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« on: 07 April, 2009, 01:37:19 pm » |
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Say Hi to Hawk. Yeah, the neck shading is odd. I know, I haven't bothered to correct it yet. You guys will be the first to see it if I do.
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« Reply #1 on: 07 April, 2009, 01:40:17 pm » |
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Hi Hawk
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« Reply #2 on: 07 April, 2009, 01:42:25 pm » |
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As with all of my stuff (Although this topic is for everyone, not just me.) constructive criticism is welcomed.
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« Reply #3 on: 07 April, 2009, 05:22:35 pm » |
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And Phoenix. She's got no clothes because I can't draw them yet. >_>
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« Reply #4 on: 07 April, 2009, 11:27:59 pm » |
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What's going on with the leg in that phoenix one? Or do I just not know enough about bird anatomy? >_>
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« Reply #5 on: 08 April, 2009, 08:46:57 pm » |
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Those visual effects on the first one are pretty damn slick compared to what I can do.
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« Reply #6 on: 16 April, 2009, 03:27:26 am » |
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What's going on with the leg in that phoenix one? Or do I just not know enough about bird anatomy? >_>
She's meant to be digitigrade, or having two knee joints, so that's a planned thing, no matter how bad it looks. Those visual effects on the first one are pretty damn slick compared to what I can do.
*chuckles* Thanks.
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« Reply #7 on: 16 April, 2009, 06:32:55 am » |
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Ah. You're artwork is good nonetheless; I didn't mean otherwise.
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« Reply #8 on: 16 April, 2009, 07:13:55 am » |
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No, I get what you're saying, but I see many faults in her. You most likely don't pick up on all the criticisms I make myself
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« Reply #9 on: 16 April, 2009, 11:45:04 am » |
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Well, I see some other stuff that kinda says "flaw" to me...
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« Reply #11 on: 16 April, 2009, 11:51:19 am » |
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The neck seems off center, though I could see how that might just be perspective with her torso being turned slightly. Also, her arms are too small for the rest of her body, not really proportional, and the right one is a bit goofy looking at the elbow.
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« Reply #12 on: 16 April, 2009, 12:03:10 pm » |
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Yup. They're all flaws. Especially the arms, they're too thin, as well.
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« Reply #13 on: 16 April, 2009, 12:15:47 pm » |
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I like how you used the lens flare in that first one
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« Reply #14 on: 16 April, 2009, 12:44:15 pm » |
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Thank you. Lens flares are something I use with a lot of caution, and try to make them look right.
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