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Mario Must Die

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« Reply #15 on: 19 August, 2007, 04:18:56 pm »


ch-4.1
Back in Hyrule


Link-so mario killed your brother
Anna-*knods yes*
Link-We will take you with us to kill him!
Midna-Thats all we need another person for me to babysit!
Ganon-Its fine with me.
Danerd-Lets head out!

Ike-not so fast *charges and cuts anna in half*
Sigurd-nice on ike! *attacks midna*
Marth-*charges at link*
Protoguy-*charges at danerd*

Link-why are you here?
Marth-to kill you!
Link-*cuts off marths arm*
Marth-ahhhhhh
Link-*cuts off his head*

Sigurd-*slashing at midna and gets crushed by twili magic*
Danerd-*cuts protoguy in half*

Ike-oh no
Ganon-Oh yes*punches a hole through ike*
Link-Team lets head to mushroom kingdom!


*In dreamland*
Luigi-we finally made it!
Jr-its not here.....its a trap
Dedede-*appears with kirby and meta knight*
Kirby-HI
Meta knight-*attacks luigi*
Dedede-*attacks jr*
Adam-*appears and waits with kirby*
Luigi-*punches meta knight steals his sword and cuts dedede in half*
Jr-*slashes meta knight*
Meta knight-*gets killed by a combo at from luigi and bowser*
Kirby-*copies luigi*
jr-*blinds kirby opens up his mouth and luigi launches a fire ball into it killing him*
Adam-.........shoot i failed you master mario.....*luigi cuts him in half*
*team heads to yoshi island*


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« Reply #16 on: 19 August, 2007, 05:00:59 pm »

Ch-4.2-The battle with judg!
*they arrive at yoshi island and everyone is dead and judg is in the crowed of bodys*
Luigi-*sees 911 and his teams bodies along with link and his teams*
Jr-look judg has the mushroom!
Judg-*crushes it*
Luigi-no!
Judg-this is not a suitable battle field
*teleports them to the final destination field*
Judg-now *angel wings appear* you die!
Luigi-Judg.......*draws laser sword and charges at judg*
Judg-*lets luigi stab him* Death is just the begining *Laughing* *dies*
*they teleport in marios throne room*
Mario-So the time has come!
Luigi-jr...leave!
Jr-but...i have to avenge papa!
Luigi-NOW!
jr-*runs to bowsers castle*
Luigi-this is your final battle mario!
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« Reply #17 on: 19 August, 2007, 05:06:16 pm »

Pros:
I think it's a good story. I love how corruptedly evil you made mario, it's also funny at a lot of parts.
Cons:
The chapters and action scenes could be a little longer. ;_;
^WHS
otherwise good
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« Reply #18 on: 19 August, 2007, 05:11:34 pm »

Ch-5.1

The final chapter!


Luigi-*cracks knuckles*
Mario-*gets beam sword*
*so does luigi*
*they both charge at each other and slash until their swords dissapear*
*two smash balls appear and then they mix together to make one big one*
Luigi-So this is what decides our fate a ball!
Mario-*charges at luigi* i dont need that orb to defeat you!
Luigi-hmmm-*trips mario and pins him against the wall*
Mario-let me go *Kicks luigi off of him*
Luigi-*punches mario*
Mario-*kicks luigi*
Both-ahhhh thats it!
*they both run for the ultra-smash ball*
*they get to it at the same time*
Luigi-this is the end!
Mario-for you!
*they both activate their final smashes which are the same*
Mario-*gets caught on fire*
Luigi-*gets caught on fire*
*the castle starts to collapse*
Mario-so this is how it ends!
*while falling*
Luigi-im sorry it had to end like this!
Mario-goodbye....my brother
*they both reach the botom and die*
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« Reply #19 on: 19 August, 2007, 05:13:57 pm »

Epilogue!
10 years later


Toad-king Jr....there is someone here to see you!
Jr-send them in!
Huh??-Hello again!
Jr-no......it cant be!



The end???
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« Reply #20 on: 20 August, 2007, 05:28:53 pm »

XD Excellent!
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