I_like_Nonon
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That sounds cool, cool indeed.
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Gargravarr
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Thanks. I would've liked to have finished it properly, but enough is enough.
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Yeah, I get your feelings.
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Gargravarr
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Yeah.
Plus I'd really need Zeldafan to be online, and I wasn't going to hang around for god knows how long just to finish this.
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Mmhm. I'm sure she'll understand as well.
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Gargravarr
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Yeah...
Oh! Almost forgot. If this were an anime, I'd be very tempted to have this as the ending theme for the last episode of the arc.
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I_like_Nonon
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That would be a pretty cool ending theme.
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Gargravarr
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I thought so too. But I think it'd only work for the end of an arc, not just a regular ending theme.
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Hmm.... I think you have a point.
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NOTICEHaving been thinking it over for a while, I've come to the conclusion that this arc was really rather a poor effort. Quite a few events and characters are completely unnecessary, and those that aren't weren't written to the best of my abilities. The only things I'm keeping from this arc are as follows: - Etherion, though it would probably get a name change
- All conversations with Lana and Fate
- All events concerning Isaac
- All events concerning Nero
- All events concerning Lazarus, including ILS and Nero's deaths
- Isaac acting through a pawn, though the pawn would get a name change and possibly a redesign
All other events and characters are now to be considered non-canon as of 11:25 pm (GMT), November 1st, 2009, until I say otherwise. I might someday give the whole thing a rewrite so it's not such a blatant Matrix rip-off, but it's unlikely. That is all.
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Hawk_v3
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And for those of us who never read this 'cos we weren't included?
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Gargravarr
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I don't know about anyone else, but I thought you at least read parts of it.
Anyway, it still applies should you ever choose to read it in full.
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