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This is my story arc.

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« Reply #3225 on: 19 March, 2009, 02:45:59 pm »

That sounds cool, cool indeed.
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« Reply #3226 on: 19 March, 2009, 03:59:36 pm »

Thanks. I would've liked to have finished it properly, but enough is enough.
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« Reply #3227 on: 19 March, 2009, 04:01:08 pm »

Yeah, I get your feelings.
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« Reply #3228 on: 19 March, 2009, 04:02:21 pm »

Yeah.

Plus I'd really need Zeldafan to be online, and I wasn't going to hang around for god knows how long just to finish this.
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« Reply #3229 on: 19 March, 2009, 05:36:25 pm »

Mmhm. I'm sure she'll understand as well.
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« Reply #3230 on: 19 March, 2009, 05:44:11 pm »

Yeah...


Oh! Almost forgot. If this were an anime, I'd be very tempted to have this as the ending theme for the last episode of the arc.

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« Reply #3231 on: 19 March, 2009, 05:55:40 pm »

That would be a pretty cool ending theme.
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« Reply #3232 on: 19 March, 2009, 06:02:03 pm »

I thought so too. But I think it'd only work for the end of an arc, not just a regular ending theme.
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« Reply #3233 on: 21 March, 2009, 04:29:39 pm »

Hmm.... I think you have a point.
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« Reply #3234 on: 01 November, 2009, 05:25:15 pm »

NOTICE

Having been thinking it over for a while, I've come to the conclusion that this arc was really rather a poor effort. Quite a few events and characters are completely unnecessary, and those that aren't weren't written to the best of my abilities.

The only things I'm keeping from this arc are as follows:
  • Etherion, though it would probably get a name change
  • All conversations with Lana and Fate
  • All events concerning Isaac
  • All events concerning Nero
  • All events concerning Lazarus, including ILS and Nero's deaths
  • Isaac acting through a pawn, though the pawn would get a name change and possibly a redesign

All other events and characters are now to be considered non-canon as of 11:25 pm (GMT), November 1st, 2009, until I say otherwise.

I might someday give the whole thing a rewrite so it's not such a blatant Matrix rip-off, but it's unlikely.

That is all.
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« Reply #3235 on: 01 November, 2009, 06:27:38 pm »

And for those of us who never read this 'cos we weren't included?
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« Reply #3236 on: 01 November, 2009, 06:32:18 pm »

I don't know about anyone else, but I thought you at least read parts of it.

Anyway, it still applies should you ever choose to read it in full.
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