didnt mean you had to kick me... But oh well. It didnt hurt that much anyways.... So... are you one of those serious competeters?
Adol: I wouldnt think of myself as one of those, no...
Frosted: *glances in the direction that adol came from* Whered all that smoke come from?
Adol: 2 people fighting... it got pretty intense.
Frosted: Were you fighting to?
Adol: No way... i think those 2 were out of my league. They were going crazy!
Frosted: Huh... I havent fought since i got here...
Adol: Me neither... i try to avoid people...
Frosted: Yeah... Well, im boiling up in this heat! Lets try and see if we can get out of this desert!
Adol: Sure.

MEANWHILE:
*kakadi is trudging down the mountains, toward the forest region*
Kakadi: *hears some snow shift behind him, and swirls around, eyes wide open*
Kakadi: Oh... its just a penguin... a big penguin...
Kakadi: *looks at the penguin, which is about 5 feet tall* I doubt it wants to hurt me... Good. I dont have an element to defend myself with.
*about 2 hours later, he reaches the base of the mountain, and looks about a mile in front him and sees the edge of the forest*
Kakadi: *begins walking* That forest looks better then where i am now...

MEANWHILE:

*devicho, being dragged by vines through the dirt underground, struggles to break free*
Devicho: UGH! Cmon, cmon!
*after pulling away doesnt work, she gets mad*
Devicho: SCREW THIS* *flames coming from her arms shoot up the vines, and they let go of her*
Devicho: *scrambles up through the dirt and bursts through the surface. bit by bit, she makes her way out from underground.*
Devicho: What WAS that...?

=P

>:(

*Dmax awakes on an enourmas mountain of clones, about a mile high, which he had used to cushoun the fall**
Dmax: Ugh... *Looks down the mountain of clones* O_O Holy crap...!
Dmax: *Tries to get up, but feels a sharp pain in his chest, and falls back down* Definatly broke something... but at least im still alive!
*one by one, the clones dissapear, slowly lowering him to the ground*
*Stares up at the mech fortress, towering high in the sky*
Dmax: Wow... Ive got to get back up there... that ****'ll pay!

MEANWHILE:
*Ermine, deep in the snowy mountains, approaches penguin*
Ermine: Ok, i found snake. We just need you now. willing to come off of this mountain?
Penguin: Eh, why not? I want to get off of this planet anyways... it gives me the creeps.
*They begin decending down the mountain, back to the volcanoe*

MEANWHILE:
*SA2 is training in the raigen ruins (His element is metal. he can create and manipulate it to his liking) when he notices a small cave*
SA2: Hmmm... Looks interesting... *walks into the cave*
*On a small pedastal, a ring with a skull and 2 crossbones in the center is lying*
SA2: *Looks at the writings (Which are in another language) below the ring*
SA2: Just a bunch of gibberish... though this may have some value... *Takes the ring off and places it on his finger*
*immediatley the ring flashes, and sticks to his finger permanently*
SA2: O_O Uh oh.... maybe its nothing...
*walks out of the cave, to see doc walking away from the ruins*
SA2: *Darts back into the cave* I dont want to fight... i dont think im quite ready...

so im not dead eh....very nice...

I already told you you dont die right now >_>

Did you even read all of the updates? Its quite epic, really.

 ;D

to lazy

Boy, did you miss some crazy ****.

u sound kinda braggy right now

8) Oh i am bragging. I am.

*Bass was walking along in the desert wiith pefuskat, just exploring for dead bodies she could use*
Arhiman: So, whats your element?
Bass: I dont have one. I rely on those of the ones i resurect. Your basically my battle puppet.
Ahriman: I dont like the sound of battle puppet...
Bass: Get used to it. I could kill you at ANY second. Your my puupet. Be grateful i even brought you back to life.
Ahriman: *looks down* Yeah...
*Bass continues walking, and she sees the battle torn savanna. All oif the lava has gone by then, but the sdavanna is a black wasteland. int he middle of it all, she spots TWO bodies*
Bass: Ha! Its my lucky day. *She begins to jog towards the body, followed by ahriman*

*Gar wakes up, and groans as he sits up*
Gar: Agh... Alot is definetly broken here... *Glances towards Spat, who is almost dead, thanks to  the loss of blood coming from the hole left behind from when he ripped his arm off*
*Gar inches towards his, and places his hand on his neck. He feels his heart beating, BARELY. Slowly, the heartbeat stops*
Gar: Dead. He killed himself... *hears something*
*Gar swirls around to see bass, stunned that hes alive with his injuries, standing there*
Gar: Woah! Listen, i dont want to fight! Im in no condition to-
Bass: Im not here for you...
*Bass walks over to spat and places her hand on his wound*"*His arm slowly grows back, and all of his injuries dissapear*"*His eyes snap open, and he shoots up into a sitting position*
Bass: Ahriman, explain to him what just happened.
*Ahriman sits next to the stunned spat and explains*
*Bass taps gars chest, and mosat of his extreme injuries dissapear*
Bass: I can only do that once until you die. So dont screw yourself up again. Be grateful.
Gar: Why did you...?
Bass: I felt like it. *she winks*
Gar: *watches the 3 of them walk off* Odd....

???? hmm? Im confused.....

Maybe you should read the whole thing -___-

I did......ES STUPIDO!!!

Well... What dont you understand?

......the part where Dmax got his ass whooped. I don't understand how you could get such a beating......

>_>

what? I don't..... :-\

Doc: he has a grudge against Dmax IMO...
*hasn't read it*

who me?

cads didnt think mah fight through MM... but yeah...

You WILL fight masterman.

who fights me? Oh damn......im gonna get my ass kicked. watch.
An ass-kicking in a chicken suit....how more embarrising can it get... :'(

ok...

*Sigh*
How many times do i have to tell you...

remember back in the ole' COS when you were that possesed demon thing and you killed me? I remember the exact words. "masterman, I'll get you good one day....i'll haunt you....FOREVER!!!"

I couldn't go to sleep that night! And now......this is where the haunting begins....
MASTERMAN IS SCARED!!!

IM SCARED!!!!

*Raizor wallks throughout th rainforest, looking for someone*
Raizor: Damnit, where the hell is he?
*Raizor walks through a wide bush, into small open clearing, 911 sitting down in the middle, eating fruit*
Raizor: Where the hell have you been? Ive been looking all over for you.
911: *Turns around, still sitting*
911: Well hey there. Ive been all over the place. Its fun watching these fools kill eachother for no reason that will benefit them.
Raizor: Huh? Youve seen them fight?
911: Yeah. I saw this one battle... Air VS Fire. they both used their limit breakers.
Raizor: Damn... I havent seen anything.
911: The fights are all over the place, you know. Theyre kinda hard to miss.
Raizor: Whatever. This isnt what i came here to talk about.
911: Serious buissiness? [LULZ REFERNCE]
Raizor: Yeah. Sasori sent an assasin to kill me under false pretenses.
911: Huh?
Raizor: He sent demon to kill me.
911: That doesnt sound like sasori at all. He knows demon wouldnt sstand a chance against you. Now wat are these false pretenses?
Raizor: Reading demons mind was pretty easy. He was in a weak mental state. He thinks im a contestant supsicious of what sasori is REALLY up to.
911: *Sigh* I figured... though i dont why hed send such a weak man to kill you... You broke the rules, yes, but the most youd get is a few months in Choronzons abyss [LULZ REFERENCE]
Raizor: Exactly my thoughts. SO the real question is, why does sas want me dead?
911: And why would he send such a weak man to kill you?
Raizor: Exactly. Your lucky. You were SENT here to monitor these fools. Im apparently getting killed for being here.
911: *Chuckles and stands up*
911: *Yawns* Well, im tired of this disussion. im feeling strong energy coming from the west. Care to join me watch whats going?
Raizor: Sure. I havent seen any action.
*The 2 walk off together*

*Chuckles*
Im not going to do anything to you in the story, masterman.

......is still pessimistic.

*Realizes you forgot asteriks*

*Trejik stood in front of 3 Random Users (RU. Fodder >_>)*
RU1: Hey you guys, looks like some easy prey...
RU2: lets make this quick. Im tired.
RU3: I cant wait to see what his head looks like on a stake!
RU2: *Looks at RU3* Ugh... Sicko...

*Trejik grins and puts his hands behind his head*
Trejik: I can assure you that none of you will lay one finger on me.

RU1: O RLY? [LULZ REFERENCE]
RU2: *Rolls his eyes*
RU3: We'll see if you say that while i carve the skin off you face!

*RU3, letting his insanity get the best of him,  charges towards trejik, fist first*
Trejik: *As RU3 punches forward, he sidesteps with incredible speed and hits RU3 square in his side*
RU3: ACK! *Coughs a little blood*

RU2: I told him not to underestimate an opponent....

