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Comments, Critizisms, and Suggestions for my story....

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« Reply #45 on: 26 June, 2007, 08:24:49 pm »

*is waiting for more thoughts of the chapter before I continue...*
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« Reply #46 on: 26 June, 2007, 08:52:02 pm »

*is waiting for more thoughts of the chapter before I continue...*

No! Start now!  Tongue
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« Reply #47 on: 26 June, 2007, 09:04:37 pm »

*is waiting for more thoughts of the chapter before I continue...*

No! Start now!  Tongue
I have a question for you, Agaranok.....
Are there any boards you go to or used to go to at GameFAQs?
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« Reply #48 on: 26 June, 2007, 09:45:21 pm »

*is waiting for more thoughts of the chapter before I continue...*

No! Start now!  Tongue
I have a question for you, Agaranok.....
Are there any boards you go to or used to go to at GameFAQs?

The TP General board, but only for a bit. Why?
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« Reply #49 on: 26 June, 2007, 09:57:29 pm »

ok, good enough....
we will speak no more of the matter, trust me with this knowledge. ^_^
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« Reply #50 on: 26 June, 2007, 10:14:59 pm »

ok, good enough....
we will speak no more of the matter, trust me with this knowledge. ^_^

Ah, I see what you mean. Don't worry, I will remain silent on the matter.
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« Reply #51 on: 28 June, 2007, 10:29:03 am »

JoshCube: Youíll never catch me, Fooby. Not as long as Iím wearing THESE!!! *puts on red sneakers*
Fooby_Kamikaze: tisk, tiskÖ.. *runs after JoshCube* Ö.youíre not blue or have spines, moron!!
JoshCube: AAHH!! *runs away*


That made me seriously lol. I hope I make a cameo, but if I don't oh well.

Awesome story though! 10/10.
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« Reply #52 on: 28 June, 2007, 07:20:47 pm »

RAWR, ME WANT MOAR STOREE NAO!
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« Reply #53 on: 29 June, 2007, 08:25:45 am »

*gets average of 3 to 4 comments per scene/chapter in my story*

And you are waiting why? >_____>
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« Reply #54 on: 29 June, 2007, 05:07:09 pm »

BREAKING NEWS!!!!!!!

I'll write some more of my story tonight...
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« Reply #55 on: 29 June, 2007, 09:03:20 pm »

I'll go to your story if you go to mine...>_>
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« Reply #56 on: 29 June, 2007, 09:04:41 pm »

*blows open topic door, with COG Lancer Chainsaw Rifle roaring*

MOAR STORY NAOW!
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« Reply #57 on: 04 July, 2007, 12:20:42 pm »

Sorry for the lack of updates, people.
The good news, however, is that I have finally develloped a semi-plot for my story.

Agaranok, you will be mentioned in next chapter, along with a more clear revelation to the plot.
I will also be writing in a "special" place of GF that most cannot even enter, which ties into you, Agaranok.
I am debating wether or not to include TheMissingLink so soon, as he could be written in as soon as 2 more chapters.


So, this is my heads up, i guess.
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« Reply #58 on: 05 July, 2007, 11:49:24 pm »

Oh Em Gee I'm gonna be in the next part. >_>
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Jawooooooooooo
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« Reply #59 on: 05 July, 2007, 11:52:06 pm »

Oh Em Gee I'm gonna be in the next part. >_>

yea.
you are in mainly as an "ice-breaker" to Agaranok though, as you two have a slight commonality that I plan to write into the story.
But don't worry, you won't just disappear after this.
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