A Whim of Hope: Subspace Emissary

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Re: A Whim of Hope: Subspace Emissary

« on: 17 March, 2008, 07:56:58 pm »

Very nice, the only thing that really bothered me was the very bland "Yah," at the end. Also, watch your grammar, other than that, it's great. Keep it up!


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