*RU3 is sent flying into a tree, and is immediatley knocked unconcious*

*RU1  leaps into the air and rains sharp ice daggers onto trejik*
*Trejik, displaying the same speed as before, effortlessly slides around and inbetween the daggers*
*RU1 lands, and dashes towards trejik holding an ice kunai*
*Trejik easily slides around his attack, and positons himself behind RU1*
Trejik: This'll only hurt a little...
*Trejik puts his foot on RU1's back, and grabs both of his arms, pulling them back (A great naruto move >_>)*
Trejik: Ready?
RU1: L- let go!
*Trejik rips the arms of of RU1 easily, and kicks whats left of him far across the floor*
*When RU1 stops skidding across the floor, an earth spike shoots out of the ground and finishes him off*
RU2: *Yawning, he looks at the bodies of his 2 comrades*
RU2: Pfft. Im not wasting my life on some foolish squabble.
*RU2 walks away*
Trejik: Smart of him. *Hears RU3 groan*
Trejik: *Walking towards RU3* Well well well, i guess youre all thats left huh?
RU3: *Scrambles against the tree*
 W- WAIT! STOP!
Trejik: Hmm?

RU3: MERCY!
Trejik: Hmmmm... If i ad asked for mercy while you were ":Carving the skin off my face" im pretty sure you would have just laughed...
RU3: NO! No, PLEASE!
*RU3's screams echoe across the rainforest as Trejik finishes him

what? That's not a forbidden word.

...

No, i mean you should have said
*Is still pessimistic* when you said "is still pessimistic" with no asteriks on either side.

>_>

oh my god! GRAMMATICAL ERROR!!! I can't believe it!













wait......Mighty doesn't get the the statement yur trying to point out.....
what Mighty gotta do?

-_-


*Walks away*

DONT U WALK AWAY FROM ME!

*cries*

*turns around and looks at dmax*
*Eyes fill with tears*
*Looks in shirt pocket*|
Oh... Its just onions...
*Cointinues walking*

*Zeldafan stared at blue*
ZF: Ummm... Who are you?
*Blue opens his eyes*
Blue: Who are YOU?
ZF: I asked first.
Blue: Do you think i care?
ZF: *Sigh* Just tell me who you are...
Blue: Why?
ZF: Because....







-_-
ZF: Why not...?
Blue: Noy good enough. No shoo little fly. Dont bother me.
ZF: WHAT?
Blue: Do i need to spell it out?
ZF: ...
Blue: S...H...O...O...
ZF: OK I GET IT.
Blue: Good...




*ZF Begins to walk out just as blue notices something*
Blue: WAIT!
*ZF turns around*
ZF: What?
Blue: Are you one of the new people?
ZF: New.... People? What do you mean "new?" I like to think everyones new.
Blue: Yup. You are..
*Blue stands up*
Blue: Huh... I didnt think any newbs would show up here... How did you get through the door?
ZF: I... Opened it...?
Blue: *Blues eyes glow, as he looks ZF up and down*
*Blues eyes stop glowing*
Blue: Hmmm.... A strong electro magnetic charge flowing throughout the body... Concentratable?
ZF: Huh?
Blue: Is it concentratable?
ZF: By that you mean...
Blue: Can you focus the electro magnetic charges in your energy flow to manipulate eclectricity to the best of your ability?
ZF: ............. Hmm?
Blue: *Makes a stupid face* Like OMG can u shoot teh lightning?
ZF: ... -_-
Blue: CAN IT BE ANY SIMPLER? Are you stupid? You seem stupid...
ZF: Sure, i can control lightning...
Blue: Oh.... You manipulated the magnetic energy, or your body manipulated it itslef which short circuited my electro pulse defense barrage door and opened it. Interesting.
ZF: Can you start speaking ENGLISH?
Blue: I am speaking english. Your just stu-
ZF: Shut up!
Blue: ...
ZF: ...
*Long silence*
Blue: Pid.
ZF: Gah!
*ZF begins to stomp out when her original curiousity is resparked*
ZF: Hold on...
Blue: Yes?
ZF: How am i "new" here?
Blue: I thought youd ask. I guess ill explain it to you...
ZF: Cool.
Blue: BUT you have to find a way off this flying death trap.
ZF: I knew it wasnt going to be easy with you. -_-

onions is my nickname i guess  ;)

>_>
*Continues walking*
*Gets hit by a bus*

>_>

*Rats begin to eat my body*
My ghost: NO! Bad Remy, BAD REMY!

Oh lawls. Remy is nice and kind =P

Not to dead bodies*
Ghost: Shoo rats, shoo! Dont eat me! Nooooooo!

X_X

O_O

cads just made me laugh.....o god! its the end of the world!

*shots self in head*

*remy eats my body*

my ghost:*turns to cads ghost* *sigh* so how life?
cads' ghost:dumbass....

Fine XD Remy eats everyone X_X

>_>
(I DO have a sense of humor)
*Looks at dmax's ghost*
Ghost: *After saying dumbass* Eh... Well, you wanna go get something to ea- *Looks at see-through stomach*
Ghost: Oh... right.

>_>

<_<




Just a question: Is anyone actually even reading my story? -_-

I was kinda... But I'm never in it so not as much.

Ah...

You do come in more later, but you have to admit... im taking care of 30+ people. Its hard to get EVERYONE alot of screen time. Of course, once a certain character goes insane and goes on a killing spree, about 7 people die.


After that everyone gets a more signifacant amount of screen time.

<_<


Wut?

Nvm...

;~;

=(

='(

the parts im in i read right then and there, but then when im not in it i kinda look at it every once and a while...so i have the story read up til now, just not at once :)

O I C...

Well, ive got...
2 readers. I suck.

IVE GOT A CONFESSION!

*flees*

*comes back*

dont feel bad, judge read mine told me it was terrible so i withdrew it lol

*reflees*

I just saw this topic not in my "new replies to my posts" list, while I already posted here ...
Yes, I read it, I just waited for an update I never saw.

>_>


3 Readers >_>

UP DATE U DAMN LAZY RACCOON!!!

-_-

I swear im gonna update tommorow.

IN THE NEXT CHAPTER...

K_S Manages to betray Bass!
Ermine is confronted by a deadly challenger!
And the nature of the mysterious vines after devicho is made known!

...ok ****, wat ever u say  ;D

*Sobs*

U NEED TO FIND A BETTER WAY TO GET MONEY!

*pats cads on back*

but its ok, ive been there, it feels like theres no way out...and plus u dont have to buy food anymore, after all we are both dead.....

 ;D

Uh huh >_>


*Is going to update now*

Todays update is brought to you with limited commercial interruption by bionic woman: The machine is nothing without the wo- *Gets shot in the head*

And now for our story!


(Has realized i havent been putting chapters in the beggining)
That has to change. Im to lazy to figure out what chapter im REALLY on, so we'll just call this chapter 3-1. Good.


Chapter 3-1: The worst kind of enemies.

*Ermine dashes throughout the forest, penguin resting on his back casually*
*Trejik watches from the bush*
Trejik: (Thinking) That looks like a fine specimen... Never seen a weasel so big before.
*Trejik leaps from tree to tree silently, and prepares to go in for the kill*
*Ermine's ears perk up, and he hears trejik coming down on him*
Ermine: *Throws penguin to the left, and dashes straight to the right to avoid trejik when he crashes into the ground where ermine was running*
Trejik: Tougher then you look, weasel.
Ermine: *Indignant look on his face*
Trejik: ... What?
*Ermine grabs a stick and begins writing in the dirt. He spells "Ermine."*
Trejik: What the hells an Ermine...?
Ermine: *Shakes head and looks down*
Trejik: Well i must say, you dont hear the word "Ermine" very often. Just spell it out... what is it?
Ermine: *Points at self with paw*
Trejik: So... your an Ermine?
Ermine: *Nods*
Trejik: Ah... I see. So, are you a type of weasel, or- WAIT A MINUTE!
Ermine: *Dashing away from trejik with penguin*
Trejik: Damnit... Caught up by idle conversation... *A dagger made of earth forms in trejiks hand as he chases after Ermine with blistering speed*


MEANWHILE:
*Adol walks along with frosted, through the blisteringly hot desert*
Adol: I... I dont know how much longer i can take this...
Frosted: Me neither... My ice powers do nothing when the ice just melts after i form it...
Adol: Hey... Look up ahead... Is that...
Frosted: YEAH! It is! Its..
Adol: Its...
*Frosted and adol run up a sand dune to a soda machine*
Frosted: Well... Well how the freak did this get here?
Adol: Maybe its a marrage...
Frosted: *Kicks the soda machine, and a pepsi pops out*
Adol: *Picks up pepsi and starts drinking it, only to spit it out*
Frosted: What?
Adol: Its just diet pepsi!
Frosted: Ew...
*The start running back into the desert, when suddenly, vines pop out of the gorund holding a beaten and battered girl*
*The two come to a screeching halt*
Adol and Frosted: Holy crap!
*The girl begins coughing out sand*
Adol: Woah... Where did you come from?
*The girl looks up with fear at adol before trying to run away, but shes dragged back dwon by the vines*
Frosted: *Grabs the vines and snaps them in half*
Frosted: Now, tell us, what happened to you...?

TO BE CONTINUED... (Cuz im to lazy to type more >_>)

Is diet pepsi so bad ?

I HATE diest pepsi.

This update was ment for comedy. Thats why i didnt advance the story. >_>

u lucky, if u would have said any form of mt. dew or monster i would have killed u, but it seems everyone hates diet pepsi but me so ill let it slide...

Lulz XD

*kicks dirt on story*

i think its dead

Thats what you think. I may go through periods of no activity, but i DO plan on finishing it.

