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BP Murder Mystery. YET ANOTHER SPATTACULAR STORY

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« Reply #30 on: 15 August, 2008, 12:33:40 am »

D.

A is just....too easy of a choice.
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« Reply #31 on: 15 August, 2008, 09:06:39 am »

>_>

The option that is A.
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« Reply #32 on: 27 August, 2008, 11:58:29 am »

I was HOPING someone would break the tie...


I'll get to work on this later today. <_<
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« Reply #33 on: 27 August, 2008, 12:03:40 pm »

D.

Muwahahaha!
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« Reply #34 on: 27 August, 2008, 07:56:25 pm »

Well, each choice was going to have a different result, and you'll see how this goes...


random: Just go into the holding room J--hey, wait, we left Spazzy in there...

Fooby: Oops.

LK: That was an accident..?

They enter the holding room, Spazzy looking like he now has rabies. He sees Judg coming in--Judg, who had accused him and wanted him tortured

Spazzy: YOU!

Judg: Uh...I--


Spazzy begins to nom on Judg's leg

Judg: GOOD CRAP

random and LK wrestle Spazzy outside and tie him up

Judg: Augh...that hurt...

Foobz bandages Judg's leg

Judg: Ahhrgh...

Fooby: Pain meds, dood. *feeds*

Judg: Ok, ok...sorry about that little spazzing out there.

Fooby: Why'd you do that and go all crazy at random?

Judg: Because...someone wanted me seeding out suspicion elsewhere...

Fooby: Who?

Judg: ...I...if...I can't tell you...it's like he's got eyes over everywhere here...

Fooby: Come on, just let me know! We'll get him.

Judg: Honestly...I would if I could, b--

The door is broken down. A mangled Spazzypeanut is thrown in, knocking Fooby off his chair. Spazzy and the heavy chair collapse on fooby, preventing him from getting up. Judg tries to get into a crouched position but is nailed with a small, pirate-like sword in the back. Judg cries out in pain and passes out.


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« Reply #35 on: 27 August, 2008, 08:01:47 pm »

About 2 minutes ago...

randomguy and LK set spazzy down in what was nub's bedroom, which he didn't share with anyone. They lock him in.

random: This is just ridiculous...too many people are going insane.

LK: This story writer needs to calm down.

random and LK hear some commotion nearby

random: ...We aren't armed. It's not safe to go down that way...let's take a different path.

random and luigikong walk down a darkened hallway, random in front. When random gets through, however, LK is nowhere to be found

random crouches lower to the ground, and tries to sneak away. However, a cloth is draped over his face. He tries to struggle, but the strength of the person holding him stays. He feels himself slowly losing consciousness...
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« Reply #36 on: 27 August, 2008, 08:11:39 pm »

Fooby threw off the chair. He looked at Spazzy - dead for sure. Completely forgetting about Judg and thinking there was a murderer on the loose, he dashed out the door.

He notices the entire mansion has grown very dark. That, coupled with it being night, prevents him from seeing all too well. As he turns the corner, he catches sight of a figure moving away. Taller than him, yes, but no match for the epic foobyzudzorz. Fooby sneaked up behind him...

~~~just a bit earlier~~~
LuigiKong had gotten too anxious of the commotion. Telling randomguy "Wait here" in a quiet voice, he slipped away and went downstairs. Not quite remembering where it had been, he wandered the halls a bit. He heard a noise behind him, and whipped around.

Fooby: ...LuigiKong?

LK: Foobs!?

Fooby: Where's random?

LK: *shrug* I left him upstairs. What's going on...?

Fooby: I haven't got a clue...Spazzy's dead, Judg might be dead, random...gah, this is terrible...


LK: We gotta get to random.

LK and Fooby find random--still out cold, but alive.

LK: I wonder why he was left like this...

Fooby: We have to tackle this in the morning. It's too dark now...


~END OF THIS CHAPTER!~
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« Reply #37 on: 27 August, 2008, 08:14:37 pm »

~IT IS NOW 7 AM BRAWLERS PARADISE TIME. NO MORE MURDERS OCCURRED DURING THE NIGHT.~



You guys are now free to question whoever, inspect wherever, or do anything.



Also, since random, fooby, and lk are injured, you guys are all now the detectives as well...sort of similar to an RP but not really. Basically, just post what you're going to do, who you're questioning, where you're going to inspect and if you want anybody to keep tabs on.



Other idea:


Do you guys want me to write the story parts in first person instead of third person?
 
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« Reply #38 on: 27 August, 2008, 08:39:11 pm »

First-person, but jump around.
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« Reply #39 on: 27 August, 2008, 09:57:51 pm »

Will do.


Now, what do you guys want to do?


(Some options could be inspecting where LK/random heard the commotion, questioning the detectives or anyone who might've seen the killer)

To make things easier, right now everyone alive in the mansion is at the breakfast table.




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« Reply #40 on: 28 August, 2008, 05:26:33 am »

>_> Replacing all the lightbulbs, and welding the switches on.
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« Reply #41 on: 28 August, 2008, 09:15:22 am »

*lights are now on in the mansion*


Upgraded-Form: Yay. Eating in the dark fails.
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« Reply #42 on: 28 August, 2008, 09:47:59 am »

Ask around "Did you see anything suspicious last night?"
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« Reply #43 on: 28 August, 2008, 11:32:32 am »

<Having difficulty holding his glass of water in his paws>

I love water!

<Eats some cookies at the breakfast table as well>
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« Reply #44 on: 28 August, 2008, 03:04:31 pm »

Hawk decides to do everything the old fashioned long winded way, asking each person in turn if they saw anything suspicious

Hawk: Ermine...did you see anything last night?

Ermine: *too busy nomming on cookie to bother with Hawk*

After tedious asking.

Triforce: No, but some guy downstairs was keeping me up till like, 3:00 AM. I dunno what he was doing.

Fooby: All I remember was the guy was pretty big. Though I can't judge with some sort of giant peanut flying toward me.

Ermine: *nom*

After some more asking, hawk discovers that what triforce heard was near or at where LuigiKong and random heard some commotion/noises.

What d'you do?

(Psst. Options include investigating areas that I have mentioned where death has occured or investigating rooms of suspects.
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