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Story 3: Blue and the Origin of the Goddess. (100% Complete)

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« on: 13 July, 2007, 11:10:58 pm »

Okay, so I figured I'd try and start up the story again. Not quite sure what I'm doing yet, so I'm just going with a prologue. Now then...

Once again, we join our hero, Blue, 4 years after the Solaris crisis that was erased from history. Now, in the new world, he lives in the town of Geldrar, with the young swordfighter, Leon, and his older sister, the cleric Ari.

Blue, now 21 years old, has become a full fledged Archsage, a master of the magical arts. He has blossomed into a handsome man and is renowned as the hero of the town, saving the citizens from various thieves and other criminals.

Leon, 15, and Ari, 20, are Blue's best friends and are regared as his foster family. Just ten years prior, they took him into their household and he has been living with them since. The three of them share a very close bond.

Now we begin the story once again, as Blue and Leon are returning from the market, taking care of various chores that Ari provided them...

Blue: *carrying several bags of food* Agh, okay. We're almost there. Man, these bags are heavy.

Leon: *carrying several more bags than Blue* Ah, you're just so weak. This is no problem at all. Maybe you should put down the books and do some actual training.

Blue: Hmph, the brain is a muscle too, Leon.

Leon: Yeah, but you can't kick anyone's butt with it.

Blue: Hmm, that's not quite true.

Leon: Is that so? I'll believe it when I see it.

*just then a scream is heard coming from the direction of the gang's house*

Blue: Huh? That sounded like Ari!

Leon: She must be in trouble! Let's hurry!

Blue: Right!
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« Reply #1 on: 13 July, 2007, 11:50:00 pm »

ah...so you did decide to do another

*looks at you expectantly
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« Reply #2 on: 14 July, 2007, 01:26:21 am »

*Blue and Leon run forward to find Ari being cornered by two bandits*

Ari: Ah! Get away from me!

Bandit 1: Heh heh heh, come now, lass. Just hand over your gold and we'll let you go.

Bandit 2: Yeah, we wouldn't want to mess up that pretty face.

*Leon yells out*

Leon: Hey!

Bandit 1/2: Huh?

Leon: If you know what's good for you, you'll leave her alone.

Bandit 2: And just what do you think you're gonna do, pipsqueak?

Bandit 1: Careful, that magic hero guy is with him.

Blue: Yeah, and this magic hero guy will make you regret being born if don't take off right now.

Bandit 2: I don't care who you are! I'll still put an ax in your head! Rah!

*Bandit charges at Blue and swings, but he misses*

Blue: *sigh* And I even warned you first. Oh well.

*Blue cast a high level wind spell. Green air waves begin to circle around the bandit and then they converge, causing an explosion of wind, killing the bandit*

Bandit 2: Argh...*dies*

Leon: Quick, Ari! Come over to us!

Ari: Okay!

*Ari runs over to Blue and Leon*

Blue: Are you okay, Ari?

Ari: Yeah, I'm fine. I'm not hurt.

Bandit 1: Ah! You're no normal man!

*Bandit backs away and whistles. 2 more bandits come out from the alleyways ready to fight*

Bandit: Har, now let's see you take us.

Blue: Hmph, I don't have time for this. Ari, stay behind me.

Ari: Right.

Leon: Quentin, I'll help too!

Blue: Okay then, maybe then we can wrap this up faster.

Bandit 1: Ha! It's just the two of you against the 3 of us. You're outnumbered! Do you really think you can beat us?

Blue: We'll just have to see, now won't we? Come Leon.

Leon: I'm ready.

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« Reply #3 on: 14 July, 2007, 11:22:59 am »

Was i killed off in the last story?
I wasnt sure...
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« Reply #4 on: 14 July, 2007, 07:28:58 pm »

Was i killed off in the last story?
I wasnt sure...

No, you didn't die. Zeldafan and her gang found you unconscious and got you some help. Then that was pretty much it for you.
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« Reply #5 on: 14 July, 2007, 07:34:25 pm »

Bandit 1: So you DO intend to take us on! Fine, then you'll regret it. Go ahead, mate. Take out the boy.

Bandit 3: It'll be my pleasure.

*Bandit steps forward and fires an arrow at Leon*

Leon: Here it comes!