*Is going to update right now*

Chapter 3-2: Blistering speeds, intense flames, and a penguin.


*Trejik leeps from tree to tree, attempting to catch up with the speedy ermine*
Trejik: Damnit... This thing is fa-
*Trejik, having let his guard down, rams straight into an overhanging branch, throwing him to the floor*
*Trejik immediatley leaps to his feet, but the ermine has dissapeared*
Trejik: What the he-
*Trejik leaps into the air the second he feels heat behind him. He lept just in time to see a pillar of boiling lava decimate everything where he was just standing*
Trejik: *Swirls around to face the towering 30 foot long enourmas snake glaring at him, ermine sitting on his back with penguin*
Ermine: [Telapathicly to snake] This guy is after my head!!! He's been after me for a while now... I lead him straight to where i felt you were.
Flamesnake: [telapathicly to ermine] Alright, i guess i have to get rid of him, huh?
Ermine: [Telapathicly to flamesnake] I would appreciate it...
Trejik: *Stares at the two*
FS: Alright, tough guy, lets see how you deal with me, eh?
Trejik: O_O... You... Talk...?
FS: Yeah.
Trejik: HehehehehehhahahHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA! Wow! Youd be the PERFECT head on my wall! Forget the weasel-
FS: Ermine.
Trejik: Ermine over there! I want you!
FS: Well... to bad your not gonna have me.
Trejik: I beg to differ...
*Trejik dissapears from the spot he was standing on, and appears directly behind FS, with a dagger of earth*
FS: Nice one, but...
*Trejik didnt notice FS's tail creep up on him*

(More later >_>)

SmokeyBear wanna be in story now or else ill hold the worlds oxygen up for ransom!

...
>_>
<_<
Shut the **** up.

Good stuff =P

*reads* hmm needs more internets...o and needs moar DMAX!!!!!!129!!!!!

You know, i almost forgot about you...

Still reading, if you wanted to know ...

Interesting...

Chapter 3-3: New partners?



*Gaffit wakes up in a strange place*
Gaffit: Huh...? *He looks around, observing his surroundings*
*Theres a small fire going in the middle, but otherwise, the room is empty. The room is pretty spacious, with odd wood walls, and a mouse-hole shaped door. The door is carved into the wall, and is open*
*Gaffit gets up and walks to the door*
Gaffit: Hmm?
*Theres an odd purple energy surrounding the tree, almost like a bubble,*
Gaffit *Remembers whatr happened, and immediatley, out of fear, he glances at his hands for the green energy*
Gaffit: Nothing...
*Gaffit turns back around to go back inside, and thats when he realizes- the room he was just in was a tree. The inside of a hollowed tree. Gaffit looks the tree up and down. Enourmas.*
Suprised?
*Gaffit swirls around and sees Cads sitting on a high branch up towards the top of the tree*
Gaffit: Who are you?
Cads: Thats not a very polite greeting... *Cads leaps off of the branch he had perched on and lands besides gaffit*
Cads: My name is Cads. After you leveled half of the forest, I went looking for the source of the blast, and i found you, in a big crater, unconcious.
Gaffit: So why pick me up?
Cads: I was going to leave you, i must admit... But... i belive you'll find we compliment eachother QUITE    well.
Gaffit:.... And how is that...?
Cads: I dont know WHAT my element IS, but i do know i need an energy source to use it... At least i know that NOW. Before, in order to access my power i had to dig deep in myself and use my OWN energy. Until i found you...
Gaffit: In the crater...
Cads: Right. You were emenating this green energy... At first you were FLOWING with the stuff, but... Soon, all of the green energy flowed into ME, and i found that i could use this energy for my element.
Gaffit: leaving me powerless...
Cads: Your not POWERLESS, but you wont go completely NUCLEAR on us again.
Gaffit: Uh huh... How long was i unconcious?
Cads: 6 Hours.
Gaffit: not TO bad...
Cads: Alright, i need you to stay here int he tree in the radius of the sheild for now-
Gaffit: Why?
Cads: That sheild is whats absorbing your energy and keeping you from exploding. I created it.
Gaffit: Ok...
Cads: Now ive got work to do. A meteor crashed in the middle of the forest, and it looks PRETTY suspicious. Its emenating this dark aura, and im going to investigate it. Maybe i can use its energy or something.
Gaffit: *Sigh* How long will you be gone?
Cads: Hopefully not long. Like i said, STAY ion the sheilds radius. I'll probably be back soon.
Gaffit: If you says so...
*Cads leaps away towards the enourmas meteor in the middle of the forest*

 :'(

I would feel sorry if you werent a complete ass hole to me all of the time.

wow nice random flame...

Thanks.

Just becyase iu dont update for a week or so doesnt mean its dead, dmax. Chill out.

*begins rolling abound i the ground*

DO IT NOW!!!!

 :'(

Hmmmm....

I guess i could.

And to stop your useless begging, i'll update a chapter with you in it.

Chapter 3-4: Enourmas challenges, Strange powers, and a jealous angel.


*Dmax braces himself for the challenge he's about to take on. He stares up into the sky, and he can only see the slight outline of the flying fortress, but he's determined to kill the "****" that threw him out of that window.*

Dmax: Here i go......

*Dmax creates a clone, who throws him high into the air. When he reaches the peak of his throw, he creates another clone, in mid air, who tosses him higher. That clone dissapears, and he repeats the process... over... and over.... and over.*

MEANWHILE:

*Cads dashes through an EXTREMELY narrow dark corrider, the walls are black with strange black gems in them. breathing rapidly. He looks behind him, and sees the faint shadow of the beast dashing after him. He runs faster, but cant find the exit. Is there even an entrance anymore? He sees a crossroad up ahead, and he turns left, running as fast as he possibly can. Panting wildly, he comes to another crossroads, and takes a right this tme. He has no idea where he's going, except he ahs to get away. Has to keep running.*

Cads: *Makes one more turn, and runs for a whle before hitting a dead end- with the beast right behind him. He looks at the wall of the dead end- and notices something quite strange. The wall is glowing black. It strikes awe into him, and, forgetting the beast running towards him, he slowly walks towards the glowing wall, and sees that the entire wall is made out of beautiful glowing black gems. He slowly reaches out his hand, and taps the gems.*

Beast: DAMNIT!!! YOU FOOL!
Cads: *The second he touches the gems, the black glow absorbs straight into his arm, and for merely a second, his entire body eminates the strange dark energy, but quickly dissapears underneath his skin.*

Cads: *Forgetting the beast entirely, he's amazed at what just occured.* Wo- *Before he can finish speaking- and enourmas explosion blows up everything in the corridor. The beast is flung back, the wall in front of him is blown into a million peices, and Cads is flung out of the meteor he was in, back onto the ground of a large plain at the center of the forest. Startled, confused, and amazed at the events that just transpired, he begins jogging bac to the tree gaffit is in to tell him everything.*

MEANWHILE:

*Judg, having healed from his injuries a little, wanders thru the forest, still stunned at his defeat. He had never been defeated before... Why was this one man so powerful...?*

Judg: [Thinking] How did he beat me? He took me out so easily, too... Like i was just a peice of trash blowing in the wind... Where did he get that kind of power? If i had that kind of power... Man, i'd be made in the shade! Maybe i can have that kind of power...

*And then an idea struck judg...*
Judg: Thats it! It'll take some work, but i think i have a good plan... Now where can i find that guy...?
*Judg begins to jog thru the forest, eager to find Doc.*

 ;D

I wanna fight an Enourmous creature =P

*flexes*

Go ahead ;)

You do...

*Flips a few pages in my notes*
A couple chapters ahead, you fight ESH. hes about twice the size of a normal human, but can expand himself to about 6 times the size of a normal human...

*Flips a few pages more*
Technically he becomes your biggest problem until a certain event...

Oh... Thats gonna be dumb X___X

Why thank you for insulting my story ^_^

Am I still in ?

Yeah, but you come in pretty late.

I only said that cus I don't like interacting with Humans >_> let alone fight one >_>

maybe if u did a barrel roll u could make it flee...

>_>

ESH isnt a human in my story...

Hes a giant alien grass hoper... WHos evil.

Pics nao...

-_-

=(

Chapter 3-04: New friends and mortal enemies.





*True walked around the forest for hours looking for food, but everything seemed unedible*
True: *Walks up to a bush bearing some berries* Looks "eatable" enough...
*True presses a butt on his helment, opening a small hatch allowing him to eat, and puts the berry in*
*True spits out berry quicky and throws it across the forest, and it explodes a little way off*
True: WHERE THE HELL AM I?!?!?!

In the forest.

True: *Turns around to see a man wearing a dark cloak conceeling his face (Chaos, reapers servant guy doc blasted away) standing behind him about 20 feet away* Who are you...?

Chaos:... My name is ahriman.

True: Ok, arhiman, what are you DOING there?

Chaos: Oh, i figured you could use some help. *Takes out a small bag, and dumps the contents on the floor, a load of small sandwiches*

True: O_O Awesome! ... Wait... Where did you get sandwiches in the middle of the fo-

Chaos: Dont talk. Eat.

True: Ooook... [thinking] And why hasnt he questioned me on this bionic suit? [/thinking]

Chaos: *Sits down* Its not poisinous. You CAN eat it.

