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Comments, Critizisms, and Suggestions for my story....

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« Reply #45 on: 28 June, 2007, 10:29:03 am »

JoshCube: You’ll never catch me, Fooby. Not as long as I’m wearing THESE!!! *puts on red sneakers*
Fooby_Kamikaze: tisk, tisk….. *runs after JoshCube* ….you’re not blue or have spines, moron!!
JoshCube: AAHH!! *runs away*


That made me seriously lol. I hope I make a cameo, but if I don't oh well.

Awesome story though! 10/10.
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