*Leon skillfully blocks the oncoming arrow with his sword*

Leon: You're gonna have to do better than that!

*Leon springs forward and double slashes the Bandit*

Bandit 3: Rats, ugh....*dies*

Bandit 1: Agh! How could you let a boy defeat you!? Alright then, go matey. You take him out!

Bandit 4: No problem.

*Bandit swings his sword at Leon's arm. Leon just barely gets away, but he is nicked in the arm*

Leon: Agh...darn it.

Bandit 4: Heh heh, you're not so tough.

Blue: Leon, watch out.

*Blue casts a fire spell. A blast of fire bursts upon the bandit's chest, defeating him*

Bandit: Ergh...*dies*

Bandit 1: No! How could you defeat my crew!?

Blue: This is your last chance. Run away now and I promise I won't hunt you down.

Bandit 1: Never! I never run away! Take this!

*Bandit boss brings his ax down on Blue, but Blue wraps himself in a magic aura, thus causing the ax to deal no damage*

Bandit 1: That's not possible!

Blue: I gave you a chance, and you didn't take it! Now you die!

*Blue casts a Thunder spell. A bolt of Thunder strikes down on the Bandit boss, defeating him*

Bandit 1: Guh, where did I...go wrong..*dies*

Blue: Well then, that takes care of that.

Ari: Quentin, Leon, you both did so well.

Leon: Thanks, Ari. Agh...

*Leon grasps his wound*

Ari: Leon, you're hurt. Come here, let me heal you.

*Ari uses her heal staff to mend Leon's wound*

Ari: There, that should do it.

Leon: Ah, much better. Thanks Ari.

Ari: Sure, it's my job. Just be careful from now on. I won't always be here to clean you up.

Leon: Yeah yeah, I heard it before.

Blue: Well then, let's head home, shall we?

Ari: Wait! Where are my groceries!?

Leon: Uh oh....

Blue: Uuuhh....well...

*They all look back to see the bags of groceries laying on the ground*

Ari: Oh well. I guess now you have to go back to the market and get some more.

Leon: Awwwww...
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« Reply #6 on: 14 July, 2007, 07:56:07 pm »

*The next day*

*Blue and Leon are outside walking amongst the civilians in the market, when they overhear two women sharing the local gossip*

Woman 1: So did you hear what happened?

Woman 2: You mean about the King?

Woman 1: Yes, he was assassinated the other day. And get this, they say the culprit was just a little girl.

Woman 2: Oh you don't say. What is the world coming to?

Woman 1: It's so bizarre! Just this morning, the Prince sent out various troops of soldiers to search for the girl. It's only a matter of time before they make it here.

Woman 2: Oh dear, I hope the little missy doesn't come here.

Leon: Quentin, did you just hear that?

Blue: Yeah, I sure did. Just what's going on here? Could this really be the work of a little girl?

Woman 1: The whole Kingdom is in an uproar. Baldovain has seen better days, that's for sure. Prince Sirios sure has his work cut out for him.

Woman 2: I feel sorry for the lad, losing his father in such a tragic manner.

Leon: I don't like the sound of this.

Blue: I don't either. Something's really fishy about this.

Leon: We're not going to get involved, are we?

Blue: Of course not. This is none of our concern.

Leon: Yeah, I guess you're right. But still, we should keep and eye out for that weird girl.

Blue: I suppose, but I still don't believe a little girl could be behind all of this.
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« Reply #7 on: 14 July, 2007, 08:18:38 pm »

*Meanwhile, in the Baldovain palace*

Royal Advisor Leadan: The searches are going smoothly, my Prince. The troops are covering several towns and cities everyday.

Prince Sirios: Any sign of the girl yet?

Leadan: None yet, sir. But I can assure you tha-

Sirios: Then shut your mouth. I don't want to hear anything out of you unless it's news of the dastard that killed my father.

Leadan: Yes, sorry sir...

Sirios: I'll never forget what I saw when I walked into my father's room. There he was, lying on the floor. Blood everywhere! And standing right next to his corpse, was the girl. Just standing there, staring at me, with those malevolent eyes!

Leadan: My Prince...

Sirios: I don't know why she did it, and I don't care! I just know that I want her dead!

Leadan: Prince, I will see to it that we d--

Sirios: Silence! Get out of my sight! And don't come back until they've found her!

