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Comments, Critizisms, and Suggestions for my story....

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« Reply #15 on: 21 June, 2007, 11:48:50 pm »

What Lord said.
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« Reply #16 on: 22 June, 2007, 02:09:47 am »

sorry, i didnt get to it.
I wasn't planning of trying so hard to achieve high scores in the arcade..... Grin

but, it paid off, for I hold to most #1 spots!!!!
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« Reply #17 on: 22 June, 2007, 07:19:51 am »

Alright, just start as soon as possible.
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« Reply #18 on: 22 June, 2007, 11:46:24 am »

Like I said before, I love any story with me in a main role. Plus you portrayed me so very well. Absolutely fantastic.  Grin
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« Reply #19 on: 22 June, 2007, 11:51:22 pm »

I will read your story after one of these questions has been answered: Am I in it? If not, can I be in it?
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« Reply #20 on: 22 June, 2007, 11:53:52 pm »

I will read your story after one of these questions has been answered: Am I in it? If not, can I be in it?


I don't think you are in it......yet.
I suggest you read it, and then come back and ask me how you would like to be added...
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« Reply #21 on: 23 June, 2007, 01:29:00 am »

Just added part 1 of chp 6.
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« Reply #22 on: 23 June, 2007, 01:40:25 am »

and I will probably get some flames for my 2nd part......
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« Reply #23 on: 23 June, 2007, 06:13:26 am »

That's much better. It feels like we're getting close to my possible entry.  Grin
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« Reply #24 on: 23 June, 2007, 11:43:17 am »

That's much better. It feels like we're getting close to my possible entry.  Grin
I didn't forget your entry. Ithis event will tie into your intro, but there will be some buildup first....
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« Reply #25 on: 23 June, 2007, 08:25:36 pm »

Just read ch.6 a minute ago (had to do something earlier) Good job d(^_^)b
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« Reply #26 on: 23 June, 2007, 08:26:53 pm »

I wanna be in it!!!
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« Reply #27 on: 23 June, 2007, 09:51:45 pm »

the chapter isnt done yet.....
you all will find out the reason for the trolls!!!
...and some of you might hate me for it.
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« Reply #28 on: 23 June, 2007, 10:45:59 pm »

Me in the story = INSTA-WIN!
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« Reply #29 on: 23 June, 2007, 10:59:15 pm »

Me in the story = INSTA-WIN!

^_^

just to let you know, you'll have more appearances later in the story, and not just as the local doctor.
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