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Ahriman
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« Reply #60 on: 06 July, 2007, 12:35:40 am »

Alright then.
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« Reply #61 on: 06 July, 2007, 07:41:14 am »

Yay! An update!

As soon as I enter, I'm going to shut up about you not updating, Jawo.
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The Doctor is in!


« Reply #62 on: 06 July, 2007, 04:48:51 pm »

YAY! MOAR STOREE PLOX!
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« Reply #63 on: 06 July, 2007, 05:05:59 pm »

Am I ever gonna be in this?  Huh?
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I knocked things up a notch. BAM!


« Reply #64 on: 07 July, 2007, 11:08:59 pm »

Very nice, and I appreciate me being MMR at that time. Keep up the good work.
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Jawooooooooooo
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« Reply #65 on: 10 July, 2007, 11:24:54 pm »

ATTN: ALL MY FANS!!!

Chp. 7, part 2 has been added. Enjoy!
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« Reply #66 on: 11 July, 2007, 02:41:28 pm »

MY NAME WAS MENTIONED!

I'll stop bugging you now...
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« Reply #67 on: 11 July, 2007, 10:38:40 pm »

JAWOOOOOOOOOOOO when do i get to beat people senseless?


J/K. Take your time. lol, deleted at jawo's request.
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.


wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death - TML
Jawooooooooooo
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« Reply #68 on: 11 July, 2007, 10:42:05 pm »

JAWOOOOOOOOOOOO when do i get to beat people senseless?


J/K. Take your time. lol at Tbizzle being a random guy.

SHHH, DONT SPOIL IT FOR HIM!!!!
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Ahriman
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« Reply #69 on: 11 July, 2007, 11:06:58 pm »

<_< @ my position.
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Jawooooooooooo
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« Reply #70 on: 11 July, 2007, 11:07:53 pm »

<_< @ my position.

You'll see action, though. trust me.
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« Reply #71 on: 12 July, 2007, 02:46:05 pm »

Grr, I hate JOO JAWO'! JOOR STOREE ROX!
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Jawooooooooooo
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« Reply #72 on: 12 July, 2007, 02:55:14 pm »

Grr, I hate JOO JAWO'! JOOR STOREE ROX!
why do you hate me?
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« Reply #73 on: 12 July, 2007, 04:01:17 pm »

Because your story rocks?

I'm guessing he thinks yours is better than his.
I'm not saying anything though.
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.


wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death - TML
Jawooooooooooo
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« Reply #74 on: 12 July, 2007, 04:51:32 pm »

He has a story?
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