True: Oh! *Begins to eat a sandwich*

Chaos: [thinking] this aughta be good... he looks like he'll be OK. Not what i wanted, but... ok. [/thinking]

MEANWHILE...

*Cads bursts into the tree where gaffit is sitting*
Gaffit: Youve been gone for an hour, where were you?

Cads: *Panting heavily* In that meteor...

MEANWILE:

*Trejik, having avoided FS' fire blast, throws 4 earth daggers straight at FS*
Trejik: Heh...

*The daggers combust in thin air, and disentagrate before they hit Flamesnake*
Trejik: Lemme guess. You have the air aroud you superheaed?
FS: Yessir.
Trejik: Just ****ing great...

*Jumps backwards, and heaves his hands upward, creating an enourmas earth wallbehind him, which actually forms into the shape of a hand*
Trejik: here we go...
*Trejik shoots his hands forward, and the hand splits in half, forming two hands. Those two hands split in half, forming 4.*
Trejik: And for the grand finale...
*Trejik builds up energy into the hands, and the grow enourmas.*
*Trejik shoots all 4 hands straight at FS, but he manages to slither in between, around, and over them with extreme ease as they try to get a hold of him. Penguin was slow to react, and was grabbed by one of the hands*
FS: Ermine, get penguin!
*Ermine begins dashing forward to penguin, but hands of earth hinder his progress, eventually becoming overwhelming for ermine, and he's captured.*
Trejik: Two dow- *FS fires a pillar of magma from his mouth straight at trejik*
Trejik: 9_9 *Jumps over it, but it bends in mid-air and comes up at him*
Trejik: Nice!
*Trejik twists in midair around the magma pillar, and creates an unbreakable earth surf board beneath him, and rides the magma downward towards FS*
FS: *Quickly shoots back, avoiding trajik*
Trejik: *Summons another earth wall, and it raises higher and higher, bigger and bigger, until its a staggering mile high.*
FS: ****.
*Trejik breaks the wall up into hundreds of peices, and forms those peices into daggers, forming a total of 1200 daggers floating in the air, ready to be thrown*
Trejik: Unleash hell.
FS: **** **** **** ****!
*the daggers rain from the sky, at light speeds, straight at FS ermine and penguin. FS manages to move his "Super heted air" sheild over ermine and penguin, but it` leaves him defensless.*
Ermine: !!!
*Ermine finally decides to fight in a desperate act to save his friend. He leaps high into the air, and raises an earth shield to block most of the daggers, but its not enough, So ermine decides he has to stop it at the source. He begins bounding straight at trejik at extreme speeds and agility. Ermine creates a huge sword of earth in his hand, and raises it to strike...*

More latah.

Not like the stars hide the words ...

-_- We're required by law to do it, sir.

I know, it's just hypocritic, but you had to do it ...

Earth Sword Powers Activate GO!

Lawlz

*A random user is seen walking through the forest. Funny enough, its Random user #2, the user trejik let live*
RU2: Ugh... I think im lost. That jerk killed our navigator...
*A bush behind RU2 rustles, and he swirls around to look*
*A strange creature that looks like a morphed raccoon scrurries out from the bush*
RU2: Im way to paranoid.
*RU2 begins to walk away when a strange force lifts him off of the ground*]
RU2: What... What the hell...?!
*RU2 Feels a sharp pinch in his back, and when he looks down, he sees a claw porturuding from his chest*
RU2: O_O How... How did that...
*A creature, previously cloaked, reveals itself. Its huge, and looks... Like a grass hopper... RU2 feels the life sucked out of him and the beast drains his energy out of him*
Beast: Weaklings... Their good fodder. Now to resume the search for that pesky little intruder...



Just a little paragraph to keep you guys from going crazy >_>

Chapter 3-07: A huge advantage.



*Ermine swiped down with his sword of earth, straight towards trejik*
*Trejik didnt see it coming, as he was focused on FS, and the sword dug deep into his shoulder*
Trejik: AGH! DAMNIT!
*Trejik swirled around and backhanded Ermine across the face, sending him into a nearby tree*
*THis gave FS his chance, as Trejik had focused on something else, and the daggers dropped harmlessly to the floor without him keeping them up. FS dashees towards Trejik, and bit him in the side, before flinging him into another tree 3 feet away. He then rose high into the air, and unleashed a flame storm right down on him., Trejik didnt stand a chance, and every flame hit him. Penguin watched*

"But the battle was far from over..."
*FS had killed trejik, and all that remained was a pile of flaming rubble where trjik once stood. But suddenly, a glow broke through the rubble... And another... before the rubble exploded as earth shoved it away with extreme force*

MEANWHILE:
*In the skies above Their battle, 911 and Raizor floated, watching the fight*
Raizor: I never really understood limit breaks...

911: What?

Raizor: I just... Never did.

911: Thats common knolodge to us!

Raizor: *Turns head side ways* To you...

911: *Facepalm* Alright, limit breaks are simple. When one elemental opponent kill another elemental opponent using NO elemantal powers, the killed opponent stays down. He doesnt come back. BUT if the killer kills his opponent using his powers, he has a problem. Its a sort of "Final resort" thing sasori made up for fun. If the person killed was killed by he hand of elemantal powers, like an earth sword or a fire ball, they come back, about 3 times more powerful then before. ALL elemental power is given to them. There is no limit to what they can do, hence the name "Limit breaker." Earthquakes, tornadoes, tsunamis, nothing is out of their grasp.

Raizor: So im guessing this Trejik fellow has just entered limit break mode?

911: Yeah... You know, ive only seen people limit break twice... This should be interesting.

Raizor: Should be.


*Back on the ground*
*Trejik flew out from the rubble with two earth swords in each hand, straight at FS*
FS: OH CMON, Theres no way you survived that!!!!!
*Trejik lifts the earth swords to strike. Ermine, having recorvered, leaps towards him and tried to stop him, but an enourmas earth hand shoots from the ground and punches ermine all the way across the forest into penguin. Penguin, deciding to fight, creates and axe of ice in his hand and rushes trejik as he swoops his sword down. penguin manages to use his axe to block the sword blow, and FS recovers and blows magma at trejik. Trejik creates and earth sheild to block the magma and grab penguin by the neck at the same time. Trejik lifts penguin into the air and readies his sword to stab him, when ermine raises earth daggers from the ground and hurls them at trejik, who easily blocks them by lifting some nearby sand and deflecting them. FS shoots more magma, but trejiks shield easily blocks it. Ermine, rushes him, leaping thru all of the earth hand that attemps to stop him, and he actually makes his way to trejik, who has to drop penguin to punch ermine in the face, but, having turned his attention to ermine, FS got his chance, and he lept up and bit trejik in the back. This was a bad idea, as trejik was able to turn his body into solid rock! He shot a rock spike from his back where FS bit him, witch, although not doing much damage, stabbed FS through the roof of his mouth (THough it didnt exit through the top)*
FS: AAAAGH!

Ermine: [telepathic] Penguin, GO!

*Penguin leaps up and hurls an ice axe down at trejik, but trejik easily defends by leaping into the air, propelling himself with a boulder. Trejik, standing on the floating boulder, liftf himself high into the air. He then takes all earth within a 1000 foot radius, and lifts it into the air. This creates a small floating island. Trejik then proceeds to collapse the floating island into itself, burrying anything in it alive*

You know what is really stupid?

How Trejik is more powerful than 3 of us including me >_>

Did i not explain the limit breakers well?! >_<

911 is smart....but raizor isnt

Chapter 4: A ruthless "king"




*A malicious grin formed upon reapers face as he stared up at the man tied up before him. Hes in a dark courtyard, with a large audience before him in heskla. The man is tied to a large wooden pole half naked, and beaten severely*

Reaper: Now, tell me, where are the rest of the survivors from Project 1?
Man: *Spits in reapers face*
Reaper: *Grabs man by the throat* Listen to me you worthless failure of a project, if you dont start talking right now, your going to face a fate worse then death.
Man: *Strecking his neck out to reach reapers face, he headbutts him with tremendous force*
Reaper: DAMNIT! Somebody get callous in here.
*Lord_Callous walks into the courtyard via a large door that materializes out of thin air*
Callous: Yes/
Reaper: Do whatever you do with this peice of trash.
Callous: Right away, sir...
*Callous places his hand on the mans forehead*
Callous: Tell me, whats your name...?
Man: *Spits on callous*
Callous: Thats to bad... Cause now i havge to force it out.
*Callous squeezes the mans head, and the man begins to scream and thrash*
*After a few seconds, the man screamsl...*
Man: MAGIC!!!!
Callous: Hmm... Alright then, where are the others?
Man: GO TO HELL!
Callous: Heh... I guess i'll just have to force that out to.
*Callous grabs the mans head violently and squeezes as the man screams*
*10 minutes pass, and the man blacks out*
Callous: Sorry Reaper, but hes stored that information so far back in his head not even I can get it out from him. Unlike his name, which is brought to mind every day, this information is blocked out even from me.
Reaper: Damnit!
Callous: That doesnt mean we can torture him to get the information...
Reaper: Physical torture doesnt work. Ive been trying. Unless you would like to...
Callous: I would be honered.
Reaper: Good. Take him to cell #223.
Callous: Very well.

