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« Reply #15 on: 13 August, 2007, 05:57:34 pm »

This chapter was much too short. ANOTHER ONE! NA0!
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« Reply #16 on: 13 August, 2007, 09:57:03 pm »

Indeed.
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« Reply #17 on: 15 August, 2007, 02:01:01 pm »

Fine. Spoiled, ungrateful little... grumble, grumble.

Chapter 7: From Tails to Melissa

Tails calmly watched Amy running back and forth between the bed and the closet, laying out his next outfit. Amy had already changed him out of his Rouge costume, and he was sitting there wearing nothing but the underwear.
He took a glance at what they were, and recognised them instantly: an orange dress with a white collar, white socks, yellow and orange shoes, and white gloves with buttons on the cuffs. Tails sighed, having resigned to his fate, as he saw that she was going to dress him up in Cream's outfit.

"Found it!" his tormentor's voice rang out, as she returned with a blue ribbon. "Now give me your foot, Melissa."

Tails raised his foot, allowing Amy to slip the white sock on. Before Amy could tell him to, he raised his other foot. Amy smiled and slipped the other sock on, before Tails stood up, ready for the dress.

"Wow, Melissa." said Amy with a smile. "You seem to be enthusiastic!"

Tails forced a smile. "...yeah."

Apparantly not noticing the uneasiness in his voice, Amy beamed at him and picked up the dress, but after a moment's hesitation, handed it to Tails rather than putting it on him.

"Here you go! I'll let you put it on yourself."

Tails took the dress uneasily, as Amy headed to the door. "If you have any trouble with anything, I'll be in the living room!" she said with a smile.

Tails looked at the garment in his hands, and slipped it up over his head before pushing his arms through the armholes. He then slipped the shoes on, and clipped the gloves. He glanced at himself in the mirror, before picking up the ribbon and tried to tie it in the way Ceam always had it. However, it proved too fiddly, and he began to leave the room to find Amy, trying his hardest all the while.

Amy looked up, noticing Tails trying to tie the ribbon.

"Trouble, Melissa?" she asked as she got up. "No problem, I can get it!"

She walked over to Tails and did the ribbon expertly. "There you go, Mel! Now then..." she took a step back to see Tails in all his feminine glory, and let out a squeal.

"Oh, Melissa! You look great dressed as Cream!" Suddenly, a look came over Amy's face. The kind of look your sister gets when you've lost a bet with her. Yeah, that look.

"In fact..." she said, as a smile crept over her face. "...in fact... come with me!" and with that, she immediately grabbed Tails and dragged him back to her room.

What followed next was a blur for Tails. Next thing he knew, he had been stripped of his Cream outfit, and was standing in front of Amy wearing nothing but a simple white bra and panty set. Amy handed him a white tanktop and a pair of jeans with a floral pattern on them.

"Put these on, Melissa! And I've left some shoes out for you, so you can wear them when you're done." she said, as she left.

Tails, doing as he was told, pulled the tanktop on, followed by the jeans. He glanced over at the chair in the corner, and saw a pair of black Mary-Janes. Those must be for me, he thought as he walked over and put them on.

Just as he was doing the last buckle, Amy returned, carrying a red handkercheif and a brown wig. He began to get up, but Amy ushered him down.

"No, don't bother getting up! Just close your eyes!"

Tails shut his eyes, but not before catching a glimps of Amy picking up a brush. He felt Amy placing the wig and brushing it, and then he felt her... tying it? He felt something soft brush over his face, before a loud "Okay, open your eyes!"

Tails opened his eyes, and Amy directed him to the mirror, and he saw what she had done. Tails was now a brunette, with his hair now tumbling down his back. The handkerceif had been tied into it, giving him a hairstyle similar to Launch's from Dragon Ball. Finally, Amy had applied some mascara and blush to his face, giving it a real girlish look.

Amy happily took his arm and slipped a black handbag (or purse) onto his elbow, completing the look. Tails had to admit, he was a very attractive girl.

"Um... Tails?" he turned to Amy, the source of the noise. "Do... do you remember how I promised not to take you outside unless you disobeyed me?"

Tails' face pailed, as he realised wha Amy ws saying. "Amy, no!"

"But Tails!" she cried. "You're so pretty! You have to show yourself off, I even did you up so much that no one will recognise you!"

Tails turned back to the mirror. He did look completely different...

"Where were you planning on taking me?" he asked.

"You know... Station Square Mall... to get you some clothes..."

"No." said Tails flatly.

"Oh, come on, Tails!" whined Amy. "Please please please please please please please please please please..."

"No!"

"...please please please please please please please please please please..."

"Amy, stop it!"

"...please please please please please please please please please please..."

"If I say yes, will you shut up!?"

"Yes. Please please please please please please please please please please..."

"ALRIGHT!" screamed Tails. "I'll go!"

"Yay!" 'yay'ed Amy, as she grabbed her jacket and handbag (or purse). "To the mall!"
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« Reply #18 on: 15 August, 2007, 06:13:10 pm »

Don't worry, I appreciate the effort you're making!

Good work David! This is a good story!
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« Reply #19 on: 15 August, 2007, 06:16:45 pm »

You guys are really obsessed with the cross-dressing thing
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« Reply #20 on: 15 August, 2007, 07:14:46 pm »

I'm not but I like this story for some reason...I'm 100% straight >.>
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« Reply #21 on: 16 August, 2007, 10:35:57 am »

NEW CHAPTER! BEFORE I AM FORCED TO KILL THIS MICROWAVED TAQUITO!
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« Reply #22 on: 16 August, 2007, 07:43:13 pm »

NEW CHAPTER! BEFORE I AM FORCED TO KILL THIS MICROWAVED TAQUITO!
NO!!! DOnt kill it!!
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« Reply #23 on: 16 August, 2007, 07:50:01 pm »

You guys are going to have to be paitent. David hasn't posted chapter 8 up on his Fanfiction.net account yet. So it's not like he can just copy and paste the chapter like he's done for the last 7 chapters.

*was snooping around*
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« Reply #24 on: 16 August, 2007, 07:56:03 pm »

That'z it!
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« Reply #25 on: 16 August, 2007, 08:31:22 pm »

That'z it!
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NOOOO!!!!!!!
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« Reply #26 on: 08 September, 2007, 07:46:19 pm »

This story has attracted my attention. I demand another chapter immediately.
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« Reply #27 on: 10 September, 2007, 02:00:23 pm »

*gets out another taquito*

I'LL KILL IT! I'M CRAZY LIKE THAT!
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« Reply #28 on: 10 September, 2007, 02:02:04 pm »

[doesn't care]
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« Reply #29 on: 10 September, 2007, 02:04:09 pm »

*eats taquito*
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
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