Your figure is pretty good.... Although the guy to the right is a little awkward.... And his hand doesn't look right.... But I guess that comes from the fact he's sorta cut off.... Which leads me to say that the compostion is pretty bad.... But seeing as that's a notepad and such....
But it really good to see you draw something different....
Thanks. It wasn't intended to be a fight scene at first, I was just fooling around. Then I wanted to add things and ran out of room. <_<
I thought so.... It's a shame you didn't start on a bigger piece of paper....