*Reaper parts ways with callous, who walks into the castle standing in the middle of the enourmas courtyard.....*


{I know its not a full chapter, but the segments in Heskla arent exactly meant to last long.}

* Still reading *

Chapter 4-02: The battle rages on.




*Trejik gazed at the ball of earth, pondering if they had died or not. But suddenly, the ball of earth begins to move and shift.*
Trejik: ?

*The ball of earth explodes, and ermine flies out riding on a boulder*
Ermine: [Thinking] I have the same element as you, remember!

*Ermine rushes up to trejik, creates a sword in his arms, and slashes down at trejik. But a peice of rock from the boulder blocks the blow. Ermine swings again, sideways, but the sword stops mid-swing and turns to sand, which morphs through ermines finger-tips and forms a dagger in trejiks hand, which he swipes down at ermines head. Inaffective, as ermine is able to stop the dagger and bring it over to him*

Trejik: This battle is going nowhere...
*But it was going somewhere. A bright flash exploded from trejik. It had a brownish tint to it. *


*MEANWHILE, in the skies above*

Raizor: What was that?

911: It was the limit breaker again. Every limit breaker has 5 stages. Stage one is basic - inhanced ability, extreme physical preformance, etc. But the other stages...

Raizor: Yeah...?

911: They allow more and more power over their element. Fire storms, earthquakes ranging hundreds of miles, blizzards of temperatures so cold it freezes instantly. Once they reach a certain stage of their limit breaker, nothing is out of their control. These limit brekaer "Levels" are signified by a flash, or balls of light.

Raizor: But wouldnt that mean that at some point, this planet would collapse under the pressure? Like, and earthquake that envolopes the whole planet could lead to an environmental breakdown! The planet would implode!

911: Calm down. The stuff i just said is restricted to level 5; the highest level in a limit breaker. And sasori has limited that power. They cant physically reach level 5. Not on this planet at least.

Raizor:... And on other planets...?

911: Dont worry about that.

*Back on the battle field*

*Trejik suddenly snaps the small piece of earth back from ermine. Ermine tries to get it back, but Trejiks hold on the earth is stronger then him. Trejik morphs the earth into a dagger, and slces forward. Ermine, haveing no choice, leaps from the boulder hovering hundreds of feet in the air, and sky dives down into the forest. Trying to use earth to break his fall, he attempts to creat a sand blanket that will leave him unharmed. But the earth on the ground doesnt budge; Trejik has locked it! Ermine cant control the earth below him becuase trejik was controlling it, locking it in place! Ermine plummeted down to the forest below.......*


MEANWHILE:

*SA2 creeped through the raigen ruins*
SA2: *Glances at the skull ring on his finger* Hmm... What does it do? Kill me after a certain period of time? Make me deah? Its starting to annoy me.

*SA2 continues to walk when a man rushes past him*

SA2: Hey! You!

*The man swirls around*
Man: Hmmm... Didnt even notice you.
SA2: Hey, i havent seen any people for a while now! Who're you?
Man: My name is judg. [thinking] I have no time for him. I have to get to that guy... Hmmm... Maybe a quick kill? No. He seems a bit strong, so it'd take time i dont have.
SA2: Judg? Ok.... Well im-
Judg: No time. I have to go.
*Judg speeds away on a beam of light at startling speeds*
SA2: WHAT THE HELL MAN?!

Chapter 8-02: The rivals meet again.


*ZF Searched through the facility, looking for an escape pod, teleporter, anything to get her and blue out of there.*

ZF: *Glances at a nearby window, which is blocked off by bars* Im sure not going out like Dmax...

*But she saw a figure through the bars*

ZF: The hell?

*The window explodes*
ZF: HOLY CRAP ITS YOU!
*Dmax ermerges from the rubble*
Dmax: *Grins* Ive thought up some new tricks on the 3 and a half hours it took me to climb up here...
*Dmax whips out a small vial, which he pours out onto his hand*
Dmax: Watch and learn.
*Dmax snaps his fingers, porviding the friction needed to explode the flamable substance*

*ZF is forced back by the explosion*
Dmax: Dont you just love chemestry? And, for some strange reason, these explosions dont hurt me in the least. Go figures, huh?
*Dmax suddenly appears right in front of the stunned ZF*
Dmax: You know whats COOLER?!
*Dmax creates ten clones and pours the liquid on all of thier hands*

Dmax: WE CAN ALL USE IT AT ONCE!
*The Dmax's snap thier fingers, envoloping ZF in explosions*

Dmax: That was easier then expecte-
*A blue blast shoots dmax into the wall, nearly breaking said wall open*
Dmax: AGH DAMNIT ALL TO HELL!
*Dmax staggers to his feet to see ZF is comepletely safe- surrounded by a blue force field*
Dmax: *Sigh* Damnit, that is SO CHEAP! *Dmax now notices his clones are dead* Hmmm... It seems they cant survive the blasts. Oh well. Theyre expendable.

Blue: *Standing behind dmax* Hey there SEXY.

*Dmax jumps forward in suprise*
DMAX: WHAT THE ****?!
*Blue creates a blue energy sword in his hands and swipes sideways, but dmax easily jumps over it and kicks blue in the face, propeling himslef backwards*
Dmax: Hmmm... Cool sword.
Blue: Thanks.
Dmax: So, who ARE you?
Blue: Blueanihilator.
Dmax: Kay... What do you have against me?
Blue: You seem obnoxious.
Dmax: Right...
*DMax pulls out a dart and flings it at Blues head*
Blue: Ooooh... Scary. *Blue easily sidestepd the dart*
Dmax: Not gonna be that easy, eh?
Blue: Heh heh heh... NO.

Dmax... Just friggin great.

*Dmax snaps his fingers again, creating another explosion- and a good smoke screen*

*Blue braces himself*
*ZF gets up and creates a small electric whip in her hand*
*Suddenly, a barrage of poision darts shoot from all directions out of the smoke cloud*

*Blue forces all darts up by shooting an odd blue force from the floor, shoving the darts up. A useless effort, as when the smoke clears, Dmax is standing in the middle with two puppets; One of which is shaped like a bug- standing on all fours with a shiald erecting from its back. The other, a humanoid shape-has holes ALL over its body. Everywhere. Perfect for shooting darts*

Dmax: Meet my puppets. Become familiar with them. Theyre gong to kill you.
*Darts come flying out of the Human one as dmax creates another smoke cloud. Blue tries to force them back, but these ones are to fast- the speed prevents him from defending himself in that manner. So he slides to the side, and when the darts hit the wall behind him, they ignite; exploding, sending blue rocketing forwards through the smoke screen onto the other side, straight into ZF.*

Blue: A two on one is useless. Well just get in eachothers way. What do you say we tag team?
ZF: *Gets up from the floor* Sounds good.
*ZF steps forward as the second smoke screen clears. SHe shoots constant strings of lightning into the cloud, hoping to kill anything in it. But when it clears, no ones in the cloud! ZF Scans about the room... But their no where to be found. But then she notices the air vent above the smoke screen is open*
ZF: COWARDS!
Dmax: *Talking from inside the roof* ****!
*Scurrying is heard in the roof above them, and zeldafan shoots highly concentrated balls of lightning into it, hoping to scare him out. ALl she does is blow holes in the roof. Nothing. He was gone.*

ZF: Damnit...
Blue: *Steps out from behind her* I dont sense his presence anymore. But why would he run away when he came all the way back up here just to kill you?
ZF: How should i know? Hes just a cowardly bastard.
Blue: That may be, but- O_O
ZF: What...?
Blue: THE AIR VENT! HES GOING TO FLOOD THE AIR WITH POISION!
ZF: HOLY CRAP!
Blue: OK, OK, lets not worry to much. The main air vents are in the center. If hes going to flood the whole facility, hes going to have to find them. And theyre about one mile from here. We have time. We have to find him, and take him out before he gets there.
ZF: Alright.
*The two shoiot down the corridor to their left, hoping to catch up with Dmax before he kills them all*

"Blue: *Standing behind dmax* Hey there SEXY."

XD

Thnk you, Thank you.

Keep up the good work! ;D

O_o i didnt know so many read......

*Trejik Grins as he watches Ermine plummet to his immenent death. Who could survive such a fa-*

Trejik: *Swirls around to see a pillar of flame coming straight for him, bursting from the enourmas earth ball hovering in the air, and he quickly ducks to avoid it*
Trejik: No way... He died!
FS: Really? I sure feel alive.
*Behind him.*
*Trejik creates a dagger and swings his arm behind him, but he stabs nothing but air*
Trejik: Wh- what...?
FS: Nice try...
*Above him*
*Trejik turns the top of his head to earth, and shoots daggers upwards, but they strike nothing but wind*
FS: Still havent guessed?
*In... FRONT OF HIM?!*
*Trejik gazes carefully at the area in front of him. It looked.. distorted for a second.

