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Jawooooooooooo
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Re: Comments, Critizisms, and Suggestions for my story....
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...lol, so you saw that topic, did you?
meh, I wanted it to be a surprise....
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nice story jawo
I'm in it lol thanx
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Nice story Jawo'!
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02 August, 2007, 08:45:30 pm »
yay, comments!!!
actually i was thinking of writing more tonight...........im just a little nervous. I have so many ideas i want to get on paper and I dont wanna forget them all....
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Just do what I do, write them down in notepad and save them somewhere.
(I'm half-writing a story, it's just ideas at the moment)
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.
wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death
- TML
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*has added chp. 9*
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*goes to read*
Darkblaze expects big fights coming up soon, with a rescue mission in order.
Whoops, I'm making predictions on stories. >_>
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.
wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death
- TML
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^_^
I'm not confirming anything....
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I can't help but notice that the only appearance I've made in this story is a cameo saying something that I never say.
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Can't wait for my re-entry into this story.
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^_^
Good stuff!
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UPDATE. NAO.
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I actually have a very small snip of the next chapter.....
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Yes!
*reads*
Not good. T_T
The lounge is in trouble.
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.
wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death
- TML
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Hey, Jawo. Just to let you know, I've changed into a human-like dark knight instead of a kirby-like form. If it interferes at all with the story, then just keep it in the old way. I'll post a picture of what I look like now soon.
Anyways, it just keeps getting better. I can't wait for the next update.
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