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LuigiKong
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Re: Comments, Critizisms, and Suggestions for my story....
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28 June, 2007, 10:29:03 am »
JoshCube: You’ll never catch me, Fooby. Not as long as I’m wearing THESE!!! *puts on red sneakers*
Fooby_Kamikaze: tisk, tisk….. *runs after JoshCube* ….you’re not blue or have spines, moron!!
JoshCube: AAHH!! *runs away*
That made me seriously lol. I hope I make a cameo, but if I don't oh well.
Awesome story though! 10/10.
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