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Jawooooooooooo
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« on: 20 June, 2007, 09:32:19 pm »

yea, pretty much anything you wish to say about my story so far.
Post away.
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« Reply #1 on: 20 June, 2007, 09:35:27 pm »

It's good, I like it, especially since I was in it :3

Speaking of which, go check out mine :3
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Jawooooooooooo
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« Reply #2 on: 20 June, 2007, 09:41:34 pm »

It's good, I like it, especially since I was in it :3

Speaking of which, go check out mine :3
I have...
I can't tell if im a good guy or a bad guy......
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« Reply #3 on: 20 June, 2007, 09:42:23 pm »

Neither.

Everyone is fighting :3
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« Reply #4 on: 20 June, 2007, 09:57:59 pm »

VERY NICE
Go and check out my story soon too...it is gonna get an update pretty soon...maybe...maybe tonight...but more likely tomorrow
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Jawooooooooooo
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« Reply #5 on: 20 June, 2007, 11:53:50 pm »

Thanks, all.
I might get another chapter in tomorrow, I'll see what happens.
If i do, I will be planning on shedding some light on the origins of the trolls, and I have to wrap up the battle inside the lounge....
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« Reply #6 on: 21 June, 2007, 08:51:52 am »

This is the same story you did on GFaqs, right?
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Jawooooooooooo
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« Reply #7 on: 21 June, 2007, 10:24:41 am »

This is the same story you did on GFaqs, right?

Yes, and I will be continuing it here....
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« Reply #8 on: 21 June, 2007, 10:28:42 am »

I like it.

The absence of me is okay, as nobody can truly capture my essence.  Wink
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Jawooooooooooo
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« Reply #9 on: 21 June, 2007, 10:29:24 am »

I like it.

The absence of me is okay, as nobody can truly capture my essence.  Wink

You never asked to be in before.....
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« Reply #10 on: 21 June, 2007, 12:42:08 pm »

Just read it, its really good.  Grin
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« Reply #11 on: 21 June, 2007, 01:06:01 pm »

^_^
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« Reply #12 on: 21 June, 2007, 05:03:50 pm »

Yay, it's back! I thought that I'd never see it again after you got banned. It's good to see you again.
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« Reply #13 on: 21 June, 2007, 05:32:19 pm »

^_^
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« Reply #14 on: 21 June, 2007, 07:36:24 pm »

MOAR STORY NAOW!
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