Ultimate Paradise

Prologue

In a universe as  large as it is, we all have something on each single planet that we have in

common. Racing. In racing there are many different kinds on earth there is Nascar, in another

galaxy there is the F-Zero Grand Prix, but in another galaxy not as far away as you would

think, we have Mario Kart Grand Prix. In this series, there is always a dream each and every

racer has, to win the Super Golden Cup. Many have tried and many have failed, but in this

planet there are the true champions and competitors, the Mario Karters. They come from

everywhere around the planet, on Yoshi's Island, Mushroom Kingdom, and even in the deep

DK Jungle. A competitor so strong could get the cup, and five have. The series doesn't even

have a name now, yes let me take you back 15 years in August and September of 1992. You

might find the end of this story to be the beginning to another.

Um, it's Grand Prix...

Why do I always put Gran.........................

ooooooooo...

So does anyone like the prologue I'll put up another c hapter later.

 ;D

Great start

Keep it up.

He he NASCAR.

The biggest racing event is actually Formula 1, in terms of global popularity.

But yeah that was good, I wanna read the actual story before I judge.

ESH has a point. NASCAR isn't very popular outside the US.

Chapter 1: Royal Kart Invitation

(Peach's Castle is a wonderful place back then, beautiful scenery, wildlife, and the huge dug moat. The Princess of Mushroom Kingdom, Peach is in her room looking out the window, her mail Toad comes into her room. She has invited Mario and Luigi over.)

Mail Toad: Princess, you have some sort of mail from a tournament of some kind, I'll throw it away if you want.

Peach: No Toad it's fine, I'll just read it over and then if I don't like the letter I will blackmail the person who sent it to us. By the way who sent it here?

Mail Toad: There was no name on the envelope, oh and here it is.(He hands her the letter, and the doorbell wrings.) I'll get it.

Peach: Thank you Toad, you're my favorite servant here.

(The Toad let's out a smile, but leaves to answer the door.)

Peach: Well let's read this.(She looks at the letter which says:)

Dear Princess Peach, we have put you in cahrge of a tournament, a Kart racing tournament. Your job is to invite the 16 mightiest warriors in the land to try to win the Super cup and have there name on the series forever. I know you must probably hate to do this but you must also invite mighty enemies. There will be a 4 race qualification, and when we et the top 8 we will decide who the winner is by points. Thabk you and do this.

(Peach looks stunned after reading this, but smiles and stares at Mario when he and Luigi walk in.)

Peach: Mario!

Mario: Is there something wrong Peach?

Peach: You need to help me with something. Read this.

(Mario reads it and hands it to Luigi.)

Luigi: Wow a grand prix kind of?

Mario: That's what t says Luigi, did you want me to help you pick people?

Pach: Yes Mario.

Mario: Here's who I would invite: Yoshi, DK Jr., Donkey Kong, Bowser, Koopa Troopa-

Peach: Do you want to be in?

Mario: .................................OF COURSE!

Peach: OK I'll mark you and Luigi down.

Luigi: Thats'a wonderful!

Peach: But will you think Bowser or DK might try to do something?

Mario: You saw what the letter said. We have to invite them. Well here's the list I would invite........





OK it might not start out great but it will get better when we get into more action because I have ideas for later. And anyway about that Nascar thing yeah Formula One is more popular worldwide but I don'yt know why I put Nascar, maybe because I watch it the most.

I like it so far  :)

I'm going to post the whole thing all at one time in a few days hopefully.

good start.

do sections like a new chapter every hour or 2

Just got bck from the lake I'll post tomoorrow two chapters.

I like it so far. :)

OMg lUigi PWNS alREady!

I have to only type three more than I will p[ost one or two aday.

Good story, looking forward to reading more .  ;D

I forgot all about this story, I'll post the next chapter tomorrow.

Chapter 2: PreQualification

(The people are picked everyone is now at the signin table. Lakitu, the hired host of the event is relaxing trying to quiet dwon the crowd.)

Lakitu: People relax! We are now starting signups! Please in an orderly fashion, leave your families and come to the table!

(Everyone lines up in a unorderly fashion, and Lakitu just shakes his head and starts asking questions after grabbing his checklist.)

Lakitu: Name?

Mario: My name's Mario I think you would know me.

Lakitu: Oh yeah I hate you, now go away. NEXT!

(Mario leaves with an odd expression.)

Lakitu: Name?

(Luigi puts finger in air and opens mouth)

Lakitu: ..........Oh wait a sec, you're Mario's brother's, I hate you too. NEXT!

(Luigi walks off.)

Lakitu: Name?

Fat Guy: I think you know who I am.

Lakitu: No I do not what is your name?

Fat Guy: What are you going ask me next, what is the air speed velocity of an unladen paratroopa?

Lakitu: Just tell me your name sir.

Fat Guy: OK my name's Wario.

Lakitu: Thank you, now PLEASE go away.

Wario: Peace out Lakitu!

(He goes down list and is at number 15 now.)

Lakitu: Wow, you're King Wart aren't you! I'm your biggest fan!

Wart: Thank you.

Lakitu: You will never be lost in the shuffle, you're going to win for sure!

Wart: Thanks.

(Lakitu looks and sees know one.)

Lakitu: What, wait a sec.(He scans list. He finds there is no number 15.)

Lakitu: OK let me go through this again.
1. Mario
2. Luigi
3. Wario
4. Yoshi
5. Donkey Kong
6. Donkey Kong Jr.
7. Koopa Troopa
8. Princess Peach
9. Bowser
10. King Wart
11. Shy Guy
12. Mouser
13. Fry Guy
14. Chargin Chuck
15. King Wart

Lakitu: There's no 16?! ( He calls Peach over.) You only chose 15! We need one more or we can't start!

Peach: Gosh, I don't know, there's no one.................. wait I know someone who we can choose.

Awesome story.
*wonders who 16th will be...*

this is old thread but it never even finished!

forgot all about this, wow. Maybe I'll start updating again soon.