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« Reply #90 on: 24 July, 2007, 09:06:06 am »

...lol, so you saw that topic, did you?
meh, I wanted it to be a surprise....
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« Reply #91 on: 01 August, 2007, 02:20:22 pm »

nice story jawo
I'm in it lol thanx
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« Reply #92 on: 02 August, 2007, 08:43:46 pm »

Nice story Jawo'!
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« Reply #93 on: 02 August, 2007, 08:45:30 pm »

yay, comments!!!

actually i was thinking of writing more tonight...........im just a little nervous. I have so many ideas i want to get on paper and I dont wanna forget them all....

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« Reply #94 on: 03 August, 2007, 11:15:43 pm »

Just do what I do, write them down in notepad and save them somewhere.
(I'm half-writing a story, it's just ideas at the moment)
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« Reply #95 on: 07 August, 2007, 06:37:03 pm »

*has added chp. 9*
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« Reply #96 on: 08 August, 2007, 10:55:41 pm »

*goes to read*

Darkblaze expects big fights coming up soon, with a rescue mission in order.
Whoops, I'm making predictions on stories. >_>
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.


wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death - TML
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« Reply #97 on: 08 August, 2007, 11:43:28 pm »

^_^

I'm not confirming anything....
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« Reply #98 on: 09 August, 2007, 10:55:02 pm »

I can't help but notice that the only appearance I've made in this story is a cameo saying something that I never say.
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« Reply #99 on: 11 August, 2007, 02:04:28 am »

Can't wait for my re-entry into this story.
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« Reply #100 on: 11 August, 2007, 10:41:17 am »

^_^

Good stuff!
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« Reply #101 on: 23 August, 2007, 09:46:56 pm »

UPDATE. NAO.
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« Reply #102 on: 24 August, 2007, 02:13:44 pm »

I actually have a very small snip of the next chapter.....
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« Reply #103 on: 24 August, 2007, 02:48:29 pm »

Yes!
*reads*

Not good. T_T
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« Reply #104 on: 01 September, 2007, 03:04:58 pm »

Hey, Jawo. Just to let you know, I've changed into a human-like dark knight instead of a kirby-like form. If it interferes at all with the story, then just keep it in the old way. I'll post a picture of what I look like now soon.

Anyways, it just keeps getting better. I can't wait for the next update.
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