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« on: 21 June, 2007, 08:18:34 pm »

And if you want to be in it, tell me your trademark and/or personality.
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« Reply #1 on: 21 June, 2007, 08:27:57 pm »

I enjoyed it. Can't wait to see who was laughing...
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« Reply #2 on: 21 June, 2007, 08:52:54 pm »

Its great and can I be in. My trademark is probably saying Generic random insult or something
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« Reply #3 on: 21 June, 2007, 11:47:42 pm »

Yea, the story was great.
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« Reply #4 on: 24 June, 2007, 04:41:50 pm »

Space out quotes. Hit enter after someone says a quote. It makes it way easier to read.
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« Reply #5 on: 24 June, 2007, 05:07:32 pm »

I didn't think of that until after I posted it...
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« Reply #6 on: 24 June, 2007, 06:38:01 pm »

I agree with K_S, but the story is still good. You make Housecall seem unpredictable for some reason, just how Doctors are in real life. >_> <_< *runs*
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« Reply #7 on: 25 June, 2007, 09:56:46 pm »

I do not have a trademark, but can I be in the story?
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« Reply #8 on: 03 July, 2007, 09:30:48 pm »

I agree with K_S, but the story is still good. You make Housecall seem unpredictable for some reason, just how Doctors are in real life. >_> <_< *runs*

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« Reply #9 on: 08 August, 2007, 03:20:20 am »

It's kind of plotless.
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« Reply #10 on: 08 August, 2007, 03:53:35 am »

The plot is for him to escape...
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« Reply #11 on: 08 August, 2007, 10:26:12 pm »

Seems like he's just exploring randomly or something.
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« Reply #12 on: 09 August, 2007, 08:18:32 am »

He just got out of the room! He has no idea where he is, so he really can't just go straight for the exit, can he?  Tongue
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« Reply #13 on: 09 August, 2007, 09:56:44 am »

I agree with K_S, but the story is still good. You make Housecall seem unpredictable for some reason, just how Doctors are in real life. >_> <_< *runs*

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« Reply #14 on: 30 July, 2011, 08:08:33 pm »

It is perfect in every way.
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