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Fuuka Yamagishi
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Yep.
http://newssbb.smfforfree3.com/index.php/board,35.0.html
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.
wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death
- TML
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12 July, 2007, 11:00:08 pm »
umm, that's bizzle's story.
I quoted HousecallDoc.
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sorry, I got confused.
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
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Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.
wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death
- TML
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13 July, 2007, 06:29:27 pm »
...
Eh, good enough...
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17 July, 2007, 01:35:53 pm »
added a little more to chp. 8...
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17 July, 2007, 09:31:24 pm »
YAY! MORE STORY! MAKE MORE NAO!
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21 July, 2007, 12:52:01 pm »
*has finished chp 8*
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21 July, 2007, 12:57:52 pm »
Woo! Exciting!
I love lounge fights.
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
Quote from: Jawo'
Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.
wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death
- TML
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21 July, 2007, 01:10:06 pm »
*reads new addition*
YAY!
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21 July, 2007, 02:35:03 pm »
Quote from: I_Like_Cheese on 21 July, 2007, 12:57:52 pm
Woo! Exciting!
I love lounge fights.
there really wasn't much of one there....
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Fuuka Yamagishi
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Close enough.
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This is an intense, heart pounding adventure! | Internet Antagonist, Prince Silly, The Bazle
Quote from: Jawo'
Stop riding my crotch, please. I don't even know who you are.
wat why are my fruit fighting i dont even get back in the fridge or meet a blendery death
- TML
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23 July, 2007, 05:54:04 pm »
I still can't wait for the next installment!
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23 July, 2007, 05:58:08 pm »
I'll get to it soon.
I will be busy establishing my name again in GF as well...
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23 July, 2007, 06:02:25 pm »
'kay.
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24 July, 2007, 01:54:53 am »
You could've asked me for TPSBian knowledge, Jawo. >_>
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