Leadan: Yes sir...

*Leadan walks out*

Sirios: You'll pay. You'll pay for what you've done to my father. They'll find you, and then I'll destroy you. With my bare hands!

*Outside of Sirios' room*

Royal Advisor Lemia: The Prince, is he okay?

Leadan: Not at all. He's still terribly heart broken, and muddled with rage.

Lemia: What a pity.

Leadan: Yes, I can't stand to see him like this. And he was such a kind and caring young man.

Lemia: We need to find the culprit fast. We must see that the Prince returns to the kind young man he once was.

Leadan: Indeed. Even if we have to resort to..extreme measures.

Lemia: I agree, but not just yet. You know how he gets when we send him out on such...menial tasks such as these.

Leadan: I know, but we may need him to make this as quick as possible.

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« Reply #8 on: 15 July, 2007, 04:24:56 pm »

( Hope you don't mind if I show up now )

8 years.....it's taken us 8 years, but we've finally made it to Geldrar. We probably would have gotten here a lot sooner if you didn't get us lost, Tobi! *tosses bokuto at Tobi*

Tobi: Sorry sempai! But it's not all my fault....you were the one who insisted that we take out that horde of bandits we stumbled upon.

Yeah! But you're the one who decided to accidentally break that magical artifact in their base, which caused us to teleport all the way to another freaking continent! Bah! It doesn't matter. After 8 long years, we've finally made it here. Too bad Bob isn't here with us right now. It's weird. He kept on telling us to "Go to Geldrar!" but when we got close to Geldrar, he says he had something else to do. He better be right about there being some magical artifacts here.

*starts walking around aimlessly, with Tobi following*
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« Reply #9 on: 15 July, 2007, 06:53:29 pm »

Hmm...this is pretty good blue.
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« Reply #10 on: 15 July, 2007, 07:21:04 pm »

Hmm...this is pretty good blue.


Blue: Well, I guess that's that. Let's go home.

Leon: Yeah, I'm exhausted.

*At the house, Blue and Leon walk through the door*

Ari: Oh, hey guys. Look, we have a guest. Come out and meet my friends.

*Just then, a little girl with pale purple hair comes around the corner*

Girl: Hello.

Leon: *whispers* Hey Blue, doesn't she look kinda peculiar?

Blue: *whispers* I was thinking the same thing.

Ari: And just what are you boys whispering about?

Blue: Ari, a word with you please.

Ari: What is it?

Blue: Just where did you find that girl?

Ari: She was just walking through the town earlier. She looked lonely so I invited her in for some snacks. She's really nice. Why?

Blue: Well, didn't you hear the news about King Baldovain?

Ari: No. What happened?

*Blue and Leon tell Ari about the assassination and the search for the killer*

Ari: *gasp* My goodness! So you're saying that she may be the killer!?

Leon: Well, she does kinda fit the bill.

Ari: Why, that's nonsense. She's just a sweet little girl.

Blue: Well, I say we ask her a few questions. Just to be sure.

Leon: Cool, I'll do it.

*Leon goes over to the girl*

Leon: Okay girly! What did you d-

Girl: Shut your mouth. I heard everything you were talking about, and before you even dare to interrogate me, I'll say that I had nothing to do with the King's assassination.

Leon: *puzzled* Wha...?

Blue: Uh, then if you didn't do it, then what happened?

Girl: Fine, I'll tell you. Ahem, to begin, my name is Yune, and I don't know much else than that. But anyways, I've been living with the King in the palace for as long as I can remember.

Blue: But..if you've been staying in the palace with the King, then how come no one knows your identity?

Yune: Well, the King always kept me hidden. For fear that someone would find me. The King and me spent a lot of time together, more than he would spend with his own son. All I can remember is that one day I showed up in his quarters, and we've been spending time together since.

Blue: He probably did that to avoid his son finding out about you. It may have made him jealous.

Yune: Perhaps. Everyday, we would go take walks in the flower garden, and eat meals in his personal dining chambers. It was so much fun. But then, that all came to an end.

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« Reply #11 on: 15 July, 2007, 07:38:15 pm »

~~At an inn~~

Bah! I'm pooped. And I didn't find anything interesting here at all. I hope Tobi found something. *goes and sits at a table*

Tobi: *rushes in* SEMPAI! *runs over to the table* I...I heard something cool! Somebody told Tobi that there's this really powerful magic guy who protects the city! He might have some cool artifacts for you!