Trejik: DAMNIT COWARD, FACE ME!
FS: ooooooh, big bad Earth god cant even find a 50 foot long fire snake and a penguin...
Trejik: *Begins to glow*
FS: Thats the third time youve glown... what are you doing, anyways?
Trejik (Whose voice is now beginning to distort) SHOW YOURSELF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*The earth beneath them begins to tremble and shake*
FS: Jeez, calm down. Here, this should help.
*A pillar of magma shoots down from above trejik. Trejik looks up, but the magma has just materialized from thin air. FS was not there. He creates an earth walk-way to the left, and sidesteps the magma.*
Trejik: Damnit, if you dont show yourself, I SWEAR-
*Trejik notices th samll air distortion in front of him*
Trejik: (Murmuring) When hot air mixes with a cool air front... The air... Distorts...
*Trejik flings a dagger at the source of distortion, and, being forced to move, flamesnake appears from thin air, penguin on his back, and dodges the daggers*
FS: Very smart. Just like you can make yourself earth, i can make myself- and anyone touching me- fire... OR hot air. Until i have to move...
Trejik: *The glow surrounding him explodes, blinding FS for just a second. When the light disperses, Trejik is no longer standing there... Hes entered Level 3*
FS: Nice light show, but where did you-
*Trejik appears above flamesnake, hovering, and both of his hands turn to Earth, expand, and fly towards him. FS slides to the left, dodging it*
FS: Fiesty... Penguin, go see if Ermine is alright.
*Penguin jumps of his back, riding an ice slide dwn to the earth below*
FS: Just me and you know, dirt boy.

More on this lator.

And when is lator ?

>_>

Maybe today or tommorow.

*Heavens reaper lined up 10 men in front of him, all terrofied of his presensce.*

Reaper: Listen up. You have all refused to tell me the locations of the remaining survivors. You have been sentenced to death. Now, i offer you salvation. You dont evenhave to tell me the location of the survivors. All you have to do is beat me in battle. 10 on 1. You see, im bored. Need something to do. Lets see if anyone of you pathetic fools have what it takes to kill me.

*The 10 men leap into action*

*Man 1 (M1) leaps at reaper with a sword of ice drawn. Reaper dissapears from where hes standing, re-appears behind the man, and snaps his neck effortlessly*

Reaper: *Laughs* Seriously, he wasnt even try-

*An earth dagger whisks by his head, which he dodges last second. The earth dagger is followed by Man 2 and Man 3 (M2, M3, i think you get the idea) who both create earth axes in their hand. Trejik again dissapears, and reappears next to M3. He grabs his axe, breaks it in half, grabs him by the jaw, and pile drives him into the earth with enough force to shatter his head into peices (Which is unseen my M2, as the earth covered his head, hiding the carnage) M2, thinking hes stilll alive, rushes to save him, but reaper intercepts him mid way, grabs his arms, and swings him into the air. While the man is in the air, reaper leaps up, and with one finger, jabs his lower stomach. This jab breaks an artery, and before the man even hits the ground again, the man bleads out injto his stomach and dies. The remaining 7 users remain on the ground, frozen with fear*

Reaper: Heh... Like shooting fish in a barrel.

*M4 cries out in anger, creates a pair of fire gloves, and charges at reaper. Reaper stands still until the man tries to punch him with the fire glove, which he effortlessly dodges. The man, going near light speed, unleashes an incredible flurry of punches rapid fire, all of which reaper dodges my moing to the side, ducking, and any other number of maneuvers easily to escape all punches*

Reaper: *Jabs at M4's stomach, knocking the air out of him*

M4: You... *Pant* BASTARD...
Reaper: If i had a dime for every time- * A small needle made of medal whizes past his head, thrown by M6*

Reaper: Amazing... A meta element. I havent seen one of you in a while.
M6: And im the last one you'll see!
Reaper: *Laughs hysterically and continues to speak even as M4 continues another flurry of punches, which he dodges*
Reaper: Cmon, you really think you can beat me?! Watch this.
*Reaper dissapears from where he was standing, and M$ dissapears with him. Soon, a sound is heard above M6, and M4 falls from the sky, dead*
M6: *Screams as reaper appears behind him, grabs him by the hair, and snaps his neck*

*The remaining 5 dont move*
Reaper: It appears youve all given up... To bad. Im sorry i have to work it out this way, bu if you dont move, ill come to you.

*Before the 5 can even see it happen, M5's stomach explodes, and he flies backwards. The cries of the remaining four echo through heskla*

Reaper: *Now standing in the place of M5* Punching through his stomach at light speed... I havent done that in a while. *Blows the blood off his arm*

M7: WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?!
Reaper: You all refused to tell me... If you had, you would be back on earth.
M7: WE WILL NOT BETRAY OUR COMRADES!
Reaper: Thats to bad.
*M7's eyes widen as reapers finger peirces his chest and runs into his heart. Reapers gaze turns to M8*

M8: WAIT! I'LL GIVE ONE OF THEIR LOCATIONS! I SWEAR TO GOD I DONT KNOW WHERE THE REST ARE, BUT IM SURE OF THIS ONE!
Reaper: ah, your a smart one. Which one?
M8: Blueanihilator.
Reaper: Very well! Where?
M8: He's in the mechanized fortress...
Reaper: Thank you. Unfortunatley, i never planned on letting you go... You see, this wasnt a way to escape your execution. What we've been doing IS the execution. The whole "Challenge me" thing was just a fun cover up.
M8: Wha...
*M8 disintagrates, and reaper turns his gaze to the last two.*

Reaper: Lets finish up, whall we?

*Reaper approaches the two...*

its actually comeing out pretty good cads (b'-')b

see im being "nice" happy? lol

but really i like it.

Wow, to make you be "nice" happy you must REALLY like it...

Yay! People like my story! =D

Have I been killed off?

>_>

No, your just not very "active" at the moment.

Oh, I thought I had been... Must've imagined it...

You did come CLOSE to death, but your not dead...




Anywhoo, heres another chapter;



*A man in a black cloak, hooded, stands underneath the Flying fortress*

Man: Hmm... He IS good at hiding his aura...

*The man dissapears from where he's standing, and soon Re-appears... Hundreds of feet in the air right next to the Fortress. the man punches a hole in the wall and crawls through*

Man: Childs play. *Sighs* I really do hate violence, but if Reaper wants me to, i guess i have to...

*The man walks down a corridor to his left, and soon dissapears*


MEANWHILE...

*Blue and ZF enter a large room, with a big machine in the middle*

Blue: Here we are. The main Air control system. I think this is where he would be heading.

ZF: So where is he?

Blue: He may not have gotten here yet... Though i expected him to get here BEFORE us.

ZF: So what, we just wait he-

Blue: Shut up.

ZF: Excuse m-

Blue: SHUSH!

ZF: *Falls silent*

Blue: Listen...

*Blue closes his eyes, and when he opens them again, theyre glowing blue*

Blue: Get down.

*ZF Drops to the floor, and a Small needle glowing black shoots by her head*

*A man a couple feet away from blue, holding an unconcious Dmax*

Man: Wow, i didnt expect even YOU to be able to detect me when im camo'd...

Blue: Everyone has an "aura." Even a Camo MASTER cant comepletely hide it.

Man: I suppose your right.

Blue: im always right. Now, which one of Reapers lackies are you?

Man: Lacky? v_v I dont appreciate your terms.

Blue: I really couldt give less of a ****.

Man: Classic Blue. Well, i suppose i could tell you on the way back to heskla.

Blue: *Chuckles* You really think im going with you?

Man: Oh cmon now, why cant we do this the easy way/

Blue: Because i dont feel like being executed?

Man:..... That is a good reason. But i really hate violence, so why not just come peacefully?

Blue: No.

Man: *Sighs* Everything always has to be so hard. !!! Oh, by the way, i found this little miscreant in the air ducts. *Drops Dmax* He a friend of yours?

Blue: Hell no!

Man: Ah. Well, you can have him. Hes not dead, i just put him to sleep for a little bit.

ZF: -_- CAN SOMEONE PLEASE TELL ME WHATS HAPPENING?!

Blue: This man is a bounty hunter... hes come for me.

Man: BOUNTY HUNTER? Ha! No way. I hate violence a little to much to be considered a bounty hunter. But when Reaper asks me to do something, i do it.

ZF: Why is he after you?

Blue: I'll explain later.

Man: Im giving you one last chance. Come peacefully.

Blue: No. You know, since you've BASICALLY come to kill me or at least take me to my death, you could at least tell me your name.

Man: If you insist.

*The man grabs his hood and pulls it back, revealing his face.*

Man: The name is Nikoleis.

damn u nikoleis....

And you happened to type my name once in the story ... WITH A TYPO !!!

Anyway ... Thanks a lot !!!

Oh, and sorry, DMax ... Look like I can won against you in Cads' story !

Your name will be appearing much more, as you become a major reccuring character.

And look!

The "modify" button makes the typo go away! ^_^

The fact it appeared once wasn't the problem, the fact I overreact for fun is !

Blue: Nikoleis...? Hmmm... I THINK ive heard of you... Are you the one that took Luigi kong away?

Nik: I think so.

Blue: Ah, well in that-

*A dart whizzes by Niks head, as dmax rises from the floor and jumps a few feet away from everyone*

Dmax: Ass hats...

*Dmax thrusts a dart straight into the main Air unit, and the monitor on the front flashes read*

Speaker on the roof: ATTENTION. SECURITY BREACH. AIR CONTAMINATED. PLEASE EVACUATE TO THE NEAREST ESCAPE POD. FULL CONTAMINATION IN 78:00

Blue: Crap.

