Hey, Jawo. Just to let you know, I've changed into a human-like dark knight instead of a kirby-like form. If it interferes at all with the story, then just keep it in the old way. I'll post a picture of what I look like now soon.
Anyways, it just keeps getting better. I can't wait for the next update.
It won't make a difference...
I portray everyone in a human-like fashion, anyway.
I highly appreciate being included in your story, Jawo'. =D
~JudgmentAngel and Adol_the_Red look at each other.
Adol: Uhh, rock-paper-scissors for it?
XD
Yea, I thought that one was worth chuckling over. ^_^
I have only one suggestion: Somehow put this in the story.....
"*And then *Whoever* made him bite the curb.*
'You murdered them.....YOU KILLED THEM ALL!!' said *Whoever*.
Bad Guy:'Heh....I just wanted some extra cash, that's all.'
**Whoever* lifts his foot*
Bad Guy: 'Wait, don't you want to hear my last words?!'
*Whoever*:".........I just did."
If you can fit that in somewhere, I'm sure it woud help.
I.....don't think that will work.... >_>
You're right, it would