Good job Tobi! You're a good boy!

Tobi: Yay! Tobi is a good boy!

Alright! Hehehe, I suddenly feel energized. Alright Tobi! Let's go find us this magic guy!

*rushes out of the inn, with Tobi desperately following*
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« Reply #12 on: 15 July, 2007, 07:39:25 pm »

Good job Blue.
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« Reply #13 on: 15 July, 2007, 08:52:41 pm »

Blue: Yes, continue on, Yune.

Yune: Then, one night, while me and the King were studying our magic, a strange man broke through the window. I believe he was a mercenary, sent to kill the King.

Blue: A mercenary?

Yune: Yes. He came in and with no hestitation, he struck down the King in an instant. The mercenary then took one look at me, smiled, and then leapt out of the window. I..I couldn't do anything to help him. I was too scared.

Ari: Now now, you can't blame yourself for what happened. It wasn't your fault.

Yune: The King, as he layed there, dying, he told me to run. To run far away from here. In his last breath, he told me to never tell anyone the truth.

Leon: Why would he say that?

Yune: I honestly have no idea. But before I could make my way out, Prince Sirios barged into the room. He let out a most terrible howl of anguish. I could pratically feel his heart breaking. The only thing I could do was leap out of the window. And then, after a few days, I made my way here.

Blue: Hmm, that's some tale there.

Ari: Quite. But Yune, since you're innocent, what do you plan to do?

Yune: There's no way I can go back to the palace. I could never convince Sirios that I wasn't the one responsible.

Leon: But you can't keep running away! You'll end up dying eventually.

Yune: What choice do I have?

Blue: Ok, that's enough. It's too late at night for this. We'll discuss our plan of action in the morning. Yune, you stay with us.

Yune: Understood.

*Meanwhile...at the Baldovain Palace*

Leadan: My Prince..

Sirios: What is it this time, Leadan?

Leadan: We've recieved word that the girl has been sighted in the town of Geldrar.

Sirios: Really!? Alright then, dispatch a unit there immediately.

Leadan: Already taken care of, sir.

Sirios: Have them apprehend her and bring her to me, alive.

Leadan: Yes sir.

*The next morning*

Leon: Quentin! Quentin, wake up!

Blue: Huh? What's going on?

Leon: Look outside quickly!

*Blue looks out the window to see the town crawling with soldiers*

Blue: You've gotta be kidding me!

Yune: T-they're here, aren't they?

Ari: I-I'm afraid so.

Yune: I see. Just go ahead and turn me over.

Leon: What!?

Yune: Yes. Just turn me over to the soldiers. I don't want any of you to get into trouble.

Blue: Sorry, but that's not happening.

Yune: What? Are you crazy? You'll be killed if they find out you're helping me!

Blue: And I don't care. I'm not about to let an innocent girl get killed. You're staying right here. They'll leave eventually.

*Outside the house*

Soldier: Now, are you sure you saw the girl go in there?

Man 1: Yes! I saw her! Just yesterday the woman living in that house took the girl inside. I'm willing to bet she's still in there.

General Ved: Heh heh, you heard the man. Surround the house.


Leon: Uh oh. Quentin, we've got trouble.

Blue: What's going on?

Leon: We'll, it seems we've been ratted out. Someone told the soldiers that Yune was in here!

Blue: No way! Argh, I can't believe it!

Ari: Quentin! What do we do now?

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« Reply #14 on: 16 July, 2007, 07:52:06 am »

~~Outside of Blue's house~~

Ummm...Tobi....are you sure this is that magic guy's house?

Tobi: Yup! Tobi got very good instructions! This is it!

Tobi.....it's surrounded by soldiers. And something tells me they're trying to get in. Arg! How am I supposed to get any good magic artifacts now!? *punches a random wall, causing it to slightly crack*

Tobi: Ummm....sempai....are you alright?

Yeah, just a bit upset. This is way too troublesome....still, I was really looking forward to meeting this magic guy. I don't know....but I have this weird feeling. Tobi....we're going to wait out here and see what happens. Though I suppose we should get out of the way. *jumps up onto a nearby roof, and Tobi follows*
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