ZF: WHY DIDNT YOU TELL ME THERE WERE ESCAPE PODS?!

Blue: BECUASE THERE ARE NONE! EVERYONE ELSE TOOK THEM BEFORE I COULD!

ZF: ... How long have you been here?

Blue: 6 years.

ZF: WHAT?!

Blue: I'll explain later! We have to get out of here!

*Blue and ZF Swirl around, but before they can take more then a step nik flashes in front of them*

Nik; Im afraid i cant be letting you do that...
*ZF quickly steps forward as Electricity begins to form around her hand, but before she can do anything, nik swipes his hand upward swiftly, smashing her upward into the roof*

Nik: Oh my... I didnt mean to hit her that hard. I hope shes OK...

Blue: Shes better then youll be if you dont step out of the way.

Nik: Oh come now, you know more then most you cant beat me.

Dmax: *Stares between the three of them as he slowly begins mixing chemicals*

Blue: You wanna bet?

Nik: How much to you want to waver?

Blue:... Just an expression...

Nik: Well its a stupid one...

*Dmax chuckles silently as he continues to mix chemicals*
Dmax: {Under his breath} Idiots...

Blue: Its not stupid, when someone says "You wanna bet" its just a challenge to the other persons atatement, it doesnt nessacarily mean they want to BET something, like a "wager" as you put it.

Nik: *Sigh* No. If you want to bet something, it means you want to place a wager on something, where all participants put something on the line that they wish to risk for theyre cause.

Blue: No. You see, in america, we have lots of sayings that may........ Is it just me or did it get really hot in here? I mean, it was just... *Blue slowly closes his eyes as he passes out, and falls to the floor*

Nik: *Glances to his left at dmax*

Dmax: *Holding a dart in his hand* Had to put him to sleep. *Gestures towards the dart in blues side*

Nik: Understandable. Youve just made my job much easier.

*Nik picks up blue and heaves him over his shoulder*

Dmax: Do whatever you want. I just put him out so he wouldnt get in my way.

*Dmax Shoves two more darts into the central air system* There we go.

*Walks out of the room*
Nik: Hmm... Interesting little fellow.

*Nik dissapears*

Hey Cads I have a question why did you stop including me in the story?

Am I even in it?

@_@


Ok, let me make this clear.

There are ALOT of people in this story. (Yes, dustin, your in) I think im handling 35+ people, ALL with their own unique storylines and conflicts. This means that at some points in the story, one person wont show up... FOR A WHILE. I mean, I havent even appeared fro a while.

As a matter of fact, one of THE MOST important stroylines hasnt even STARTED yet.

So, you may not see yourself for a WHILE. Ok? That doesnt mean you wont get your own storyline (Except for ahriman >_> Ahriman got owned.)

And adol, your still in.

I'm awesomly cool (and I don't mind if my English is faulty on that one) !

Too bad for Blue ... And I understand your point above, this is not easy to fit everyone. Good luck for the rest !

Ah I see...I have no compliants then.

we make a sweet team niko!

*high five*

*Dmax approaches ZF, whos still half stuck in the roof*

Dmax: *Grabs one of ZF's legs, and pulls her out of the roof* Unconcious, eh?

*Dmax drags her to a nearby window, which he opens*

Dmax: Lets see how you like it.

*Dmax pulls out a small vile, which he jabs into her leg, waking her up*

ZF: AGH! What the-

*Dmax, before ZF has a chance to react, grabs her by the arm and tosses her out the window*

Dmax: Have fun.

*Dmax turns around and walks out of the room*


MEANWHILE...

*Nik, Blue in hand, walks down a corridor to his left and approaches a window*

Nik: Well, here we go.
*Nik, placing a hand to the window, creates a portal of sorts made of dark energy. He begins to step through the portal when someone approaches him from behind*

Death Ballad: Who are you?

Nik: *Glances over his shoulder* Nikoleis...

DB: Ah... I havent seen anyone in days.

Nik: Unfortunately, i cant stick around.

DB: *Looks at blue* Who IS that?

Nik: Im afraid thats none of your concern. You'd best leave here.

DB: Yeah... I heard the alarm.

Nik: Right then. *Nik begins to step through the portal when he notices blue has woken up.......*

MEANWHILE...

*Zeldafan falls from the fortress*
ZF: THAT BASTARD! UGH!

*Zeldafan creates a torrent of electricity underneath her feet, and, almost like snowboarding, rides the air back up to the fortress. She soon crashes back through the same window she was thrown out of*

ALARM: WARNING. T MINUS 40 MINUTES UNTIL FULL CONTAMINATION.

ZF: Not good. Now, wheres blue? 

*ZF Runs down a hallway yo her right, in search of blue...*

MEANWHILE:...

*Dmax walks casually into a small room in the fortress*

Dmax: Well, this is perfect. ZF's dead, Blue is GOING to die, and i get the satisfaction of knowing i bested them...

*Dmax plops down onto the floor and takes out a small sack from his pocket, from which he pulls out a small needle, which he sticks into his wrist*

Dmax: Know then, lets experiment...

*The liquid in the vile slowly drains into Dmax's veins*

Dmax: Hm... Dont feel anything.

*Dmax holds up his hand, and, concentrating, shoots out a small blue beam*

Dmax: HOLY CRAP IT WORKS! Now, lets see the full extent of this little experimentation.

*Dmax pulls out another vile, with a different liquid, and injects it into his other wrist...*

ALARM: T MINUS 30 MINUTES TO FULL CONTAMINATION...............

* Still on air, still reading ! *

Im very proud of this chapter! ;D




*Dmax, panting, gets up*

Dmax: Big success!

*Dmax walks down a corridor behind him*

Dmax: Now lets get out of here.

MEANWHILE...

*ZF jogs down a hallway, turns, and sees nik holding blue*

ZF: Nik!

Nik: Hello there!

*Blue stutters as he fully wakes up*

Blue: Let go of me!!!

ZF: Let him go Nik-

Woah!

*ZF, Nik, and Blue all turn around to see Death_Ballad standing there, confused*

DB: Whats going on?

ZF: Its none of your buisiness. Now... *Turns to Nik* Let him go.

Nik: Cant, sorry.

*ZF Charges a lightning bolt in hir hand*

ZF: Cmon, im tired. I really dont want to have to do this.

Nik: *Ignoring ZF, he begins to step into the created portal when a dart whizzes towards his arm, causing him to drop blue and lose concentration, which leads to the portal dissapearing*

Dmax: Sorry! I was aiming for her.

Nik: You have bad aim.

Dmax: >_> **** off.

*ZF, with the lightning bolt still in hand, leaps at Nik*

*Nik jumps over her as she dodges, and she collides into blue. Dmax, taking advantage, throws 3 darts at once at the 2. Nik begins charging a strange ball of dark energy in his hand as Blue grabs ZF and leaps out of the way of the darts. He leaps out of the way just a Nik fires the ball, which he deflects with a stange blue shield. Meanwhile, ZF creates an exlectric sword in her hand and bounds towards dmax through the air, swiping down with the sword. Dmax ducks and takes a step forward, so hes under her while shes in mid air. He stands up quickly, head butting her in the stomach and flipping her over onto her back. Blue and nik, in the same room, meanwhile, are fighting hand to hand. Blue throws an uppercut, which Nik sidesteps and uses blue temporary vulnerability to get in a right jab. Blue, almost unnaffected, throws two punches with both hands towards Niks face, but nik grabs both of his hands, and twists them downwards, but blue, using Niks lack of hands, headbutts him, causing him to let go. Blue then gets a strong punch to his stomach. Nik counters by grabbing blues head, lifting his knee, and kneeing him to the nose. Blue, stunned, staggers backwards, and Nik finishes him with to jabs to his stomach. Blue doubles over in pain and collapses to the ground*

Nik: You put up a good fight, but in the end you were no match. Sorry!

*Meanwhile, ZF stands up, and swipes her sword towards Dmax's hip. Dmax rolls under it, and upercuts her on his way back up. Stunned, ZF shakes her head, and notices Nik picking up a half concious blue. ZF shoots a bolt of lightning at them, which strikes Nik in the back. Nik falls over, and drops blue. Dmax, taking advantage of her lack of attention on him, shoots a blue beam into her stomach, sending her flying down the hallway*

ZF: Ugh..... *Stands up slowly* Where... where did you learn that?

Dmax: You'll get a kick out of the one!

*Dmax, with both hands, begins shooting lightning bolts rapid fire down the hall towards ZF. Zf dodges them all, but is still suprised by this sudden power.*

Dmax: The looks on your face is PRICELESS!

ZF: Wha-........ Where did you learnt that?!

Dmax: "Learnt that?"

ZF: Huh?

Dmax: You just said "Learnt that."

ZF: ... I didnt even notice... I mean, i-

Dmax: Whatever.

ZF: hmm........ {Under her breath} learnt that?

Dmax: Anyways, my tricks are for me to know and only me.

ZF: Sure.

*ZF leaps past dmax, kicking nikoleis in the back of the head as he tries to get up. She lifts blue to his feet*

ZF: You ok?

Blue: yeah... I think so...

