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Comments, Critizisms, and Suggestions for my story....

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Fuuka Yamagishi
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« Reply #75 on: 12 July, 2007, 10:32:14 pm »

Yep.

http://newssbb.smfforfree3.com/index.php/board,35.0.html
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.


wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death - TML
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« Reply #76 on: 12 July, 2007, 11:00:08 pm »

umm, that's bizzle's story.
I quoted HousecallDoc.
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« Reply #77 on: 12 July, 2007, 11:23:40 pm »

sorry, I got confused.
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.


wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death - TML
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« Reply #78 on: 13 July, 2007, 06:29:27 pm »

...

Eh, good enough...
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« Reply #79 on: 17 July, 2007, 01:35:53 pm »

added a little more to chp. 8...
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« Reply #80 on: 17 July, 2007, 09:31:24 pm »

YAY! MORE STORY! MAKE MORE NAO!
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« Reply #81 on: 21 July, 2007, 12:52:01 pm »

*has finished chp 8*
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« Reply #82 on: 21 July, 2007, 12:57:52 pm »

Woo! Exciting!

I love lounge fights.
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.


wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death - TML
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« Reply #83 on: 21 July, 2007, 01:10:06 pm »

*reads new addition*
YAY!
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« Reply #84 on: 21 July, 2007, 02:35:03 pm »

Woo! Exciting!

I love lounge fights.

there really wasn't much of one there....
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« Reply #85 on: 22 July, 2007, 07:37:37 pm »

Close enough.
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.


wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death - TML
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« Reply #86 on: 23 July, 2007, 05:54:04 pm »

I still can't wait for the next installment!
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« Reply #87 on: 23 July, 2007, 05:58:08 pm »

I'll get to it soon.
I will be busy establishing my name again in GF as well...
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« Reply #88 on: 23 July, 2007, 06:02:25 pm »

'kay.
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« Reply #89 on: 24 July, 2007, 01:54:53 am »

You could've asked me for TPSBian knowledge, Jawo. >_>
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