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Marie Rose
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Excellent
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Small update?
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.
wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death
- TML
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Quote from: Grimmjow on 08 November, 2007, 04:47:18 pm
Small update?
Very. Basically I just cleaned up some stuff in the chapter and the previous.
I an working on the next one finally though. I figure it's high damn time, huh?
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08 November, 2007, 10:02:50 pm »
Sure is.
Lol, Dizi.
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.
wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death
- TML
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07 January, 2008, 10:25:56 am »
Added 6 lines to the story.
Sorry for teasing >_<
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07 January, 2008, 10:28:05 am »
Ah, It's ok. You don't get paid for this, and you probably don't have a lot of time to work on it.
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
Quote from: Jawo'
Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.
wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death
- TML
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07 January, 2008, 10:29:45 am »
True.
I'm finally off work for a couple days, and I've been wanting to update a bunch of stuff.
After I finally added info to my Lounge Bio *hint hint* I did a quick type here.
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A few more lines added.
Some deep sh** up in here now...
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Hmm? You updated?
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Quote from: I_like_Nanoha on 08 January, 2008, 12:34:41 pm
Hmm? You updated?
days off of work make me do crazy stuff....
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Ahh, still working huh? Where do you work anyway?
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Quote from: I_like_Nanoha on 08 January, 2008, 12:40:57 pm
Ahh, still working huh? Where do you work anyway?
a local Wal-Mart on overnights.
and I intend to STILL work for quite a while, thank you... >_>
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hopefully you aren't seeking long term employment at Wal-Mart
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Quote from: sasori1122 on 08 January, 2008, 03:54:52 pm
hopefully you aren't seeking long term employment at Wal-Mart
....and why not?
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