*Blue staggers to his feet*

Nikoleis: Ok, thats it.

*Nikoleis gets to his feet*

Nikoleis: I tried to be kind. I tried to do this the easy way. I HATE violence. I really do. I never wanted to fight. But now... Now your starting to go to far. There is a point where one must stop being the nice guy. And this... Is that point.

*Nikoleis, in the (Very literally) blink of an eye, creates an evil looking sword made of dark energy in his left hand. Before they can move in the slightest, as if Nikoleis had frozen time, he shoves the sword straight through ZF's skull. Oddly, no hole is left and no blood is spilt, but ZF falls dead to the floor. He next turns to Dmax*

Dmax: O_O Hey man, im all for you capturing blue and the like! Heh heh heh...

Nik: *Glances down at ZF and begins murmuring in a forreign language. Once done, he speaks in english once more.* Self induldgence! Skip 2, 3! Enter! 4! Annihilation! Limit Breaker Saynomi! *Nikoleis shoves his hand into ZF's back, and slowly, she rises to her feet*

Nikoleis: *Looks at dmax* Get ot of here is you honor your life.

Dmax: Why?

Nikoleis: *Ignoring his question, he punches blue with so much force in the face that a crack is made in his skull, and he falls unconcious. Nikoleis then creates another portal and leaps through it*

Dmax: Well what the hell?

Death_Ballad: *After watching the whole thing* Wow.

Dmax: *Looks at DB* Well hey there sweet stu- *An enourmas beam of pure energy shoots dmax through several walls and rooms*

DB: O_O *Looks at ZF, her eyes glowing (Shes in the 4th state of Limit breaker, AKA the second strongest) she then begins running down a corridor to get away*

*Dmax staggers to his feet*

Dmax: What the- *Dmax barely leaps out of the way of another beam of pure enrgy* Holy crap!

*Dmax begins running away, dodging multiple beams of pure energy. Soon, he reaches a window, and a dead end*

Dmax: *Turns around to see ZF floating behind him, her entire body charging electricity.*

Dmax: Cmon now, with that kind of energy charging your going to blow up the whol-

*ZF shoots a ENOURMAS beam (20 feet wide, 10 feet tall) straight at Dmax. the beam destroys the hallway theyre in on its way to him, and dmax has no choice other then to leap out of the window behind him to get out of the way. Dmax; while falling, looks back up at the fortress, and sees an enourmas explosion*

Dmax: Shes still firing blasts?

*Back up at the fortress*
*ZF, unable to contain the enourmas power within, begins shooting of waves of electricity, which cause enourmas explosions and destruction around her. DB, noticing her, begins to run away, but one of the electricity waves zaps through her, damaging her horribly*

DB: AGH! *Falls to the floor*

*Multiple waves blow through the fortress, as the alarm sounds*

ALARM: High damage to fortress. Systems failing. Fortress d- *The alarm nearby is blwon up by an electric wave*

ZF: AAAAAAAAAAAGH! *Lightning beams shoot from her eyes, striking the roof above DB. This sends rocks crashing down on her legs, trepping her.*

DB: NO!

*ZF clutches her head and thrashes about, each thrash sending out another wave. Soon, storm clouds appear above the fortress, and lightning strikes multiple times down at the fortress, furthering its destruction.*

*In mid air, dmax can still barely see the fortress being destroyed*

Dmax: Good go- HOLY SWEET JESUS!

*The fortress explodes in an electric flurry. Beams of lightning shoot out in all directions as the entire fortress is blow to peices, the peices being scattered through the land below. The force of the explosion is so powerful its push sends dmax flying towards the ground even faster*

* Is still here reading *

Chapter 4-03 (Yes, i forgot about chapters again, so im just picking up where i left off)


*Doc finishes up the meal he made out of a fish he caught in a nearby river as Judg approaches him*

Doc: *Sighs* If your here for "revenge" i cant guarentee you'll live this time. Im not very patient.

*Doc turns around to notice Judg isnt in a battle position of any kind*

Doc: Just what exactly do you want?

Judg: *Falls to one knee* Take me as your apprentice!!!

Doc: .... WHAT?!


MEANWHILE...

*SA2 wanders through the ruins aimlessly, bored with this entire thing*

SA2: Ive seen one person this entire time... *Glances at the ring on his finger* and im afraid this stupid ring is going to kill me.

*SA2 notices an odd building a couple feet away, and he walks up to it. It has an insignia on all sides of two swords clashing. Its made of a strange stone like material.*

SA2: *Looks at the door, which is locked from the inside. A key hole is one the front.*

SA2: Hmm...

*SA2 places his finger over the key hole, and using his element, creates a metal filling that shapes out in the hole. He turns his finger and heres a click, and the door creaks open*

SA2: Sweet.

*SA2 walks into the small building, which is just an empty room wth an empty pot in the middle, and a few cabinets on the floor to his left. He walks over to the cabinets, and opens each one, but nothing is inside.*

SA2: *Sigh*

*SA2 glances at a door on the far end of the room. He walks over, and to his excitement, its unlocked. He walks through it, and is utterly shocked by what he sees*

SA2: Holy damn...

*Spread out over the walls of the room, and on multiple tables in the room, and in glass tables all around the room, are weapons, armor, artifacts (That seem to BE weapons and armor) The weapons are so many types its unbelievable. Scythes, swords, axes, whips, maces, hammers, spears, rods, poles, javelins, katanas. And the armors range from almost primitive and tribal to futuristic and chrome.*

SA2: Wow... I am SO stealing this stuff.

* Read *

*Gar walked, tire, through the savanna*

Gar: My god... That woman could have gave me an energy drink or something... And why after going crazy and trying to murder me, did that guy just walk away all calm? Come to think of it, his eyes were a little clouded.

*Gar looks off into the horizon and notices that a forest is about a mile away*

Gar: Sweet!

{A few hours later....}

*Gar, approaches the forest*

Gar:Hey, forests have lots of water and food...and im starving! Besides, it looks more peaceful the-.....

*Gars voice trails off as he raises his head to look up at the sky, and he notices and enormous earth ball floating there*

Gar: The hell...?

*Gar jogs into the forest to see whats going on*

{Meanwhile, towards the outskirts of the Raigen Ruins*

Doc: Ok, woah woah woah... hold on... What?

Judg: *Closes his eyes* I want to serve under you... {Thinking} God, this is humiliating.....

Doc:...........No *Turns and begins to walk away*

Judg:HEY! YOU SHOULD BE HONORED! The great angel of judgment wants to serve under you!

Doc:I find this slightly disturbing... Stalker disturbing...First you attack me for virtually no reason, and now you track me down and ask to be my slave? The hell?

Judg:............ You should still feel honored....

Doc: Does honored equal disturbed and creeped out all a sudden? Go away. Im not to be caught up in this foolish competition.

Judg: Foolish? Who wouldnt wan to be a king?!

Doc: Are you an idio... You know i think that question has already been answered.

Judg:Oh, so now your cracking jokes, eh?

Doc: *Sighs* Do you really think this whole thing is to become king of some mythical land?

Doc:*Pauses his walk for a brief moment, then shakes his head and continues walking away*

Judg: What?

Doc: Your stupid.

Judg: Am not!

Doc: Fine. Maybe your not necessarily stupid, but your too naive.

Judg: So train me not to be so naive!

Doc: *Pause* Why do you want me to train you so bad anyways?

Judg: You kicked my ass back there! Ever since i got here, ive been stronger then everyone ive faced! That ass kicking was like a wake up call. I wanna be as strong as you! How do yuo perform those spells? Are they like your element?

Doc: No. Lightnings my element. Now im as stupid as you may be thinking. Your heart rates elevated, you have minor sweat on your palms, and youve swallowed twice more then the average male ever since this conversation started. What do you REALLY want with me?

Judg: {Thinking} DAMN! How did he know all of that? {Speaking} No! You dont understand! All i want is to become stronger! Thats it! I swear! Im just nervous you'll say no and kill me or something!

Doc:...Why would i kill you?

Judg: I dont know... There are some ruthless people out there.

Doc: You know what? Fine. I'll train you. On one condition.

Judg: Ok.

Doc: Pass a little test for me. Theres about a 1 in 198 chance of you passing. And if you lose, you'll leave me alone, and never speak to me again.

Judg: Fine!

* Judg is lucky, I think *

Cads could still make his unlucky....

Needs more me though....

Youll have your time, hopper.


Btw, i can only upload chapters when i go to kakadis house, so...


Sorry for lack of updates.

Don't worry ... Brawl learned me patience ... or hatred, I forgot.

Taught......

Oops !

Thanks again !

(Take notes)

I have a lot of free time, so I suppose I will start reading(I actually read the first few chapters, though I forgot most of it).

What is my role is teh story though?

Army General.

Your evil, though.

Cool.  Do I remian evil, or do I have a change of heart?  Or is that not yet known?

Your pretty evil till the end.

Not like me, but it's your story.  Anyways thanks.

>_>

What?

<_<

What??

......

<_>

Seriously, what?

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Nothing.

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If i EVER regain actual PC access again, im gonna repair the two missing posts, fix up some plot holes, repost the whole polished story, then continue updating (For anyone who cares ;_;)

I didnt ABANDON this, i just had to leave it.