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Short Story: A Hero in the Making (100% Complete)

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« on: 15 October, 2007, 12:01:14 pm »

Saru: Watch closely, because I'm only going to show you once.

Blue: What are you talking about

Saru: This.

*Saru makes a quick slash at the air*

Blue: What...nothing happened...

Maylene: What was that all about?

*Just then, Blue is inflicted with a gaping slash wound across his chest. The force of the impact causes blood to spew all over*

Blue: Guuuaaaaagggggh!!

Maylene: Blue! What...what happened? How did he do that!?

Saru: It's a secret sword technique. Using my energy from within, I can slash anything, near or far, without even making direct contact.

*Blue falls to his knees from the pain*

Blue: *panting* I....I...I can't...

Maylene: Come on, Blue! It's not over! Pull yourself together!

Saru: Yeah, better do it quick. Or else you won't survive this next attack.

*Saru slashes at the air once again for the final attack*

Blue: It's over....I'm finished...

Maylene: Blue! No, don't say that! Please, you have to keep going!

Saru: Too late.

*Blue is inflicted with another slash wound across his chest. Blue then falls unconscious from the pain and loss of blood*

Blue: ...

Maylene: No! Blue, wake up!!

Saru: Can't you see? It's over. He lost.

*Saru sheathes his sword and walks over to Blue*

Saru: Hmph, is that all there is? No more resistance? None? I expected much more from you.

Blue: ...

Saru: And to think that I had actually thought you'd beat me. I guess I was right afterall. You're strong, but nowhere near strong enough. You'll never defeat me.

Maylene: You're wrong! Blue is strong enough! He can beat you!

Saru: Well he still has yet to prove this. Until he can get up and face me once again, I guess he will remain to be nothing but....a failure.

*Saru's words echo into Blue's unconscious mind*

...a failure....a failure....a failure.....a failure.....a failure....a failure....

*Those words spark new feelings into Blue. Not of determination, but of anger and rage*

Blue: No! I'm not a failure!!!

Saru: I'm done here. It's time I left.

*Maylene looks over to see Blue's body exploding with blue energy*

Maylene: Wha..what? Blue?

Saru: Hn!? What is this!?

*Blue quickly springs back to his feet and glares at Saru*

Blue: I'm not....a failure!

Saru: (He looks at me...with eyes full of hate. This power, isn't from his will and determination, it's from pure anger. Most...interesting..)

*Saru unsheaths his sword once again*

Saru: Then come on. Prove to me that you're not a failure. I'm still waiting.

Blue: Here I come!!!
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