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Comments, Critizisms, and Suggestions for my story....

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« Reply #30 on: 23 June, 2007, 11:14:42 pm »

More appearance by me = INSTA-GOD!
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« Reply #31 on: 24 June, 2007, 01:47:58 am »

I have yet to read your story jawo, but am I in it?
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But... if our leaders actually reflected the wants of the people... then we'd be a democracy, and that's just gross.
Stalin was that **** guy who pops the ball during a basketball game and ruins it for everyone.
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« Reply #32 on: 24 June, 2007, 11:59:21 am »

I have yet to read your story jawo, but am I in it?


...and you are?
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« Reply #33 on: 24 June, 2007, 04:04:47 pm »

So, everyone ready for part 2 of chp 6?
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« Reply #34 on: 24 June, 2007, 04:45:15 pm »

Can I say, Awesome?

that's about all I can think of to say.
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« Reply #35 on: 24 June, 2007, 04:45:34 pm »

So, you like the plot twist?
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« Reply #36 on: 24 June, 2007, 04:47:05 pm »

Yup.
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.


wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death - TML
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« Reply #37 on: 24 June, 2007, 06:35:19 pm »

Nice ending to a chapter.  Grin

So when am I in it?
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« Reply #38 on: 24 June, 2007, 06:35:38 pm »

^.^
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« Reply #39 on: 24 June, 2007, 09:00:25 pm »

You don't know me, well that makes sense, we nevr really talked and a little while after I came you got banned, or left, I'm not sure witch.
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But... if our leaders actually reflected the wants of the people... then we'd be a democracy, and that's just gross.
Stalin was that **** guy who pops the ball during a basketball game and ruins it for everyone.
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« Reply #40 on: 24 June, 2007, 09:01:59 pm »

.....you seem to fit the profile of a certain troll that i detest......
what is your username on GF?
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« Reply #41 on: 24 June, 2007, 11:48:06 pm »

My name is El_Dustino, and I am no troll.
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But... if our leaders actually reflected the wants of the people... then we'd be a democracy, and that's just gross.
Stalin was that **** guy who pops the ball during a basketball game and ruins it for everyone.
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« Reply #42 on: 24 June, 2007, 11:53:36 pm »

My name is El_Dustino, and I am no troll.

Ok, now that name sounds a little familliar....
well, enjoy the story then. ^_^
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« Reply #43 on: 25 June, 2007, 12:53:58 am »

I have read your story and I have to say that it is really good.
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But... if our leaders actually reflected the wants of the people... then we'd be a democracy, and that's just gross.
Stalin was that **** guy who pops the ball during a basketball game and ruins it for everyone.
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« Reply #44 on: 25 June, 2007, 06:58:22 pm »

Amazing plot twist. I would have never thought of it.

Keep up the amazing work!
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